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message 10351: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes! Starting NOW! ))

Emmy heard the intruders before she saw them. The massive influx of people screwed up her whole vision.


message 10352: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((awshomm!))

Salem blinked hard as the thoughts exploded into her head. "They're here!" she hissed.


message 10353: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hells yes!))

"Son of a bitch." Patrik said moving away from Emmy in an instant.
Emmy closed her eyes
"And there's a TON of them."


message 10354: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know," she grimaced. "I can't block them out."


message 10355: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I know, their power is like tweaking everything. But we gotta get our asses in gear." Emmy said going all fight mode in one second.


message 10356: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Now," Salem's eyes turned from molten to steel in an instant. "Let's go."

Ellis and Limerick were conversing with their crew members and they had Waverley who was screaming her head off.


message 10357: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded and Liv and Rife were flanking her and Patrik in a moments notice
"Torch and Cobra" Emmy informed them all
"Get your asses in gear, strike hard, fast, leave as little survivors as possible."
Liv and Rife nodded and left


message 10358: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem rolled her eyes even though she knew Emmy was only telling the others. She wondered why she hadn't seen this coming.


message 10359: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's eyes flashed to Salem's
Come with me.


message 10360: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Already on it sister. Salem was by Emmy's side in an instant.


message 10361: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy nodded and left silently
"No one saw this comming. Not even me, they must have known that we got kidnapped. they knew we got back." she practically growled


message 10362: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They did. I can hear that loud and clear. You know Em..it's funny..I didn't see this coming."


message 10363: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "You mean See see? Huh.. that's too weird." Emmy said slowly


message 10364: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know. It's like...like they have something we don't have.."


message 10365: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I think they do." Kher said in a smooth british accent as she punched Emmy in a fantastic right hook and sent her flying a few feet back
"Son of a bitch." Emmy said after she recovered from that hit she threw some fiery walls around Kher


message 10366: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Parker, laughing like the hyena he was shirting into, leapt at Patrik.

Salem tried to get to Waverley.


message 10367: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik skirted out of the way and stabbed at him with his ice dagger.

Emmy lept at Kher through the flames


message 10368: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Parker howled but kept up his fight.


Waverley was being held back by Hunter. Salem scowled. Of course.


message 10369: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik moved like a dancer, light an dswift. Making sure moves and powerful swings, he fought through all the minor people that flung themselves at him.

Emmy got another punch to the chest knocking the air out of her entire body in a second. Her eyes melted into silver and fire around them contracted, and funneled into Emmy's hand, which she put over Kher's heart and fried it.


message 10370: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Limerick attempted to fight Patrik.

Salem approached Hunter, a grim look on her face.


message 10371: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik knew this would happen and Patrik walked right up swinging.

Emmy moved onto the next person that was closest to her. She ended up killing a lot of people, leaving blood and fire in her wake


message 10372: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Limerick, as anyone should know, was all bark and slow bite.


Salem sent out a concentrated burst of power that exploded certain muscles and organs inside Hunter's body. He collapsed and Salem pulled Waverley away, holding her in one arm while she dealt the fatal blow to his chest.


message 10373: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik dispatched Limerick easily, he moved through the crowd of soliders, trying to find Emmy. He knew she didn't need his help, but he wanted her in his line of sight.

Emmy jumped over the pair of people that were rushing her, lighting the ground on fire as she did so.


message 10374: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem sent out another blast. A configuration that would do what she had done to Hunter, but to everyone within a fourteen foot radius. Only her friends would be safe from it.


message 10375: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik watched as people dropped like flies all around him. He stilled, catching sight of Emmy's copper hair, he moved through the battle field grounds.

Emmy sent out a massive heat wave, it rippled through the ground like an earthquake.


message 10376: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem found it amusing that she and Emmy had the same mindset today: the more out, the more down.


message 10377: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy looked up at the sound of Patrik's footsteps as he neared her. He smiled that oddly amazing lopsided smile of his and Emmy stared, always intreigued at how he could manage that in the midst of battle, covered in blood and gore and grime and still look sexy to her. That was when Parker came into view, by the time Emmy screamed out Patrik's name it was too late. A flash of black steel and Patrik was on his knees, blood already seeping through the material of his shirt.
"Patrik!" Emmy shreiked trying to get over to his side, but suddenly there were 20 men on her pushing her and trying to lash out at her.
In one flash of silver blinding light the men that surrounded her died and Emmy ran to Patrik's side.
She fell to her knees in front of him and grabbed the front of his shirt, she wasn't herself in this moment. She wished she could be anyone but herself,
"Patrik." She called to him "Hey." She said as he slowly opened his eyes to the sound of her voice
"Stay with me ok? Okay Patrik, hold on."


message 10378: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's next blast took out fifteen people from Torch and then she aimed a specific surge at Parker, making him explode. For a second she knelt down and whispered in Waverley's ear. She told the little girl to run to the house, that she would protect her while she did.

And so Salem kept her promise until the little one was inside.

Someone tapped on her shoulder.


message 10379: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy was crying, tears welled in her eyes and for the first time in her life she couldn't push them away.
"Look at me Patrik. You can't leave me. I can't lose you." She cried, she knew he could still hear her. There was an odd alertness that seemed to be there, but it was different than normal, and as each second ticked by, it dimmed
"I love you, I've always loved you. Even when you stole my sword and used it to cut up the fire wood. Remember that?" Emmy said in the same sob wracked voice.
She knew he loved her, he had loved her with all his heart since she had first met him. Just as she had, she had just never gotten to say it.
"I love you Patrik. So much." She whispered as the lights that lit his eyes faded and he sagged into her bloodied arms.
"No, Patrik." She said sitting with him for a minute, straoking his hair and wishing herself dead or him alive. Then she forced herself up and stood stock still as her body, covered in the essence of everything evil in the world, lit to an etheral silver that blinded everyone. Fire storms rained down on them all.


message 10380: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem focussed her own energy on protecting those that mattered most. Rife, Liv, Blaze, Teeghan, Avery, Waverley....Patrik. It wasn't easy, but as she watched the others around her die she foudn that she could steal their energies without touching them at all and she gathered as much as she could so she could keep it up.


message 10381: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's rage and greif wasn't picky about who got fried and who lived. She was just as happy to kill everyone within a 100 mile radius, she was planning on doing just that.


message 10382: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Emmeline! Salem shouted, putting enough force behind it that Emmy would have to hear. Most of their enemies were already dead and there wasn't much energy to steal. She needed Emmy to know when to stop so that Salem could let go of the protection shields.


message 10383: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments It wasn't enough to tear her attention away from her now single minded task. It was going to need more than some mental screaming to get her to stop. Every black tattoo on her body was pure silver as well as her eyes. Heat that ws reaching supernova around her, it radiated off of her in waves.


message 10384: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem ran over to where Emmy and Partrik's body were. She knelt on the grass beside him and wondered if what she'd done earlier with Emmy could be reversed. If she could send extra life energy into Patrik...she put a hand on his chest and a hand on his forehead and concentrated.


message 10385: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Then like a light that died everything stopped, the fire the heat the light. All off, in an instant, the silence that followed was earsplitting


message 10386: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's heart raced and all around Patrik there was a soft white glow that slowly expanded and got brighter.


message 10387: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy dropped her hand and it hit Salem's shoulder.


message 10388: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was so focussed, so lost in the power of it, that she didn't even feel Emmy's hand. The light soon encompassed all three of them there and there was the slightest of sounds and movements from Patrik. His eyelids fluttered and a breath was taken but he was far from healed.


message 10389: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy's hand gripped Salem's shoulder. She had power to spare at this second so she would gladly give some to Salem.


message 10390: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments It didn't even take a conscious effort for Emmy's power to join the fray. The light changed to reflect the two different colours: Emmy's white and such a pure power, Salem's as silver as her eyes. Tiny sparks danced along his wounds.


message 10391: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy just kept the power comming, it was as easy as calling fire or playing with it once she had it. She kept her eyes closed, she didn't want to see if it failed.


message 10392: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Emmy, don't call more. There's more than enough in the air now. Salem thought mechanically. Patrik was looking more like himself.


message 10393: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments What am I supposed to do with it all then? I don't need let alone have all of this power in me. Emmy said taking her hand away from her anyway.


message 10394: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Put it in the air I guess. Give it to the others maybe...yeah..that's a good plan. They could use that.
Salem's eyes flashed open just as the light exploded and disappeared. Salem could catch his thoughts.


message 10395: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy growled but kept everything anyways. She opened her eyes and Patrik was slowly sitting up.
"Patrik!" Emmy said throwing herself down next to him and catching eachother in their arms.


message 10396: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem would've thought that cute if she was seeing any of it.


message 10397: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy clutched at him
"It's ok baby." Patrik said soothingly "I'm here."
"You were gone. Parker, he.. Oh My God, he just came."
"I know." Patrik replied "I know, it's ok now."


message 10398: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley came running outside, smiled breifly at Emmy and Patrik and then went to Salem with a frown on her face.


message 10399: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I love you." Emmy finally said "I love you so much."
"I love you too." Patrik said to her

Liv came running out
"What happened? Salem, are you alright?"


message 10400: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Waverley looked at Liv. "She's sick. She did it wrong."


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