Mel’s Comments (group member since Jun 02, 2012)

Mel’s comments from the The Unknown Awesomes group.

Max's impatience was lost. His eyes tuned their brilliant silver as he stared into Lynns eyes. He watched as her face went blank and she locked her eyes on him. "We NEED to pass." Max whispered to. the hypnotised Lynn.

{*Lynne}

Max and Jink found Lynn at the castle gates.
{I can't remember who does Lynn! Could someone sub forher if she's not around?}"I have to see Princess Bella," he said, in an icy tone. "Now." Jink gave a rumbling growl.

{The suspense is killing me!!!!!!}

{Thank you!!! :)}

{Oooh! That's sooo cool!}

{Darn these mistakes...I really need to get a laptop.}

{Urrrgggh... Sorry it came out all italics}

{Oh, and Jink is a he. Sorry I keep writing she! ;()}

"I can do something- and you know it," Max retorted. I can hypnotise her body into thinking it is immune. You know I can!""You are not strong enough!," Jink thought angrily. "Doing that amount of hypnotism is so strenuous it coulf kill you. And you know that!"
"I'm willing to take the chance," "" Max said quietly. "I'm going to the castle."

But, with a jolt back to the present he remembered why he had come to the shore in the first place: to think about something thevillagers had been saying. It seemed Princess Bella was very ill with leukemia. This would have been normally just a sad thing not dwelled on for too long, as she was not exactly everybody's favorite princess. But it was still a life - a life that was going to be cut short...
"She's so young...," Max said to Jink.She doesn't deserve this!"
"No one deserves death," Jink thought to Max. "But there is nothing you can do."

Max had been able to teach Jink some English using hypnotism so she could understand him as he could, her. Max smiled, remembering those first days together...

Jink looked up at Max expectantly, and Max 's mettalic silver eyes locked with her green ones.
"Relaxing, is it not?," thought Jink as Max fished the thoughts out of her with his hypnotism.
Max replied, Yes, it is , and nice and quiet, too."

Max strolled around the shore breathing in the salty ocean air. Jink walked beside him, lifting his head to feel the breeze. He was not bothered by the somewhat chilly air that was so different from his homeland's swealtering heat, thanks to a little hypnotic help from Max.

Psst... Can I add something to Max's backround?

Max is an orphan. His parents died when he was young and he was sent off to live with his horrible uncle and aunt {Harry Potter twist there} However, when he leared that he was a hypnotist, he wasted no time in hypnotising his guardians to forget he ever existed. Then, he ran away to live on his own, his faithful panther, Jink at his side.

Alrightie! :)

O you guys! :')

Max is anxious for some role-plays!!! :()

I'm donereading the role plays!!! But I think I read some of them out of order... Where did you guys leave off?

A brand new page!!!