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message 10451: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv met him half way and closed the remaining distance between them.


message 10452: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Their lips met and sparks flew. Well...their lips did meet and sparks did fly, they just happened to not be results of the same thing. Silver and black sparks exploded from the window of Salem's bedroom.


message 10453: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy jumped up
"What the?" She asked the air, and maybe Patrik. But that wasn't the point. She took off and Patrik was close behind her.

Liv smiled against Blaze's lips and kissed him back as if she would never kiss him again.


message 10454: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze put his arms around her and pulled her closer.


Waverley screamed.


message 10455: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv moved closer to him.

Emmy ran right past her btu Patrik stopped and knelt, not without dificulty, down in front of the screaming girl
"Hey sunshine. What is it?"

Emmy burst into Salem's room.


message 10456: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ummm.. Any way to join?))


message 10457: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I think so...))


message 10458: by [deleted user] (new)

((How?))


message 10459: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It hurts," Waverley cried out. "There's fire in my heart!"

Salem was on the floor, arms held tight across her chest. Tears slid down her face silently. The room was alight in sparks of all colours.

Blaze grinned.


message 10460: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((I have no clue... ))

Patrik looked confused then figured it out
"Shit Salem." he said bolting, he owed Salem his life.

Emmy went down beside her
"Salem." She shook her "Salem, what happened?" Emmy looked up at all the sparks and wondered how to silence them. They made a loud noise as the bounced off the confines of the room and the noise hurt Emmy's head more the longer she stayed.

Liv's kisses didn't relent, not untill the need for oxygen was dire.


message 10461: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yep...))


message 10462: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((just jump in. I have a Character Named Rife. He's not doing anything, your character can bump into him...))


message 10463: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ok, thanks.))

Dani was walking down the street, trying to get home as fast as she could.


message 10464: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((welcome))
Rife wasn't watching where he was going and he was just zoning out as he walked


message 10465: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani ran into someone. "Sorry." she
mumbled without looking up.

((yay!! Haha I'm dancing in the pouring rain... It's quite fun.))


message 10466: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "S'ok." Rife said looking down at the girl

((Haha that's awesome!))


message 10467: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani looked up for a second and almost smiled, the biggest sign of happiness she'd shown in months.


message 10468: by [deleted user] (new)

((I know, right?))


message 10469: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife nearly smiled back
"Hi." He said
((lol yeah.))


message 10470: by [deleted user] (new)

((Ahhh it's raining with a sunset!!! Lol sorry, I like rain. And sunsets.))

"Hi." Dani answered softly.


message 10471: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((it's ok I love the rain))

"Do I know you from somewhere?" He asked eyes raking over her face.


message 10472: by [deleted user] (new)

((Haha sweet...))

Dani shook her head. "I don't think so..."


message 10473: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Nephilim wrote: "((I have no clue... ))

Patrik looked confused then figured it out
"Shit Salem." he said bolting, he owed Salem his life.

Emmy went down beside her
"Salem." She shook her "Salem, what happen..."


((sorry I disappeared.))

Waverley sat on the floor.


Salem couldn't speak-- everything hurt so badly.


Blaze sucked in a deep breath.


message 10474: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Annana Flambe du Mort (Erica) wrote: "((Haha sweet...))

Dani shook her head. "I don't think so...""


"oh OK." Rife said

Patrik stood in the door way staring at the dancing sparks.
"What in hell?"

Emmy was holding her head, the sparks were like the energy in the Rune room, they talked to her. Whispered mad secrets untill they got so loud it hurt her head
"Salem," Emmy said grabbing her arm and trying to get her out of there, she knew it hurt her more than it did Emmy. Ptarik walked in and grabbed her in a fireman's hold and walked her out.

Liv smil;ed brightly at him


message 10475: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani half-smiled slightly. "I'm Dani."


message 10476: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I'm Rife." He said shaking his shaggy brown hair out of his too green eyes.


message 10477: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments The sparks tried to follow them out of the room but Salem flicked her fingers at the doorway and they couldn't dance their way past the shimmering force there. Salem shook with her silent sobs.


Blaze grinned. "We just keep getting closer."


message 10478: by Hannah (last edited Jun 06, 2010 08:24PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy put her hands on either side of Salem's face gently making her look at her
What hurts the most? Patrik can help. Emmy asked in the softest voice that would still get attention

Liv laughed
"It's fine by me."


message 10479: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani smiled a little wider. "Hm. Your name sounds familiar. Who knows, maybe I do know you." she said and tucked a lock of her auburn hair behind her ear.


message 10480: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem blinked back further tears and clenched her jaw. My chest...my head. It's all in my head!


Blaze laughed along with her. "And by me as well."


message 10481: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife laughed warmly
"Maybe you do."


message 10482: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani half-smiled at him again. "Well, I gotta go, so... I'll see you around?" she looked at him.


message 10483: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I hope so." Rife nodded


message 10484: by Hannah (last edited Jun 06, 2010 08:34PM) (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Coffey Bridin Alistriona [Kenny:] wrote: "Salem blinked back further tears and clenched her jaw. My chest...my head. It's all in my head!


Blaze laughed along with her. "And by me as well.""


Emmy thought about that
I think it's the sparks. They were like the Rune room Magic. They whispered and screamed all at once at me. It hurts my head. I'll get Patrik to heal you. Emmy said softly and then nodded to Patrik who knelt beside her.

Liv smiled and twined her arms around his neck


message 10485: by [deleted user] (new)

"Me too." she said and smiled at him again before walking away.


message 10486: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem closed her eyes. But I don't get: those sparks were mine!


message 10487: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife smiled after her.

Not just yours, mine too. I don't know. It whispered at me and it like attacked my head, my memories my everything. it was weird. Emmy said as Patrik placed a hand on her chest.


message 10488: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem flinched back and cried out. Shit shit shit!


message 10489: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani rushed home to take care of her little siblings.


message 10490: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Patrik Stop." Emmy said forcefully
He withdrew his hand quick.

Rife went back to his place.


message 10491: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm- sorry," she gasped. "It- hurts."


message 10492: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know." Emmy said nodding
"We're just trying to help." helping didn't work so well when you had no clue what the hell was wrong.


message 10493: by [deleted user] (new)

That night, Dani walked to her brother's fridge. She pulled out a bottle and set it down on the table on front of her.


message 10494: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife walked by Emmy Patrik and Salem and up to his room.


message 10495: by [deleted user] (new)

Dani sat there, staring at the bottle for a few minutes. Then, sighing, she stood up and put it back in the fridge before going back to bed.


message 10496: by [deleted user] (new)

Gwen walked around her now empty mansion. Her father was in jail and the country was safe, for now. She was moving in with her grandmother, seeing as the house was too big for just her.
She decided to get out and walked down the street, bringing back memories of the people she used to know. Grant, Addalynn, Rife. What happened to Rife, he just came into her life and then disappeared. Actually, she was the one who'd disappeared. She wanted to find him again.


message 10497: by [deleted user] (new)

For once, Dani didn´t need to numb it out, because, for once, the memories weren´t quite as strong, the disturbia she lived in has subsided a bit. For once, she wasn´t thinking about Zack. She was too busy thinking about someone else. Someone she enjoyed thinking about.


message 10498: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem peeked through her lashes and up at Patrik, "I think- it'll- help." I'll try not to pull back.


message 10499: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ohh love triangle I like))

Rife sat back and then shook his head and started pacing around his room.

"I'll be careful." Patrik told her.
((srry I had to vaccumm))


message 10500: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's okay. I disappeared too.))


Salem just took a deep breath and then made a small waving gesture with her hands to tell him to go ahead.


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