Mel’s Comments (group member since Jun 02, 2012)

Mel’s comments from the The Unknown Awesomes group.

{Aw, bye! And okay, that's what I thought you'd say about Tyler :)}

{So do I- but I'll take this instead}

{He he... I'm still wondering whether Max should fix Tyler up or leave him like that...}
"Do you not believe me," Max asked Bella. "If you prefer, I could hypnotise you and you could forget I ever interfeared with your life. I understand if this is what you want."

{Oooh... Did someone say mystery?}

"I just want to be clear on some things," Max said to Bella. "First of all, I'm not God and you are not dead. But, yes, I am a hypnotist and you are completely immune to leukemia." He paused to let this sink in.
"I hypnotically cured you. However, it is of the utmost importance that this remain a secret. I felt you deserved to know the truth, but the king, Lynn, Serena, and any othersthat saw me today must be hypnotised to think I cured you using simply medicine. I passed out because the hypnotism took a toll on a great amount of my energy. They will know it as me fainting from not eating enough this morning."
"Now," Max continued. "Can I trust you?"

"Fine," he replied. He put one hand on the floor and stood up. He wobbled a bit, but kept his balance.
He looked at the king. "Do you mind, your majesty, if I speak to Bella in private a moment," he asked.
{Anyone for king? Frances?}

Hey guys!!! :) Robin, Bella is needed at the castle. C you there?
Oh, and very funny Frances. I'm scared now... :)

When it began to seem like years were passing, instead of minutes, Max finally awoke. At first he was confused, but he quickly got his bearings.
"Bella! Where is Bella? Is she better? Please-" Max tried to sit up, but Jink pushed him down again, gently with his nose.
As soon as as Max became aware of Jink, he enveloped him in a hug, stroking his midnight fur. "Hey, buddy," he whispered.
Max attempted to sit up again. This time Jink let him. He looked around to see the king and Bella curiously watching hima foot away.
"Bella," he whispered, hoarsely. "Are you okay?"

Max lay there for over an hour, breathing, faltering, and occasionally mumbling Bella's name. These mumblings werealways followed by an expectant silence, from Bella and the king, who sat beside her, but then Max would grow quiet again and continue to sleep. Nurses came in occasionally, but they were clueless, since Bella had no idea how Max had passed out either. They had tried to move Max to a bed, but Jink would not let them touch him. So there he slept, obviously not at peace with himself, but alive.

Jink hovered protectively over Max. He was crouched down, ready to leap at anyone who came near him. The king entered the room, staring, baffled at the unconscious Max. Jink roared menacingly, baring his sharp, white teeth. He looked down and rubbed his large, raven black head against Max's head. He watched as Max's chest slowly moved up and down, faltering every now and then.
Thank god, Jink thought. Or rather, thank Max, he added to himself with an amused look at Bella.
Apparently, though, it came out as a glare, for Bella immediately moved herself to the other side of the bed, still staring intently at Max.

Robin wrote: "{I'm gonna go now, 'cause she doesn't seem to be on. Bye!}"

I 'm sooooooo sorrry!! It's wierdhow I got back on, like 3 minutes after you left, Robin!!!:() My mom magically popped i n my room to ask me iff I brushed my teeth...
Mel: Yeah, Mom, of course! (Hurriedly trying to shove my nook under my pillow)
Mom: Are you sure?
Mel: Um... You know what? I'll brush them again! Bye!!!
Mom: (Suspiciously glaring) Okay...
And don't worry guys! I'll be back later on today! Internet pinkie swear!!! ;)

His head began to throb, painfully. "You are-," he began, but suddenly, he felt release coming from Bella's mind, a wonderful sensation of understanding and peace.
I did it, he thought to himself, with hardly an ounce of strength left. And then, he collapsed on the floor and fainted.

{Sorry for the cliffhanger, but I gotta go... Get on as soon as u can tomorrow!!!}

Max sighed. He would just have to tell her the truth if he survived... She was too delusional now. It was time to begin. "You will see Owen again," Max whispered. He had no idea who Owen was, but if he made Bella happy, it made his job easier.
He looked over at Jink, who sat in the cor ner, silent, but filled to the brim with worry. Max mustered up all the strength he had. And then...
He widened his eyes, and stared into Bella's. His eyes sparkled such a brilliant silver, glimmer marks appeared on the floor, like shimmering diamonds.
You are immune!, he thought to Bella, with all his might. He could already feel his energy draining... But he pressed on.
"Leukemia cannot harm you. You are free from this illness! FOREVER!" Max was speaking out loud now, breathing heavily and sweating.

I am currently online on my nook under the covers. I'm actually supposed to be sleeping right now but I can't stand to leave Bella hanging!!!

Yeah!!! :()

{Yay! Where is Robin...}

"I am a hypnotist," Max replied, soothingly. Though he was feeling a bit ridiculous. Here Bella was, dying and then he comes, saying he's a hypnotist! She must think I'm crazy, Max thought.
"I am going to hypnotise your body into thinking it is immune to leukemia."

Kyra, that thing with hypnotised Tyler was hilarious!!! I totally forgot he was behind the door!!! XD

{Alrightie! Take your time... I could seriously do this all night!}

Max quickly turned the lights out when he saw Bella attempting to shield her eyes from the flourescent panels on the ceiling.