I like everything about this so far...except that the heroine's immediate response to being pressed into criminal activity is to think "Welp, I definitely can't tell my crew about this, never mind that we're all friends and they trust me and I may have feelings for one of them, there's just no way I can let them in on the situation." Forced conflict, not cool.
— Dec 09, 2020 05:51AM
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