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Book Review: Exercise is Murder by Bruce Hammack

I met Bruce and his lovely wife, Joyce, at ScrivCon last fall. They’re a fun couple, and he’s a great writer of clean mysteries. I thoroughly enjoyed his book Exercise is Murder, and I’m looking forward to reading more books in the Smiley & McBlythe series.

So without further ado, here is my review of Exercise is Murder!

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EXERCISE IS MURDER , A Smiley & McBlythe Mystery Book 1, by Bruce Hammack

Accidental drowning… or murder?
It’s up to the blind detective to find out.

Found at the bottom of his exercise pool, police believe the death of Steve Smiley’s friend is an accident. Smiley doesn’t buy it.

There are a lot of things a blind man can do, but solving a murder alone isn’t one of them. He needs a partner… one who knows their way around a crime scene. In walks Heather McBlythe. She can help him solve the crime, but can she keep him out of danger? Steve doesn’t have a choice. Without her help, someone will get away with murder.

Armed with years of experience as a homicide detective and his new partner, Smiley sets out to find a killer. He knows he’s on the right trail when a bullet whizzes past his ear. Will Steve resurrect his life as a master crime solver, or will his sleuthing get them both killed?

GENRE

Detective Mystery

AVAILABILITY

Amazon (Ebook, Paperback)

Barnes and Noble

My thoughts on Exercise is Murder

You couldn’t find two more opposite people than Heather McBlythe and Steve Smiley—McBlythe, a student at the Houston Police Academy, and Smiley, an instructor. But not any instructor – a widowed, blind, retired homicide detective teaching Skills of Observation and Deduction at the Academy.

Smiley’s excellent deductive skills are accompanied by associate chromesthesia, something he had before he lost his sight. AC provides a color overlay to certain sounds, and because of this, Smiley is convinced the recent death of his friend was murder.

McBlythe is in what she calls a “self-imposed witness protection program” to avoid her father’s clutches. He would much prefer her to attend Princeton and work on Wall Street. Although she completed her degree, she balked at the idea of making money for the sake of making money. He cut her off when she left law school and became a cop, but he’s tracking her and planting stories to keep her from advancing in her chosen career.

At least twenty-five years younger, McBlythe accepts Steve’s invitation to work with him. Smiley offers her room, board, and pay for her help in solving his friend’s murder. The only catch is Heather’s cat, Max.

Smiley despises cats.

As the two investigate Smiley’s old friend’s family, Heather working as Steve’s eyes, they form an unlikely friendship. Smiley comes to not just tolerate Max but love the Maine Coon, even though it takes several humorous escapades for that to happen.

Perfect for action-packed mystery lovers

The book is an action-packed mystery that ratches up with each turn of the page. The author skillfully weaves a thread of humor into the story and shows Smiley learning to care about McBlythe like the daughter he never had. I especially loved seeing McBlythe dress up as Pat Beerhalter, complete with a stiff wig, thick makeup, and stained teeth.

Exercise is Murder is clean fiction full of mystery and tension but zero romance. Smiley and McBlythe are partners in the detective business only. Several themes are explored, including physical and emotional loss, betrayal, and lying. These all play into the main character’s background and the mystery itself.

Exercise is Murder is the first in a 13-book series.

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Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for almost 39 years, have 5 amazing kids, and have 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery – Birds Alive! – released Feb. 27, 2024 and the 2nd in the series, Where’s the Quetzal? releases Feb. 25, 2025!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Favorite Book Quotes

I have so many favorite book quotes – the kind that stay with me long after I’ve turned the last page. Below are some of my favorite quotes in a random list of importance:

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From The Help by Kathryn Stockett

“You is kind. You is smart. You is important.”
This simple but powerful mantra expresses the love and support women show one another, even when the world feels like it’s pushing them down. This line became a central piece of the novel’s themes of friendship, empowerment, and resilience, and it’s one I often tell my youngest daughter.

From When Breath Becomes Air by Paul Kalanithi

“The difficult thing is not to live with death, but to live with the fear of it.”
In this powerful memoir, When Breath Becomes Air, neurosurgeon Paul Kalanithi writes about his battle with terminal cancer. This is one of my favorite book quotes because it speaks to what I think is a universal fear of death, but it also reveals the wisdom he gained in accepting life’s fragility.

From Night by Elie Wiesel

“To forget the dead would be akin to killing them a second time.”
I’d heard about this book several years ago, but it wasn’t until 2024 that I read it. Elie Wiesel’s Night is a heartbreaking but powerful account of his experiences in Nazi concentration camps, and this quote underscores the importance of memory. It’s a powerful reminder of the atrocities of the Holocaust and the need to honor the lives lost by never forgetting their stories.

From Beyond December by Michael Ehret

“Sometimes, it’s only after the storm has passed that you can see how much you’ve changed.”
This reflective quote from Beyond December spoke to me so deeply. It’s a poignant reminder that challenges are sometimes the catalysts for our most profound transformations.

From The Filbert Ridge Miracle by Tamelia Aday

“Miracles don’t always happen in the way we expect, but when they do, they’re worth the wait.”
This quote from The Filbert Ridge Miracle captures the heart of the story – one of patience, hope, and finding unexpected beauty in the most unlikely of places. It resonates with the idea that the answers we seek often arrive at just the right moment in ways we might not have imagined.

From Woman of God by James Patterson

“The thing about faith is that it doesn’t require you to be perfect, just willing.”
This is one of my favorite book quotes it highlights the novel’s exploration of faith, resilience, and the imperfect journey of a woman who’s determined to do the right thing despite the odds. It’s a beautiful reminder that faith is about effort, not perfection.

From The Penn Cage Series by Greg Iles

“You don’t heal by hiding from the truth. You heal by facing it.”
This powerful line from the Penn Cage series speaks to the heart of the series’ central themes of justice, healing, and confronting the darkness of the past. It’s a reminder that facing our truths, no matter how painful, is often the key to moving forward.

From The First Ladies by Marie Benedict & Victoria Murray

“Behind every powerful man, there is a woman who is more than capable of standing on her own.”
In The First Ladies, Marie Benedict sheds light on the untold stories of powerful women in history, and this quote encapsulates the strength and determination of the women who have quietly shaped history alongside their famous husbands.

From Matthew Perry: Friends, Lovers, and the Big Terrible Thing

“The best thing about being famous is the opportunity to help people who are in pain.”
Matthew Perry’s memoir reflects his lifelong struggle with addiction and his desire to use his platform for good. Through the memoir, you see Perry growing and maturing even in his struggle. The book underscores the redemptive power of sharing one’s struggles in hopes of helping others through their own, which is why it’s one of my favorite book quotes.

From Maybe You Should Talk to Someone by Lori Gottlieb

“The good news is that you get to rewrite the story of your life, and it’s never too late.”
Lori Gottlieb’s memoir offers a candid, compassionate look at therapy, both as a therapist and a patient. She believes in personal growth and the ability to change, a theme that resonated with me and even spurred me to go back to therapy.

From All the Sinners Bleed by S.A. Cosby

“Sometimes, justice isn’t something you get. It’s something you take.”
This line from S.A. Cosby’s gritty, gripping thriller is a reminder of the complexity of justice and the moral dilemmas that often arise when it’s not easily served. It’s a testament to the book’s themes of crime, revenge, and personal redemption even in the face of severe racial injustice.

From The Tiffany Girl by Deeanne Gist

“Sometimes the best way to find yourself is to lose yourself in the service of others.”
The Tiffany Girl by Deeanne Gist is an amazing tale of women and their struggles in the early 1900s in the U.S. It weaves a historical tale of ambition, resilience, and love. This quote reflects the novel’s theme of self-discovery through sacrifice and service, particularly in a world where women were often limited in their opportunities.

From The Happy Hour Choir by Sally Kilpatrick

“Sometimes the hardest thing is letting go of the life you thought you wanted to make room for the life you never imagined.”
This quote from The Happy Hour Choir beautifully captures the novel’s theme of embracing unexpected change. It speaks to the idea that true happiness often comes from the willingness to release old dreams and open ourselves up to new possibilities, even if they don’t look like what we originally envisioned.

What are your favorite book quotes?

The quotes I love emphasize themes of personal growth and the unexpected paths life can take. They remind me that sometimes the most fulfilling chapters of my life come from surrendering to the unknown – or, in my case, to God – and trusting where He leads.

What are your favorite quotes?

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Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids, and have 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery – Birds Alive! – released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Meet author Jennifer Burrows

I’m excited to have Jennifer Burrows on my blog today! She is a multi-genre hybrid author who published six books between July 2021 and August 2023. Now she’s joined the Scrivenings Press family, and her first book with them released Tuesday, Jan. 14, 2025!

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Jen – I’m so happy to have you on my blog! Tell me about yourself.

Jennifer – I grew up in Bristol Vermont, a pastor’s kid, homeschooled before it became popular or even normal. I’d say there are two major places I’ve lived that have had a major impact on my faith in God.  

Maine: Between my first and second years in college, although through the lens of time, I realize things are foggy, I was riding my bicycle to work at a Ben & Jerry’s shop when a graduating high schooler at a local high school hit me. Embarrassed, I pushed up from the ground, muscled through feeling bad for the poor kid who was just trying to graduate, and an hour later the shock wore off and the pain hit. I was in the hospital not much later. Months later, I was in physical therapy for some problem the doctors said the accident triggered. With my new diagnosis, my long-fought-for career as a concert pianist went up in ashes, and depression settled like a noose around me. It was at this time, a friend in college recommended I go on a mission trip to the Bahamas.  

I thought I’d lost everything I’d ever loved. God was sending me to find the things I’d love the most in life.  ~ Jennifer Burrows

The Bahamas: On the mission trip, I found a new purpose for my music and myself. After several short-term mission trips, a Bahamian Anglican School invited me to remain long-term as a music teacher. I accepted with three days’ notice to move countries, sold or gave everything away I really don’t remember, and left for full-time missions with nothing but the clothing on my back and a job to go to. I arrived with no phone to call home, no car to get around, no place to lay my head. God taught me so much during this period of life, where He made me aware of my true purpose and established that He and only He is the writer of my life. In the Bahamas, I met my husband, I found my now career as a teacher, and I discovered the impact of faith over fear. 

Jennifer Burrows’ indie books

Jen – Wow, that is an amazing – and encouraging – story! Thank you for sharing that. What genre(s) do you write, and what have you published as an indie author?

Jennifer –  Like I said, I’m a multi-genre hybrid author. From that, I learned so much about the industry and who I am as an author. Below are the book titles and genres I’ve published as an indie professional, all available on Amazon and through Kindle Unlimited. 

—Middle Grade, Speculative Fiction – Shadows   

—Young Adult, Christian Fantasy Fiction:  

Invading Darkness, Prequel Anthology of five short origin stories Hunted by Darkness, book 1 in the Balance Keeper Series Rulers of Darkness, book 2 in the Balance Keeper Series After the Darkness, book 3 in the Balance Keeper Series Illuminating the Darkness, book 4 in the Balance Keeper Series 

FreeFalling by J. L. Burrows – One hundred and eighty years in the future, the U.S. government eradicates warfare and violence. 

Serenity should feel safe, but she doesn’t. 

Serenity Knowles knows two things for certain. Finishing her government-assigned community service as a teacher is mandatory in order to start her adult life. And stopping those in power from reconditioning two of her favorite students will ruin her chances at a future and a life. 

Everything she thought she once knew to be true, suddenly is now in question after her typically peaceful girls fight in plain view of everyone at school. The Federal Bureau of Acceptance storms in and collects them both for reconditioning—chemical brainwashing. With no one to help, Serenity is driven into a wild rescue and escape plan. The girls can’t be made into shadow children, brainwashed, and limited to a menial future. 

All that stands between the overreaching government and her girls is Serenity’s budding faith, a furry beast companion, her modified illegal AI, and a ragtag group of men and women set against the use of cutting-edge technology and genetically modified bio-weapons on citizens under the Dome. If any of them get caught, they will be reconditioned. If they don’t move fast enough, the girls will be lost. If she doesn’t become a hero, any hope of a real future will be forfeit. 

In her transformation from a teacher with a broken family to a radical defector leading a team of rebels, Sere discovers America’s deadliest threat—its own government.

Changes for Jennifer

Jen – I know some things changed for you in 2023.

Jennifer – From August 2023 to January 2024, God led me on a journey of change. He introduced me to Amy R. Anguish through the Christian writers’ support group I started with local author Amber Skye Mileusnich. Amy encouraged me to consider traditional publishing, and when my father’s health began to fail and my kids needed me more and more, I recognized God’s leading in my life. I just published my first book through Expanse Books, a division of Scrivenings Press. 

—Dystopian Futuristic Fiction 

  FreeFalling , book 1 in The Reconditioned Series, released January 14th, 2025.Projects Jennifer is excited to be working on in 2025: 

Jen – What are you working on this year?

Jennifer – Several things! Dystopian, Futuristic Fiction: Quantum Christmas, a novella in a collection of novellas titled The Wonders Within the Starlit Inn possibly releasing in 2025 by Expanse Books with Scrivenings Press. And, Awakening book 2 in The Reconditioned Series, releasing January 2026 through Expanse Books with Scrivenings Press.

Also, Romantic Suspense: Zyaire book 1 in The Green Mountain Series. I’ll be revising this sometime this year and probably shopping it to a publisher in late 2025. And, Young Adult, Christian Fantasy Fiction: My very next project will be to go back and re-revise my first two books, Hunted by Darkness and Rulers of Darkness. I’ve learned so much in this writing journey, especially now that I’ve entered the traditional publishing realm, and I want to apply that learning to those first books because I believe in the mission and purpose of those stories, but they are currently not representing themselves as well as I believe they could with another revision. 

Writing habits

Jen – Something I’m always curious about is other writers writing habits. What are yours?

Jennifer – I follow a pretty strict schedule because of my life as a public high school teacher, a super involved mom of two sophomores, one in college who still lives at home, and the other in her first year of public high school, previously homeschooled, and my author endeavors which include writing, advertising, revising/editing, and professionally reviewing books for Clean Fiction Magazine.  

That said, I do have a certain time of day when the magic happens. Every day after dinner, I write until sometime before or after eight. Ending at eight-ish is critical because my brain requires time to loosen its grip on creating exceptional problems for my characters. If I don’t quit around that time, then I don’t sleep. The only exception to my evening writing is if I have the day off, and then I aim for late afternoon. I’m a night person, so that’s when my brain is clicking at full power.  

Fellow converted pantsers

Jennifer – I’m a converted pantser who now plans with room for pantsing in the corners and between the lines. Whenever I write a book, I outline for a month. I create what I call cards (think 3×5 cards) that help me know the specific points and details I have to hit in that scene/chapter, whose POV I’ll be telling it from, the location, etc. Then, I allow myself to pants the rest of the story in. This has worked extremely well for me. I create 17-25 of these cards and usually end up with a 70-100k word story depending on genre.  

Jen – Converted pantser here too, and this is something I just started doing! I’m enjoying having the index cards as I write a rough draft. Where do you get your ideas for stories?

Jennifer Burrows and story ideas

Jennifer – My ideas come from everywhere I go. FreeFalling came from my experience as a public school teacher. I work with students who struggle with very real-world problems, but in that capacity, I can’t share with students the real solution and Truth that God loves them and has a plan for their lives—that they matter and are loved more than they’ll ever know. In that same vein, I often see on the news or in social media society speculating on the best way to educate kids without being the boots on the ground. And then, it was just a matter of “what if” questions.   

What if we did away with harder subjects because only a select few students really need those courses? What if there was such a terrible teacher shortage communities had to find a creative way to care for and educate students? What if we only taught students the basics and allowed their future jobs to complete their education? What if the government took more and more control of our health, education, and communities?  

You get the idea. My biggest “what if” question in FreeFalling is, “What if we were forced to accept everyone’s individual truth instead of knowing and experiencing the freedom and power of God’s Truth?” And of course, the main character is a teacher which is born straight out of my life experience of teaching for eighteen years. 

Jen – I’m hooked! I can’t wait to read FreeFalling!

Jennifer – Writing is my therapy and my healing. I’ve been avidly reading and writing since I was very young. I didn’t understand or embrace its role in my life until much later when God told me to write my Balance Keeper series. Oddly enough, writing has been an important part of every stage of my life. Prayer journals when I was young, poetry and songwriting when I was in college, memoirs about the tough moments in my life, and finally, faith-filled fiction that I pray touches the hearts and edifies the believers that pick them up. God has a plan for our lives that we, at least for me, most rarely know a thing about. So that crazy thing He’s calling you to do, or the thing you’ve just done forever for yourself, just might be your next favorite thing to share with others in the world.  

Jennifer Burrows and research

Jen – Did you have to do research for your story?

Jennifer – Yes! Science Fiction, even light sci-fi, requires a lot of research. I got stuck in a rabbit hole with a scientist about sustainable fuel for the futuristic vehicle that carries the main characters around. 

However, the most interesting research I do is in the Bible. When I’m researching scriptures that will meet my characters where they are at, carry them through a difficult moment, or teach them how to become more like Jesus, I’m learning right alongside the character. It’s a blessing every time.  

 Since FreeFalling is based on the concept of God’s truth, I did research into verses about God’s truth. As I dove deeper into the thematic message of this story, I discovered a need to include and address fear, as it often is the reason we do not do the very thing we need to do. 
 
Out of that research came the following three thematically related verses that came to be the spine of the story:  

“When the spirit of truth comes, he will guide you into all the truth, for he will not speak on his own authority, but whatever he hears, he will speak, and he will declare to you the things that are to come.” John 16:13. “Do not be afraid; stand firm and you will see the deliverance the Lord will bring you today.”—Exodus 14:13 (NIV) “You will know the truth, and the truth will set you free.”—John 8:32 (NIV) 

Because Serenity isn’t a Christian, and religions do not exist as a part of the culture in this book, weaving in these scriptures as the backbone had to be done carefully through a still small whisper that speaks to Serenity, guiding and teaching her. 

Jennifer’s goals

Jen – I love that. What an amazing opportunity to reach people. And I love your rabbit hole into sustainable fuel! Haha! What are your goals?

Jennifer – There are a lot of reasons I write, as you might ascertain from the above, but the main reason I write is because God gave me a gift, and it is my responsibility as a member of God’s kingdom to give that gift back to God. For every book I write, I want it to reach the readers that will be most impacted, edified, and encouraged by it. My launch team and I pray over the readers and impact of a book before it hits the world. I want my books to be used by God in the lives of readers. I want them to feel seen and inspired to keep hoping when it seems all hope is lost, to keep walking when it seems all is futile, and to keep loving when it seems the world is full of hate and loss. This life is very hard, but there is a beautiful hope and joy we have in a heavenly father who loves us more than we will ever be able to understand. I want to help others to stay focused on God’s love for them.  

Jen – Yes!! That’s the best reason to write, I think. What do you like to read?

Jennifer – I adore Susan May Warren’s romantic suspense books. Oh, and Roni Kendig’s anything! I just finished reading her science fiction novel Brand of Light, and I’m about to read the second in that series. So good! I’ve also read her A Breed Apart series and I loved it! Reading for me is a daily habit, so I’m always finding new books I love. If you want to know more about what I’m reading follow me on Goodreads, my newsletter, and at Clean Fiction magazine’s quarterly publication that includes my reviews of each book I read. 

Jennifer Burrows’s bio

Jennifer Burrows has a message in her heart about God’s love, and she’s shared that when she was a musician in her father’s church, as a missionary to underprivileged children in a third-world country, and as a wife who stood by her husband through terminal brain cancer that God miraculously healed. 
 
Now, she’s sharing God’s powerful love through the art of fiction, pouring herself into edifying and helping other writers, and teaching others how to use faith in the face of adversity. Jennifer teaches in the greater Nashville area, where she lives with her husband and their two children. Get to know Jennifer better at jlburrows.com, or connect with her on social media at Facebook or Instagram.

Fun facts about Jennifer Burrows

Jen – Share some fun facts your readers would love to know!

Tea or coffee? Coffee – every day. Especially at Starbucks! Caffeine by day, decaf by night. Favorite season? Spring and Fall – God is a God of redemption which feels like spring, and a God of cleansing and removing what should be gone which feels like fall. Favorite Bible verse? “I can do all things through Christ who is my strength.”  What do you do in your free time? Free time–LOL! Read for my reviewing, take baths, work out (I love to weight lift while listening to the Bible or some of my favorite speakers) Cat or dog person? DOG!! I have two of the cutest writing buddies ever. Jack and Lacey! Advice for new authors

Jen – What is your advice for new authors? 

Jennifer – I have a couple of pieces of advice for new authors. Together with a friend, I started Charis, a local Christian author’s group in Smyrna, TN, and I’ve been blessed to walk alongside several new authors as they brought their books to publication. 

It’s a lifestyle, not a destination vacation. If you think you are writing to finish the book, you’ll find that there’s just another book, another revision, another edit, another something that you have to do for your book. Writing the book is simply the first step in a journey of steps. When I was younger and dieting, I used to be all over the place. I’m changing my lifestyle–not dieting. Writing a book is much the same way. It’s a lifestyle, so create systems that support your writing consistently.  One step has more power than huge chunks. When my husband was going through brain cancer—a whole story in itself—I learned I had to just take the next step through life. I couldn’t think about big picture or end results. I put on blinders and forced myself to take the next step, no matter how much it scared me. In that, I found the journey went more quickly, each step grew a touch easier, and I could accomplish incredible things in very short periods of time.  Work with yourself, not against yourself. If you are a morning person, write in the morning. But if you are a night person, write in the night. Don’t try to be something you weren’t created to be. God made you on purpose the way you are. There’s enough in this world to fight against. Don’t let your war be against yourself.  Learn! Learn! Learn! The minute you think you’ve arrived, you will grow stale. In my writer’s group, we try to study a book a year. This year’s book is Susan May Warren’s The Story Equation. Other books I’ve learned from and loved are Hawker’s 17-step method, unfortunately named “Take off your Pants” referring to pantsers learning to plan; Story Genius by Larry Brooks; John Truby’s “The Anatomy of Story”; “Break into Fiction” by Mary Buckham and Dianna Love; “The Emotional Wound Thesaurus and that entire series by Angela Ackerman & Becca Puglisi. And I have at least fifty more on my TBR that I can’t wait to dig into.  Work to the end. So many newer authors get lost in the spiral of starting a book, writing to chapter four or five, then having a new idea or learning something or any other distraction, and then they go back to the beginning and revise, cut, edit, get to chapter four or five, then have a … You get the idea. It’s essential to learn to persevere to the end of each phase of writing.  Final question for Jennifer Burrows

Jen – And last but not least, what inspired you to write?

Jennifer – God. It’s one of the things He designed me to do. 

Jen – Thanks for being on the blog today, Jennifer! I’ve learned a lot about you and can’t wait to read your new book!

Read Creative Exercises to Spark Inspiration and Improve Your Writing, and then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024! The second in the series, Where’s the Quetzal? releases on Feb. 25, 2025!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Research for Where’s the Quetzal?

Research for Where’s the Quetzal? was as simple as diving into my memories. Okay, and a visit to Fort Pickens (more about that in a moment). I grew up in Gulf Breeze – 6th-12th grade and went to college in Pensacola, so I’m very familiar with the area. Here’s a behind-the-scenes look at the research that inspired book #2 in The Empty Nesters Cozy Mystery series!

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Visiting Pensacola as I did research for Where’s the Quetzal?

• Since this series has been grounded in Pensacola, I wanted to make sure I captured every detail of its coastal charm, from the historic architecture to the white-sand beaches. In high school, my P.E. class would travel by school bus (hot, sweaty, stinky) over the bridge to the beach and swim in the sound. So many of my childhood memories are tied up in the beach.

Beach at Fort Pickens/Pensacola BayPensacola Beach

Historical events

• Pensacola’s history spans centuries, and in the book, the characters visit Fort Pickens and learn more about Geronimo and his “stay” at the fort.

• One thing I learned more about in my research for Where’s the Quetzal? was the shipwrecks of Don Tristan de Luna, a conquistador from Mexico. He left Vera Cruz in the 1500s with 12 ships and over 1000 people with the intention of colonizing the Pensacola area. A hurricane took care of 7 of the ships and killed many of the people.

Fort PickensFort Pickens

Landscape & weather

• Pensacola’s natural landscape and seasonal weather play a big role in the story. Book #2 takes place in the spring – no hurricanes in this one!

Sensory experiences

• To fully immerse my readers in Pensacola’s atmosphere, I use sensory details that bring the setting alive, from the warmth of the sun on the sand to the sound of waves and the smell of salt in the air.

My Pensacola Beach towel

• By layering in these details, I hope to make Pensacola feel as vivid to my readers as it does to the characters.

Fort Pickens history

• Construction began on Fort Pickens in the early 1800s. It was designed and constructed to defend Pensacola Bay and the Pensacola Navy Yard and Depot from foreign attacks. The fort at that time was the largest brick structure on the Gulf of Mexico, and it was under Union control during the Civil War. In my research for Where’s the Quetzal? I learned more about the fort than I knew before!

Fort PickensFort Pickens

More about Where’s the Quetzal?

Wondering what Where’s the Quetzal? is about? Look no further!

Peg Howard has planned the perfect baby shower for her oldest daughter. But the return of Estelle and Roger Keaton disrupts her peace, reigniting old mysteries.

A chance discovery of a centuries-old shipwreck sets off a chain of events, thrusting Peg and her friends into a perilous game of deception. As they unravel the mysteries surrounding a rare quetzal bird, they uncover a plot that threatens their very lives.

With Detective Marcus Sharp and her mother-in-law Hazel by her side, Peg races against time to solve the mystery. But as she digs deeper, she realizes that some truths are better left buried.

In a tale full of twists and turns, Peg confronts her deepest fears, facing an adversary more cunning and unexpected than anyone anticipated. Join Peg and her friends on a journey through intrigue and peril, where bonds of friendship and family may be their only salvation. Will they uncover the truth before it’s too late, or will the past come back to haunt them all?

I hope you’ve enjoyed seeing some of the pictures my daughter and I took at Pensacola Beach and Fort Pickens as I did research for Where’s the Quetzal? The book releases Feb. 25, 2025! You can read book #1 in the series here:

Read What is a Cozy Mystery, then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids, and have 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery – Birds Alive! – released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Monthly Themed Reading List: Cozy Mystery Book Recommendations

Do you like reading lists? Each month in 2025, I am posting a monthly themed reading list, and this month is all about cozy mystery book recommendations (I know, you’re surprised!). If you’re a fan of charming small towns, quirky characters, and just the right amount of suspense, cozy mysteries are the perfect genre to dive into.

Whether you love cozy bakeries, quirky detectives, or scenic locales, this month’s reading list has a selection that will keep you entertained and relaxed. Cozies are my “thing,” as you might know. Here are ten cozy mysteries to curl up with for a delightful escape.

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Cozy Mystery Book Recommendations

“The No. 1 Ladies’ Detective Agency” by Alexander McCall Smith

Setting: Botswana, Africa

Protagonist: Precious Ramotswe, the first female detective in Botswana

Why Read It: This warm and engaging series introduces Precious Ramotswe, who solves small but important mysteries with wisdom and humor. The rich, evocative setting of Botswana provides a beautiful backdrop to the gentle mysteries, making it a perfect choice for those who appreciate thoughtful, uplifting stories.

Themes: Friendship, cultural richness, personal growth!

“Still Life” by Louise Penny

(on Kindle Unlimited)

Setting: Three Pines, Quebec, Canada

Protagonist: Chief Inspector Armand Gamache

Why Read It: The first book in the Chief Inspector Gamache series introduces readers to the small village of Three Pines and the wise and compassionate detective Gamache. This atmospheric mystery touches on themes of love, justice, and the dark secrets hidden within a seemingly peaceful community.

Themes: Community, truth, human connections

The Chocolate Chip Cookie Murder” by Joanne Fluke

(on Kindle Unlimited)

Setting: Lake Eden, Minnesota

Protagonist: Hannah Swensen, baker and amateur sleuth

Why Read It: This deliciously cozy mystery is the first in the Hannah Swensen series, where the amateur sleuth is a baker whose cookie recipes are almost as famous as her knack for solving crimes. Fans of baking and small-town charm will love this fun mix of mystery and mouthwatering recipes.

Themes: Small-town life, family dynamics, baking

“Murder at the Vicarage” by Agatha Christie

Setting: St. Mary Mead, England

Protagonist: Miss Marple, amateur sleuth

Why Read It: One of the most famous cozy mystery protagonists, Miss Marple, solves the mystery of a murder at the local vicarage in this classic story. Christie’s sharp wit and Miss Marple’s clever observations will keep you hooked until the very end.

Themes: Village life, keen observation, justice

More cozy mystery book recommendations “Death by Darjeeling” by Laura Childs Setting: Charleston, South CarolinaProtagonist: Theodosia Browning, tea shop ownerWhy Read It: In this delightful series, Theodosia Browning runs a tea shop while unraveling a mystery involving murder. This cozy read is filled with vibrant Southern charm and the comforting allure of tea culture, making it a great pick for tea lovers and fans of lighthearted mysteries.Themes: Tea culture, Southern hospitality, friendships “A Cajun Christmas Killing” by Ellen Byron Setting: Pelican, LouisianaProtagonist: Maggie Crozat, a Louisiana innkeeper and amateur detectiveWhy Read It: Set in a charming Southern town during the holiday season, this cozy mystery mixes a festive atmosphere with an intriguing murder. Maggie Crozat, an innkeeper with a knack for solving crimes, finds herself investigating a Christmas killing amidst family drama and the holiday spirit.Themes: Family secrets, holiday charm, Southern life “The Cat Who Could Read Backwards” by Lilian Jackson Braun Setting: Moose County, USAProtagonist: Jim Qwilleran, a journalist, and his cat, KokoWhy Read It: A perfect blend of mystery and humor, this classic series features a quirky journalist and his clever cat, Koko, as they investigate mysterious deaths. The gentle tone and amusing interactions between the characters will keep you smiling as you solve the mystery alongside them.Themes: Humor, animal companions, small-town life “Pushing Up Daisies” by M.C. Beaton Setting: The Scottish HighlandsProtagonist: Hamish Macbeth, a police constableWhy Read It: This series follows the witty and endearing Hamish Macbeth as he solves mysteries in the picturesque Scottish Highlands. The quirky characters and beautiful setting make this a perfect read for anyone who loves cozy small-town mysteries with a bit of humor and charm.Themes: Rural life, quirky characters, humor “The Christmas Cookie Mystery” by Leslie Meier

(on Kindle Unlimited)

Setting: Tinker’s Cove, MaineProtagonist: Lucy Stone, a reporter and amateur detectiveWhy Read It: Set against a snowy New England backdrop, this holiday-themed mystery revolves around the murder of a Christmas cookie contest judge. As Lucy Stone investigates, readers are treated to a cozy setting, festive spirit, and a delightful mix of family and mystery.Themes: Holiday spirit, family dynamics, festive intrigue“The Body in the Library” by Agatha ChristieSetting: A country estate in EnglandProtagonist: Miss MarpleWhy Read It: Another classic Miss Marple mystery, this one involves a body found in the library of a peaceful country estate. With Miss Marple’s keen eye for detail and her ability to uncover hidden secrets, this book will keep you guessing until the very end.Themes: Secrets, hidden motives, the complexities of social lifeCozy up with these mysteries

What is your favorite in this month’s list of cozy mystery book recommendations? They offer a variety of intriguing, heartwarming, and suspenseful stories. Whether you’re drawn to the charm of a Southern tea shop, a cozy English village, or a quiet Quebecois town, these books provide the perfect blend of mystery, charm, and comfort.

Some of my personal favorites include Kate Carlisle, known for her Fixer-Upper Mystery series, which combines renovation with a side of murder; Amanda Flower, whose Farm to Table series offers a delightful mix of farming, small-town charm, and intrigue; and Krista Davis, who brings a touch of whimsy to the cozy mystery world with her Domestic Diva Mystery series.

Whether you’re solving crimes alongside an amateur sleuth or savoring festive mysteries, these authors will ensure your reading adventures are full of mystery, warmth, and just the right amount of suspense. Grab your favorite blanket and enjoy a cozy reading escape this month.

Happy reading!

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Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 37 years, have 5 amazing kids, and have 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery – Birds Alive! – released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Author Mike Ehret and Beyond December

I’m excited to welcome Mike Ehret to the blog again. Last time, he talked about his novella, Big Love. I got to spend some time with Mike at ScrivCon – Scrivenings Press’s writing conference. He is lots of fun and has a tremendous sense of humor.

This time on the blog, he’s sharing more about his writing style, and we’re talking about his new novel, Beyond December, which I have read and it’s fabulous.

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Jen – Hi Mike, I’m glad to have you back. I’m curious about your writing style. How do you come up with your ideas? And do you outline or do a rough draft?

Mike – Quite honestly, I do not come up with ideas for my books. I sit down at the computer, open a file, and start writing. When the prose goes somewhere interesting, I follow it. When a character speaks, I record what he or she says. 

So no, there is no outline. There is not even a beginning and a known end when I start. When I’m done, it pretty much stays written in the order it came out. I do a lot of revising, enhancing, editing, etc., but very rarely does anything get moved around. Scenes do get deleted from time to time, but what I write, I write. 

Jen – Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever heard anyone do it that way. That leads to my next question: What’s the hardest part about writing a book? 

The hardest part about writing

Mike – Making myself sit down and take the time. I will noodle about ideas and scenes in my head for a bit, but most of those don’t actually get written. I believe it’s just my brain getting ready to tell the story. 

I see my scenes unfolding cinematically—as if they are scenes in a movie. What happens and what characters say is what naturally comes next. But I need to put daily life on hold to enable this to happen. 

Jen – Not to mention that you work full-time! What themes do you enjoy using?

Mike – So far, my writing has been big on transformation and male/female relationships. A thing happens and characters are forced to change, to transform. I find that Romans 12:2 informs much of my writing: “Do not conform to the pattern of this world but be transformed by the renewing of your mind. Then (such an important word) you will be able to test and approve what God’s will is—his good, pleasing, and perfect will.” 

In “Beyond December,” Zak is a nominal Christian, but he doesn’t see himself that way. He thinks he’s a solid Christian, just not as crazy about it as some people. When his wife dies unexpectedly, and he faces one more tragic abandonment in his life, he has to examine what he believes and why. When he does, he goes through a transformation.  

Beyond December

Jen – The way you write about his grief and transformation really touched me. It was very honest and raw (in feelings, not bad writing!). Were there pivotal moments or challenges in your writing career that helped define your path? 

Mike – In 2004, when I returned to college, a writing teacher challenged me to try Fiction writing and then, when she saw what I produced, she required me to join American Christian Fiction Writers (ACFW). Through associations and opportunities there, I found my calling and helped define my career as a writer, editor, volunteer organizer, and novelist. 

Jen – I love how someone saw your potential and gift and encouraged you. That’s very cool. So, as a writer, you may have had criticism or even rejection. How do you deal with that?

Mike – I’m sort of lucky in that I don’t really worry about those things. But what kills me is waiting for someone’s reaction to what I’ve written. I really, really want to know what readers think of my books. Did it help you? Did it give you something to think about? Did it move you closer to God? Were you entertained? 

Waiting on reactions and reviews kills me. (So, if you’ve read “Big Love” or “Beyond December,” don’t keep me in suspense!) 

Authors love reviews!

Jen – Yes! Reviews are so important to us authors! What’s the best writing advice you’ve received? 

Mike – It’s not going to be great straight out of the gate. Reread, revise, rewrite. It’s OK to not be perfect. Just strive to get better. And hang around with people who do likewise. 

Jen – Great advice. Especially to find like-minded people. What are you working on next? 

Mike – I have at least three ideas in the hopper, but the one that is furthest along is a novel about (surprise) relationships and baseball and the transformative nature of baseball. No, I’m not a baseball fan. Fortunately, I have several relatives who are reading this for baseball errors as I go along.  

Alternately, there are second and third books lightly “planned” to follow in the world of “Beyond December.” BD is a big cast book, and there are a lot of stories in that city that could yet be fleshed out—as well as characters we don’t yet know about.   

But there’s also a Christmas novella idea I can’t stop thinking about based on the song “Have Yourself A Merry Little Christmas,” specifically the not-often-heard opening of the song: 

“Christmas’ future is far away 
Christmas’ past is passed 
Christmas’ present is here today 
Bringing joy that will last.” 

Shall we vote on what the next book will be?  

More about Mike

Jen – I like that idea! What do you like to do when you’re not writing? 

Mike – More than anything, I like to spend time with my wife and my dog. Even if we’re just sitting around, each of us (well, not the dog) reading a different book together. The biggest comfort in my life is Deb’s presence. I don’t really like to go anywhere without her. I do, of course. But if I had my choice, I would not. 

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Mike’s novels are:

Big Love (a novella)

Berly Charles remembers the days before her father was a successful business tycoon in Indianapolis. Growing up a razor’s edge from homelessness planted a tiny desire for home in her heart that she now, as the owner of Le Petite Maison, LLC, fills for others by building their tiny home ideals. Now she has the opportunity to take her tiny house company big time—is this the chance she’s been waiting for? 

Nathan “Rafe” Rafferty is a writer for the nationally reputed architecture journal who is used to calling his own shots and covering the biggest and the best architectural accomplishments of the modern world. But when his hipster, much younger, editor assigns him to cover a new trend—tiny houses—the assignment stirs unpleasant memories and thoughts of revenge. 

Beyond December

Zak Cooper knows his wife, Kay, is dead. She died mere weeks before Christmas, and his newspaper covered the story extensively. So why is he seeing Kay around town, and why is she talking to him? And why can’t he touch her? 
 
Are they “bereavement hallucinations,” as his doctor suggests? Or is it something more? And what about Jenny Miller, new in town with her young daughter? A daughter similar in age to what Zak’s daughter would be if she’d lived? 
 
Can Zak move beyond this life, this love? Can he move beyond December? 

All about Mike Ehret

Michael Ehret loves to play with words. He is the author of the novella “Big Love” and the new novel, “Beyond December.” He is enjoying his current playground. Previous playgrounds include being the Managing Editor of the magazine ACFW Journal and the ezine Afictionado for seven years. He also plays with words as a freelance editor and has edited several nonfiction and fiction books, proofedited for Abingdon Press, worked in corporate communications, and reported for The Indianapolis Star. 

Read Creative Exercises to Spark Inspiration and Improve Your Writing, and then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024! The second in the series, Where’s the Quetzal? releases on Feb. 25, 2025!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Top 5 posts of 2024 and what’s next in 2025

As 2024 wraps up, I’ve looked back to see what posts readers have loved the most. Pulling from the top 5 posts of 2024, I see a variety! This year, I focused on what I was learning as a writer, and these posts resonate with many of you.

After we look at the top 5 posts, I’ll share what I’m looking at doing in 2025. I’m making a bit of a change with the blog, but I’m very excited about it!

I’ve had an amazing year of sharing insights, experiences, and lessons learned with all of you. 2024 has been full of growth and creativity. Let’s take a look back and then forward into the future!

1. How to use Save the Cat Beat Sheet

As I used and adapted the Save the Cat Beat Sheet and shared it in this post, I think people found it very helpful. For me, STC is straightforward and easy to use. In my ebook, I have incorporated other things I’ve learned, like pinch points from Patricia Bradley.

This post captured the attention of so many of you because it was a step-by-step way of plotting a novel. As a gift to readers, I’ve made it into an eBook, which you can access here:

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2. Top 10 Writing Obstacles and How to Overcome Them

This is the 2nd in the top 5 posts of 2024. All writers deal with writing obstacles, and they go far beyond writer’s block. This post helped us find ways past them in concrete terms.

Covered in this post were:

PerfectionismLack of timeLack of inspirationand more!

If you missed it, click here: Top 10 Writing Obstacles

3. Exploring Cozy Mystery Themes

Cozies are a kind of “comforting” crime novels. They have specific themes are are very popular. From Small-Town to Hobby themes, readers love cozies! My cozy series is about a group of empty nesters who form a birding group!

4. Plot Points and Pinch Points

Plot points are the big moments – the ones that drive the story forward. Pinch points remind readers of the antagonist’s presence and the looming threat or obstacles the protagonist faces.

5. Designing Your Book Cover Using Canva

Last of the top 5 posts is another step-by-step guide. I appreciate these kinds of posts too! Using Canva is simple once you understand how it works. Another post about Canva is on creating a one sheet. Simple and easy!

What’s next in 2025?

As we approach the new year, I’m already gearing up for some exciting projects and new directions for the blog in 2025. Here’s a little preview of what I’m planning:

I will continue having two author interviews each month.More posts will be geared toward readers, including monthly themed reading lists!I’ll also be doing a book review a month. This won’t be your standard review; more of what resonated with me.

And I can’t forget that I have two books coming out in 2025! Where’s the Quetzal? releases on February 25, 2025, and my novella, SeaBreeze Obsession, comes out in the Trinity Sands Beach Club novella collection on June 17, 2025! My friends Deborah Sprinkle and Sharon Carpenter wrote the other novellas in the collection, and trust me, they are good!

2024 has been an incredible year of growth, connection, and learning. I’m beyond grateful for the support and feedback I’ve received from all of you. I look forward to seeing what we can accomplish together in 2025, and I hope you’ll continue to join me on this amazing adventure.

What are you most excited about in 2025? Share your thoughts in the comments below!

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Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children, and I used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Meet author Linda Dindzans

I’m excited to talk to Linda Dindzans today. She’s a new author with Scrivenings Press, and she writes Biblical fiction!

Jen – Hi, Linda! Tell me a little about yourself.

Linda – I grew up in a suburb of Washington, D.C., in Maryland, during the turbulent times of race riots, Vietnam protests, assassinations, and the Cuban missile crisis. And the exciting times of the space race and landing on the moon.

I went to college at Harvard in Boston, then to Montreal for medical school where I met my Canadian husband. We graduated one day and got married the next. Then we went back to Boston to the Beth Israel Hospital. Then to Toronto for 5 years training. Our first two children were born there. Then to Pittsburg where I finished training, and my husband Vincent had his first staff job, and our third child was born.

We moved to Wisconsin when all training was finished, and we wanted to stay put at least from first grade until the last finished high school. We love the Milwaukee area and have been here for 34 years.

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Jen – You grew up in a time of amazing (& frightening) history! What genre do you write?

Linda – I write Biblical fiction because that seems to be what comes to me, and I have a long-time fascination with Bible study. My debut novel A Certain Man was released by Scrivenings Press in August 2024. The book is available on Amazon in both Kindle and paperback formats. A large print edition should be available in a few months. Also, the publisher is working hard to get all the books released in 2024 available with an audible version with virtual voice. My publisher, Linda Fulkerson, is so dedicated. This involves her listening to every word to check for errors, poor timing, or pauses.

I am happy to report that I have been contracted to write two more books for this series. The series title is A Certain Future. The next book is A Certain Mercy, and it is scheduled for release in December 2025.

There was a certain man…

He offered an outcast—a shunned, shamed woman—a new life.

Mara is a young Samaritan beginning to discover her love for Samuel—and his for her. Soon she will be deemed mature enough to marry. Her hopes are dashed when her greedy father brokers a match with the cruel son of the wealthy High Priest of Shechem. When her loathsome betrothed is killed, her beloved Samuel must run for his life. Mara and Samuel struggle to survive and reunite during the treacherous and scandalous times of the Bible under the merciless rule of Rome.

Along the way, they are entangled within the snares of such notable figures as King Herod, Herodias, Pontius Pilate, Caiaphas, and Salome.

The heartrending tales of Mara and Samuel are interwoven with their desperate love story. Before either meets Yeshua the Nazarene face to face. Before He sets the political, religious, and spiritual landscape on fire. And before either Mara or Samuel are immortalized in the gospels.

Linda has received two awards (so far) for A Certain Man.

Jen – I can’t wait to read the series! And I agree that Linda is amazing. So, tell me about your writing habits.

Linda Dindzans’ writing habits

Linda – I am whole-brained, so I am a pantser with a heavy dose of wanna-be plotter. (Very loose outline of main points) I establish loose routines that work for a while and then seem to change to a different one. Plot ideas just come to me. I am an avid reader, and I read for plot. Character development does not come naturally, but when I have been able to dig for a character’s truth and get it on the page, I find that particularly rewarding.

Jen – I love to hear how other writers write. I’m sure with Biblical fiction, you had to do research for your story. What did you find most interesting?

Linda – I love little-known facts. For instance, some scholars believe that the phrase “there was a certain man” was not just “once upon a time” but signaled those listening to Jesus that the story he was about to tell was based on a real person. This fact became the inspiration for my first book!

Everything about Biblical fiction has to do with research. I want to be true to the scriptures, true to the history, and true to the sound of the language. It can be daunting because there are times when I don’t know what I don’t know. Though I research constantly, I finally decided I can only do my best and ask God to “cover” the rest.

Here are some examples of issues:

When I was taking a fiction intensive taught by Mesu Andrews, she was critiquing my work–– a chapter from the next book. She wrote in the margin “you may want to research stoning methods.” Huh?! Didn’t they just pick up stones, surround the person and stone them? Apparently not! Off to research…

I am very persnickety about word choice. For instance, I could never use the word mesmerized because Franz Mesmer was a physician in the 1700’s. I try to use word order and phrasing sprinkled in that gives the feel of the times of the King James Bible without the difficulties of reading thee and thou. I avoid contractions to maintain a less contemporary sound and rhythm. And the online thesaurus is my constant companion.

Some of Linda’s most used research tools:

The Jewish Encyclopedia, The Jewish Book of Why, JSTOR website, chronological and cultural background bibles, Rose atlases, charts, and maps.

Jen – Wow! I admire the detail and dedication to do all of that. What are your goals when you write?

Linda – I write because I believe it is what God has called me to do. I’m not sure if is more about the lessons he is teaching me, what he wants others to learn or feel through my work, or about the relationships I form along the way. All I know is when the going gets tough, and I wonder if I should stop, I am reminded He hasn’t called me to do anything else! Some of the feedback I have received from the first book has convinced me that there are specific readers whose hands God intends to pick up this book, and the words that have been given to me are part of His plan. I am reminded of:

For I know the plans I have for you,” declares the Lord, “plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you hope and a future. Jeremiah 29:11 New International Version

Finally, I hope that my books spur readers to go to the scriptures, to find His unconditional love, and the good news of salvation and eternal life.

Jen – Amen! What do you like to read?

Linda – I read some nonfiction: psychology, healthy-living, Biblical commentary, and books based on a travel destination.

Resources for writing

Jen – Which resources do you use to help your writing skills?

Linda – First and foremost–– the website margielawson.com. This brilliant PhD psychologist and editor extraordinaire runs an online writer academy. I have spent hundreds of hours taking courses, participating in writing immersions, and pursuing individual coaching. The best values ever are the webinars which address one isolated topic at a time. In addition, I have a shelf of books–– books on writing craft by James Scott Bell, Save the Cat Writes a Novel, Writing Lessons from the Front series by Angela Hunt, the “thesaurus” books Emotion, Negative and Positive Trait,

Jen – Tell us about your platform.

Linda – I keep telling myself I “get to learn social media” because I have been blessed with a published book and want to do my part for Scrivenings Press.

You can follow me on social media. FB Linda Dindzans, Author X:@lindadindzans website: lindadindzans.com email: linda.dindzans@gmail.com

Newsletter coming in 2025!

Fun facts about Linda Dindzans

Jen – Share some fun facts your readers would love to know! (Tea or coffee? Favorite season? Favorite Bible verse? What do you do in your free time? Cat or dog person?)

Linda – Animal person! When raising our kids we at one point had 9 pets: dog, cats, hamster, rabbits, African water frogs, hermit crab. For many years we had a “butterfly garden” where you hatch butterflies and release them in the yard in spring.

At present we have two cats Sweetie Pye ( a calico) and Honey Bunch (a ginger) who are a bonded pair. My oldest son has a hairless calico sphinx cat named Bizzie, who took up residence with us during their kitchen remodel. She feels like peach fuzz and is warm (103 degrees)

Favorite verse is above Jeremiah 29:11

Jen – Those cats burrow into your heart, don’t they? What is your advice for new authors?

Linda – Read widely. Study craft. Find critique partners. Learn to self-edit by editing others. It is always easier to see someone else’s mistakes. That whole “plank in your own eye, speck in another’s” thing!

Jen – What inspired you to start writing?

Linda – I was an avid reader for over 50 years @3 books per week. And I hate to admit it, but I never reviewed a book. I had no idea how important it was for authors and didn’t really think anyone would value my opinion. It also never occurred to me to write a book (except within the context of a joke) until a story kept coming to me that I couldn’t get out of my head. But I didn’t have time to write while I was practicing medicine. When I first left medicine, I thought it was a sabbatical. After three months, my husband and I agreed it was “retirement” to write.

Jen – I’m so glad Linda Dindzans is on my blog and that I’ve heard her unique and powerful story!

Linda Dindzans, M.D. is a writer with the heart of a healer. She offers readers stories of redemption and restoration. And her compelling characters inhabit the treacherous times of the Bible. But Linda believes there is nothing new under the sun. The hopes and struggles of her cast of characters still speak to hearts today. Yet only a profound encounter with the Son transforms her characters from victims to victors.

Linda is a retired ENT surgeon with a longstanding fascination with God’s Word and commitment to in-depth Bible study. She has been a guest speaker at medical conferences, national and regional Christian conferences, and a facilitator for church and home Bible studies.

She is grateful for this time to lay down her scalpel and pick up her pen as she follows a call to write.

During her free time, Linda can be found on the pickleball court. She has no aspirations to win a trophy but remains content to supply comic relief.

Linda and her husband, a fellow physician, have been blessed with three adult children, a son-in-law, a daughter-in-law, and three grandchildren. Wisconsin is home, but they travel across the world enjoying photography, birdwatching, and singing in choirs.

Read Crafting a Writer’s Mood Board and then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 37 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children, and I used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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Writing a Holiday Story: Creating Fiction That Captures the Spirit of the Season

As always, I blog about things I’m learning, and writing a holiday novella is on my bucket list for 2025. In 2024, I wrote a short story, The Case of the Missing Reindeer, that lit the fire inside me to create a longer holiday story.

The holiday season is a time filled with warmth, tradition, and reflection. It can also be a time of grieving, and I think it’s important not to forget that. A holiday story that is about family, love, and the “magic” of the holidays resonates deeply with readers. It has a unique ability to capture the essence of the season, lightening our spirits and offering hope.

But writing holiday-themed stories that feel fresh, engaging, and emotionally true can be a challenge. How do you create a holiday story that reflects the magic of the season without falling into the trap of clichés?

Here are some tips for writing holiday fiction that evoke the feelings of the season while keeping readers engaged and inspired, ensuring your story captures the true spirit of the holidays.

Focus on the universal themes in a holiday story

At its core, a holiday story often explores universal themes: family, togetherness, generosity, nostalgia, and change. The holidays offer a perfect backdrop for stories about transformation and personal growth. For example, a character may learn the importance of kindness, rediscover the value of spending time with loved ones, or experience a profound moment of self-reflection.

While these themes are common, we want to approach them in a way that feels authentic. What do I mean? Avoid turning your story into a “lesson” or “moral of the story.” Instead, show how the holiday season prompts characters to reconsider their lives or relationships in a more subtle, natural way.

A lighter, feel-good holiday story focuses on themes like the joy of giving, unexpected friendships, or the beauty of traditions. And a more poignant story dives into themes of loneliness, loss, and the need for healing or reconciliation.

Avoid cliches

It’s easy in any kind of writing to fall into the cliche trap. When you’re writing holiday fiction, it’s even easier to slip into a predictable and overused formula. There’s nothing wrong with familiar traditions—Christmas trees, a big holiday dinner, or a magical moment under the mistletoe— but as a writer, we need to aim for fresh ideas. Our readers will appreciate it!

So throw that kink in the holiday dinner, or show your Scrooge-inspired character! Readers will relate! By giving a twist to familiar elements, we make our holiday fiction feel more authentic and less contrived.

Create meaningful characters and relationships

A big focus during the holidays is connecting with others. This theme should come through in your characters and their relationships. Focus on how your characters interact with one another, whether they’re family, friends, or even strangers who cross paths during the season. The dynamics between characters can reflect the larger themes of your story—whether it’s a reunion, reconciliation, or the discovery of new connections.

Developing authentic relationships—whether they’re romantic, familial, or platonic—helps to ground your holiday story in real emotions and makes your readers more likely to connect with it. If characters are given depth and complexity, their holiday experiences will feel more meaningful.

A holiday story must capture the senses and the atmosphere

One of the best things about a holiday story is the setting: the lights, the decorations, the music, and the smells. Use sensory elements to create a rich atmosphere that immerses your readers. Don’t overdo it, but a few well-placed details can make a huge difference.

Some senses to use:

the smell of pine from a freshly cut Christmas treethe sound of carolers singing in the streetthe feel of crisp, cold air on a snowy evening

The setting of your story can also reflect the emotional tone. A snowy, quiet night could symbolize peace and introspection, while a bustling holiday market might evoke feelings of excitement or chaos. Use the environment to complement the emotions your characters are experiencing.

Incorporate traditions and rituals

Traditions are a key part of many holiday celebrations. Whether it’s cooking a special dish, lighting candles, exchanging gifts, or singing specific songs, traditions ground people in their personal history and cultural identity. In your holiday story, you can use these rituals to reveal more about your characters and their backgrounds.

Dig a little deeper to show how these rituals impact the characters emotionally. Maybe a character dreads family gatherings because they’re filled with tension, or maybe they cherish the holidays because they’ve always been a time of love and connection. You can also invent new traditions for your characters to engage with, adding a sense of personal touch to the story.

A holiday story taps into the “magic” of the season

Holiday fiction taps into the emotions that come with the season. Whether it’s the joy of togetherness, the comfort of tradition, or the hope for personal growth, these stories speak to the human experience.

By focusing on universal themes, avoiding clichés, creating compelling characters, and infusing sensory details, you can craft holiday fiction that resonates with your audience and captures the true spirit of the season. So, let’s embrace the season’s “magic” and show the warmth and wonder in your story.

Read Creative Exercises to Spark Inspiration and Improve Your Writing, and then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 38 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children and used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024! The second in the series releases on Feb. 25, 2025!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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From Hook to Inciting Incident – What Fiction Writers Need to Know

From hook to inciting incident – what does that mean?

Well, when it comes to writing fiction, one of the most critical aspects to master is how to hook your readers right from the start. The opening moments of your story—where you capture attention and set the stage—can determine whether someone will continue reading or put the book down.

Alongside this, the inciting incident propels the plot forward and ensures that readers remain invested throughout the narrative.

These two elements, the hook and the inciting incident, are crucial in guiding stories from a strong beginning to an exciting, unpredictable middle. In this blog post, we’ll explore how to effectively create hooks and inciting incidents that will make your story irresistible.

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What Is a Hook?

A hook is a literary device used to captivate the reader’s attention at the very beginning of the story. According to Savannah Gilbo, “The Hook is your first opportunity to grab the readers’ attention and make them wonder what’s going to happen next. It’s what gives the reader a reason to keep reading after your first page.”

A good hook is like an invitation into your world, offering enough intrigue that they can’t resist reading more. Think of it like the opening of a great movie trailer that leaves you with a sense of curiosity or an emotional pull. The hook doesn’t need to be elaborate or complex, but it should resonate and spark curiosity.

Types of Hooks

There are a variety of ways to create a hook, and each method can work differently depending on the tone, genre, and style of the story you’re telling. Here are a few examples:

Mysterious Opening: Begin with a statement that raises a question in the reader’s mind. Something ambiguous or unexplained can compel readers to seek out answers.“By the time Ella realized she was lost, the storm had already started.”Provocative Statement: Start with a bold, unexpected, or controversial claim that gets people thinking.“Everyone knows you can’t trust a thief. But what if the thief is your best friend?”Action: A high-stakes scene that immediately thrusts the reader into the middle of action or conflict can work wonders, particularly in genres like thriller or adventure.“The gunshot rang out, and as the crowd scattered, Sarah was the only one standing.”Setting the Mood: A strong sensory detail or evocative description that sets the mood or atmosphere of the story.“The air in the small town felt different today—heavier like it was bracing for something terrible.”Dialogue: Starting with a snippet of intriguing or puzzling dialogue can draw the reader in by making them want to know the context or background of the conversation.“No, I didn’t kill her. But I know who did.”

Whatever route you choose, the key is to create a sense of immediate engagement that makes the reader want to continue and discover more.

The Importance of the Inciting Incident

While the hook grabs attention, the inciting incident is the moment that sets everything in motion. It’s a key event that shakes up the status quo of your protagonist’s life and pushes them into the central conflict of the story. Without it, the plot may feel aimless or meandering. The inciting incident is typically introduced early in the story—sometimes in the first few pages—and it creates the narrative momentum that carries the story forward.

The inciting incident doesn’t need to be an earth-shattering event, but it should be significant enough to disrupt the protagonist’s world in some way. It’s what forces the character to take action and sets them on a course they can’t ignore.

According to Jerry Jenkins, “A successful novel must feature an event, known as the inciting incident, that irreversibly ignites the story. The stronger your inciting incident, the more dramatic, compelling, and engrossing your novel.”

Characteristics of a Strong Inciting IncidentIt’s Unexpected: The inciting incident should feel like a surprise—something that challenges the character’s expectations or desires.In The Hunger Games, Katniss’s life is upended when her sister, Prim, is chosen for the deadly games. This is the inciting incident that sends Katniss into the arena.It Forces Change: The event should force the protagonist to act or change in some way, even if they don’t want to. It pushes them out of their comfort zone.In Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, Harry’s life changes when he receives his Hogwarts letter, prompting him to leave the ordinary world behind and enter a world of magic.It’s Relevant to the Central Conflict: The inciting incident should be closely tied to the theme or main problem of the story. This creates cohesion between the story’s setup and its resolution.In The Great Gatsby, Gatsby’s pursuit of Daisy is sparked by his desire to reclaim the past, an inciting incident that drives the entire narrative.It Establishes Stakes: The inciting incident reveals what’s at risk. The character has something to lose, and this event pushes them toward the central conflict that will unfold.In The Lord of the Rings, Frodo’s peaceful life is upended when Gandalf reveals the true nature of the ring, setting him on a dangerous path.

Crafting a Seamless Transition from Hook to Inciting Incident

For both hooks and inciting incidents to be effective, they must work together smoothly. A hook should introduce a sense of intrigue or establish a situation that naturally leads to the inciting incident.

Ideally, the hook should raise a question or present an issue that the inciting incident resolves or makes inevitable.

For example, if your hook is a mysterious line about someone being chased, the inciting incident could reveal why the person is running or who is after them, effectively answering the question raised by the hook.

In the end

In the end, the hook and inciting incident are foundational elements that shape the pacing, tension, and structure of the narrative. By mastering these two tools, you can ensure your readers are not only captivated from the start but also stay invested throughout the journey.

Whether you choose a mystery, a high-stakes action moment, or a character-driven opening, the key is to make the hook irresistible and the inciting incident the spark that ignites your story’s conflict. With careful attention to both, you’ll set your narrative on a compelling path, one that entices readers to stay with your characters through thick and thin.

Read Crafting a Writer’s Mood Board and then follow me on Pinterest, Facebook, and Instagram, and subscribe to my newsletter to keep up with news about my book and any special offers! Be sure you grab your FREE 10-step checklist to plan your novel when you subscribe!

Hi, I’m Jen! I’ve been married for over 37 years, have 5 amazing kids and 3 adorable grandkids. I homeschooled our three youngest children, and I used to blog about homeschooling. I also taught Oral Communication as an adjunct instructor for over 5 years.

Jen Dodrill Writes is born of a passion of mine – to write a novel! My first cozy mystery, Birds Alive!, released Feb. 27, 2024!

When I’m not working, you’ll find me writing, spending time with my family, or curled up on the couch reading and drinking a mug of dark roast coffee. (Don’t forget to check out my mug shop – JDMugs!)

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