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"Thanks." she said, and half-smiled at him.


message 10602: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "No problem." Declan grinned lopsidedly at her


message 10603: by [deleted user] (new)

She almost sighed. He looked cute when he grinned like that, and it almost made her forget Zack.


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"Oh, no!" Gwen exclaimed. "Is she alright?"


message 10605: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((srry my sisi had the comp))

"So I'll see you around yeah?" Declan said nodding

"Yeah, when isn't she?" Rife asked smiling


message 10606: by [deleted user] (new)

"Yeah..." Dani said faintly.


message 10607: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Declan gave her another smile then left.


message 10608: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem sat on the edge of her bed and picked at the loose threads on her cut off jeans.


message 10609: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy walked in to find Patrik on the cusp of sleep, she smiled and then slowly and silently left.
((Hey want to send our ladies to the rune room again?))


message 10610: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oh yes! Then they can talk to their moms!))

She laid back against the pillow and counted the tiny holes in her ceiling.


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Dani turned the other way and walked home.


message 10612: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes! Sweet this'll be awesome bc we need answers and bc Emmy's just gonna pass out right in the middle of the hallway :P I'm evil to her...))

In between one step and the next Emmy's vision began to blurr and double. She leaned against the nearest wall for support. Sagging, she slid to the floor and was gone before she hit the floor.

Declan dissapeared before he hit the shadows.


message 10613: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((haha! Niiiice!))


Salem slipped into sleep and found herself in the room from before. "Oh hell no!"


message 10614: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani went home and sat sown at the edge of the bed, her was spinning. He was back. He couldn't be back. Why was he back? Dani shook her head, shook the thoughts about Zack away and turned her thought to the messenger...


message 10615: by Hannah (last edited Jun 09, 2010 05:49PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((thank you! :D))

Emmy whirled and glared at the walls
"You're kidding me!" She yelled
"Actually not." Her mother said calmly "Why do you hate this place so much?" She asked genuinely curious
Emmy rolled her eyes
"It's like a cage I can't escape." she growled


message 10616: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem heard Emmy and groaned. "Great," she mumbled as she slogged over.


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((Hannah...))


message 10618: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Srry Erica.))

Declan appeared in a shadowed road and turned up the neck of his jackett. He bent his head and walked down the street like he had many times before.

Emmy looked up at the sound of Salem's voice
"So you got us both again?"
Salem's mother came forth as if the shadows condensed and made her
"Emmeline, you two being apart for so long made this room, well not what it used to be."
Emmy's mother spoke again
"And you being captured and tortured didn't help your mental state any."
"Oh and the fact that the Shadows needed me to get into this room to use the power had NOTHING to do with it?" Emmy asked sarcastically


message 10619: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hey Hannah...I have a tentative idea. But we need at least two new guy characters. One each. But they need to be bad..really bad.))


Salem looked over at her mother. She wished she could see her more often if even if she was confusing. "What do you mean, mother?"


message 10620: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ok I'm good at bad. How about Josiah and Damien?))

Salem's mother looked at her daughter and smiled softly
"Rosaline. Just tell the girl. they need to know anyway." Emmy's mother told her.
Emmy raised an eyebrow
"tell Salem what?"


message 10621: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments (( Thanks, which name do you want to use?))


Salem looked between them. "Yeah..tell me what?.."


message 10622: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((brb))


message 10623: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok I thought you needed two guys? but I love Josiah))

"Aloysia, do you seriously believe that they should know this?" Rosaline asked looking at her.
"Yes, Rosaline I do." Aloysia said firmly
"Then spill!" Emmy yelled her eyes turing silver. She had no idea where the anger at her mother was comming from but it was there and it was powerful.


message 10624: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know. I wanted to know who you wanted to play. So you want to play Josiah?))

"Emmy calm down first please," Salem pleaded. She just wanted to know.


message 10625: by Hannah (last edited Jun 09, 2010 06:29PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes I'll play him :D So what is your plan oh great one? ))

Emmy shook her head quickly and her eyes faded back to black slowly.
Rosaline smiled knowingly
"See Aloysia? You're daughter is too volitile,even she knows it."
Emmy balled her hands to fists at her side
Aloysia sighed
"Emmeline." She implored


message 10626: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo. I'm not great. As I said it's tentative..and also really small. But I was thinking the guys could be spies.))


"Are you guys ever going to tell us?" Salem said, getting upset.


message 10627: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh I like it.))

Aloysia nodded
"And your daughter is Impatient, so leave my daughter alone Rosaline." She said at her then she turned her attention to Salem and Emmy
"The truth is, you two won't make it past your next birthday."
Emmy's eyes widened
"And what you did with Patrik today Salem? That was supposed to have killed you both."


message 10628: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Thank gawd.))

Salem's eyes darkened. "What do you mean we won't make it past our next birthday? As in we die?"
After she'd calmed down a little bit she answered their question.
"I saved him."


message 10629: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Haha It'll be intense!))

"Yes. As in you die." Rosaline said evenly
"We know you saved him, that's the point. It should have killed you both what you did. But somehow, you all lived."
"I wonder why that is." Rosaline said silkily directing it at Emmy
"Yeah, it's my fault that Patrik and Salem lived. How could I have been so thoughtless? Salem saved him and it was a huge sacrifice on her part." Emmy growled


message 10630: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It'll be fun!))

Salem frowned. "No it wasn't Emmy. It wasn't a sacrifice. I didn't lose something without gaining something back...and why are you guys upset about us living?" she asked, glaring at the mothers.


message 10631: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((oh yes it will))

Aloysia sighed
"It's not that. It's the fact of what happens when you accedentally escape fate's clutches."
Emmy laughed
"When did you ever believe in fate?" she asked spitting out the word "You were more of a free will person."
ROsaline looked at Emmy
"You learn things here. Things that you can get when you accept the fact that you two are special and one of you needs to open the power of this room."
Emmy looked wary
"And which one of us would that be?"
Aloysia almost looked sad
"I think you two already know that."


message 10632: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Actually, we don't know...not exactly." Salem said angrily. "We have an idea but why don;t you just say it out loud. Confirm or destroy either way it sucks." she was pissed now.


message 10633: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rosaline smiled
"That's my girl."
Emmy sighed and looked tired and almost childish again
Aloysia looked at Emmy
"Yes, Emmy. It's you. Salem isn't-"
"Shut up." Emmy said deathly quiet
"What-?"
"I said Shut Up." Emmy repeated in the same tone.


message 10634: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I want to hear it," Salem said fiercely. "Do you hear me? I want to effin' know!"


message 10635: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You aren't enough!" Emmy yelled "You don't have enough Potential, you aren't enough of a Shadow to use the power of this room to it's full extent. Isn't that right?" Emmy sneered at her mother "Salem isn't dark enough, she has too much of a good side, a consience(sp?). Right?" She laughed desperately and raked a hand through her hair
"Emmeline-" Aloysia started
"I just want to know one thing. Was anything you told me about what happened to you true? Was-" Emmy made a noise that killed the words in her throat
Rosaline went on when Aloysia could not
"You're right Emmeline. Salem's not enough, as you say."
"You never answered me mother." Emmy growled
Emmy could tell by the look in her mothers eyes that she didn't want to.


message 10636: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Answer her," Salem said darkly. "What I did with Patrik goes both ways."


message 10637: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I just realized that I'm such a drama hog. So I'm sorry for that XP)) ((You should try to vaporize Aloysia))

Emmy looked at her mother darkly and when Aloysia spoke the sound of Emmy's world crashing in around her was almost audible
"You have to understand Emmeline, I did what I had to do. There was no other way, I needed to get your father back. I couldn't loose him, I just couldn't. When he was captured on that raid..."


message 10638: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((No it's okay. *laughs* Salem likes to stick up for Emmy. It's a sister thing.))

((kay, and which mom is which...I'm kidna confused?))


message 10639: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok *Whew!* I love that they are like sisters :D))

((Aloysia is Emmy's mom and Rosaline is Salem's mom. Ik it is pretty confusing))

"You gave yourself in for him" Emmy finished "You willingly gave yourself in"
"Emmeline, it was more than that." Aloysia said eyes pleading with her to understand "I had a history, a history that your father was going to pay for. I needed to try to save him from that."


message 10640: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((As do I. Kaykay. I've got the moms down now. :P))


"You didn't just give yourself," Salem said quietly but intensely. "You gave your daughter. Did you even think of her? Did you think of what they'd do to her?"


message 10641: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ok good))

"I didn't know about her." Aloysia said quietly "If I had-"
"if you had I would still be in the same exact position as I am now." Emmy said each work filled with poison "You knew that you were pregnent with me before they even started the experiments. You didn't even do anything."
"I thought, I was immune to the Shadow weapons, it stood to reason that you would be too.."
"That's such bull. You didn't think!" Emmy yelled at her


message 10642: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's vision clouded and she felt the energies of the three women in the room with her. Emmy's was flaring like her own was but perhaps more and Salem's own mother was surprisingly calm. But Salem didn't care, she was looking at and feeling Aloysia's energy.

She let go and pulled on Emmy's mother's energy. "Bitch."


message 10643: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Aloysia's knees buckled and she smiled
"You're getting better at that." She managed to get out
"What happens to me once I unleash the power of this room?" Emmy asked suddenly
"You hear them whispering to you? They nag and pull at you, even when your awake." Rosaline said smoothly
"How do you know that?" Emmy hadn't told anyone that much


message 10644: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem gave Emmy a smoldering look. "Even I knew that. Why would your stupid mother not know?"


message 10645: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shook her head
"My mother wasn't the most perceptive person alive. She wouldn't know if I screamed it in her face. But Salem you can hear them right? It's like music in an IPod headphone"


message 10646: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah and it pisses me off." She said with a smirk.


message 10647: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "But Salem the question is, how deos your mother know that about me? And another question could you walk around the room and pick out the most powerful runes here?" Emmy looked around the room and then looked at her mother again
"What exactly did they do to me?"
Aloysia looked at her
"With what they did and what they just did to you when you were captured, you're a walking time bomb."


message 10648: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem scowled. "Things can change," she mumbled to Aloysia, taking control and letting go of her energy very abruptly. "And Emmy I don't know."


message 10649: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Aloysia shook her head and said
"No Salem, things, like people, don't change. They are what they are and that's the end of it. Emmeline and you have a set fate, as does everyone else in that house that you all are living in. How do you think it's so hard to get there? It's in between worlds Salem, you know who put it there? Emmeline did, by accident."
Emmy had stopped listening and started running her hands over the walls.


message 10650: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's dangerous gaze never left Aloysia's face. "People do change. Life is a choice. We all choose who we are in the end: whether we go for gold or settle for the least," she spat. "Fate is bullsh*t! There is no fate, there is no karma!" her energy flared silver, with Emmy's black sparks.
"God bless your soul 'cause you're hellbound if you can't figure that out!"


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