*groans* unfortunately, this author relies heavily on telling us lots, showing very little.
We’re told they’ve called for one another — I don’t feel it, see it, or buy it.
We’re told 10 days at sea makes me change his ways — none of that struggle, none of that decision making, is shown on the page. Instead we get a two-year time jump lol.
1/2
— Sep 15, 2024 01:15AM
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