Two parts done, mixed feelings so far. Still have a bit of trouble distinguishing the characters & where they come from, but that's probably due to real life, not the writing. One thing that bugs me enormously: they have all kinds of bots and other advanced technology, but somehow no cctv to find out who stole at Tessa's work place. That just doesn't make any sense, especially not in such a context.
— Aug 19, 2018 01:29PM
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