It's the conversation that's weird in this book. The story is good, but the conversation is off. Did people really talk this way? They don't any more, if they did. I don't know. I'm not impressed with the writing. I'll continue though, because I'd like to see what happens. Still, the conversation...at times, it's hard to figure out how said what. It's either too fast, or poorly written. Maybe both.
— Oct 09, 2011 07:24PM
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