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Biggest love and congratulations!!! I love you guys.

I can't wait to meet you. I'm going to give you the biggest squeeze. Your teasers blow away every time.
Which one is your favorite?

(looks around)
Hey. If you want some meat for your potatoes, or if you're looking for something to get all creative on....
(drops this)
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Time happens for someone else, but not me. The orgasm stops it, going on and on under this madass bastard’s hands.
I open my eyes and I can see him through my hair as he fucks me with his fingers again, his face intense, as if he’s reigning in a hot blood mare, and I gear up for another explosion. I need to breathe. I need to think. It’s almost painful to come this much.
“Stop,” I say. “Please stop.”
“One more, kitten,” he growls.
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If you need to chop it up, or use only part to make it fit, go on ahead. I'm not precious with my shit.
(runs out like hot fire)


Yeah and if I don't get to a question right away, Tony or Diana usually hunt me down. So no worries there.

Excellent question.
I think it went like this. She wanted him back, not out of guilt, but because Erik wasn't doing it for her any more. The fact that he had money was a nice bonus.
When she saw that he was with Monica, and she could tell right off this wasn't just some whore screw (even if Jonathan didn't even realize it yet) she wanted him more, and as the weeks went on, all the love just turned to vindictiveness, until it was just all about money.
I hope that makes sense.

When I'm typing those scenes they go very slowly. Because they scare me. Their wedding night scene (I will frame you in stars), the wedding itself, and the proposal, took a week each. Why? Terror. Sheer terror of being maudlin and sappy and stupid.
But I went for it anyway. It hurt me, but not in the way you think. It was fear that I'd look cheap, and having to constantly take out things that were clever but insincere. Witty and clever is much easier. Pure, raw sincerity is really, really hard.

On the rewrite of chapter one, Tony nailed it. I just moved the breakup back a couple of months because the guilt was weighing down the story. It became about Daniel and Theresa, not Antonio and Theresa. Boooooring.
With regard to the wiki, you are more than welcome to add, improve, revise. It's a publicly editable database. Go for it.
I want to tell you the biggest challenge in managing all these moving parts is making sure the story stays on the couple and doesn't get too "plotty" because there are a shit load of moving parts here.
Tony and Diana keep me honest.
And yes.
Four days. I jacked the calendar to make it four days....For Diana.

Man, would I love to do a Dr. Thorensen novella. Between the online gaming and the whole DOCTOR thing? Hot.
I think there simply aren't enough doctor books, and you know they are bossy, demanding assholes, which is....well...sexy and alpha.
Alas, the crush of the Drazen sisters will delay that book for a good long while.

<3 <3

And so, but can I steal these????

I want to see what you come up with because I already know your shit is sick.
(view spoiler)

A fan made it. So I think it's under my name.... Otherwise check songs of submission ;)

Now.
I'm going offline for five hours to work on this edit. Big ass hugs.

And guys, these teasers rock my fucking world. Totally inspiring as I edit this thing!
CDR