Clockwork Angel
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Jun 17, 2012 04:11PM
"You can't take her because I won't let you" said Will through gritted teeth. He lunged for the automaton woman with his blade just as Tessa and Jem walked through the door...
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"What's going on?!" shouted Jem as he pushed Tessa protectively behind him
"This thing came here to take Tessa"Will managed to grunt out he was on top of the automation struggling to keep it from Tessa and Jem.
((omg guys))"He wants her...must obey." The automaton said in its monotonous voice as it wriggled. Tessa screeched, reaching for the broom in the corner of the room, but the automaton quickly shot its hand up, driving it into Will's skull
((btw, I always wanted jem to be a toad. he so much better that way :)))
"Will"Tessa screamed and tried to run to him but the automation picked her up and.....
Tessa had to think fast as the automaton's metallic hands dug into her sides. Suddenly she changed holding the nearest item she could find. Since that was the automaton who belonged to Mortmain, she changed into him. "Stop" she ordered in Mortmain's voice and the machine abruptly let go of her and stepped back...
'Yes, master. Your words are my command.''Put Will down. NOW.' Tessa ordered. 'Now leave immediately until further instructions.'
"Oh wait just a moment " said Tessa remembering something, "tell me where you are based? and what your purpose is?". The automaton turned around to answer..
(Lol. I really cant help laughing. Tessa was all stern and commanding. Then, she's like Oh wait a minute. Lol.)
((Lol yeah I thought maybe the automaton should tell them where they are based so the shadowhunters can go and destroy all of them, I didn't want them sending the automaton away without getting any useful info :))
((lol. But still....))While the Automan was distracted, Jem lept up on it and with his sereph blade and slashed through the silvery metal....
and the real Mortmain walked in...
i was shocked, i froze but Will and Jem moved into action.
but they fell straight through him and fell face-first to the floor. "you can't touch me." Will and Jem got up, their faces a mirror image of each others'. shock covered all their features-along with Jem's blood nose. "It's my new invention-I call it a projection," Mortmain explained.
"I can't touch you, either. Just talk." He smiled and i looked away as i changed back into myself. "Finally!" He laughed, "I looked silly in that dress!" Jem frowned, "Then what's the point of your invention?" He had tended to his nose-Holding a strip of cloth to it, his voice muffled,
"sorry?" Mortmain asked.
this time Jem was a bit clearer, "I said, what's the point of the projection."
(why the hell justin beiber showed in this story ? and what about the enemy being able to walk at the institute with ease ? )"Nothing, really I just want to know where the hell is my cd !" Mortmain said. Will, Jem and Tessa were dumbstruck, because they don't know a boy named Justin Beiber for crying outloud it's Queen Victoria's Era.
((Lol, i forgot about that, i didn't start it though :))"i have automans lined up at the door-and unless you come with me, they will attack. Your choice."
he shook his head, "never mind. Just give me the girl." Both the Boys-Will and Jem stood protectively in front of me.
Will and Jem Jumped into action. I was afraid for Jem-he had lost so much blood because of his nose-and he usually had some Yin Fin before he fought. he had a massive disadvantage.
The Projected Mortmain laughed as Jem and Will hit the floor again. Jems' nose had started bleeding fresh blood and his parabati helped him up.
"I'm a lot smarter than you give me credit for," Mortmain said, smiling. Will went right up to him-seeing as they couldn't hurt each other, "You leave, right now or i will summon all of the shadowhunters i can-and they will not be as grateful as i am being, now."
Jem sat leaning against the wall, and Will sighed, relived. When charlotte comes back-we are telling her everything, okay." we nodded, "Jem-You'd better rest-you look like crap." he nodded and headed off to his room-cloth still pressed up against his nose, "Will..." he turned to me,"Yes?"
"um, i have to tell you something...
(I don't like Tessa being I. I'm changing. Just don't ask me why.)'What is it? Will. You know you could have told me when you were singing 'Call me Maybe' right?' Tessa smiled slightly.
'Yes. I know. But this is just...' Will's beautiful voice trailed off. He was confused. And he didn't want Tessa to be hurt or confused because of him.
To love is to destroy,to be loved is to be the one destroyed.
Will didn't want to destroy Tessa, not ever in a million years. But he wanted to tell her how much, just how much he craved for her, thinking of her every single second.
They could hear Jem coughing from his room. Tessa's blood ran cold. "Will, earlier on Jem came to my room and.."
Will's blue eyes narrowed at her words. "And..?" he said raising an eyebrow.
"He asked me for my hand in marriage" she said quietly.
"What?! does Jem love you? He never said anything to me".
Tessa watched Will's expression harden, suddenly he looked quite distressed. He now undertstood why he felt his heart break earlier on.
"You declined his offer" he concluded in an accusing tone while stepping away from Tessa.
"You broke his heart" with that he sprinted off towards Jem's room.
(Actually, I thought Tessa told Jem that Will proposed to her already?? Am very confused now...)'I didn't even answer.' Tessa said though to no one.
Meanwhile,
Will reached Jem's room. He was slightly breathless from all the sprinting.
'JEM! Are...' Will gasped.
Jem was lying on the floor, but what was most shocking is that his chest ain't rising and falling normally, but rather raggedly.
[My god! Please, dont let Jem die!!]
((Tessa told Jem that Will proposed to her when she turned him down but she never told Will that Jem proposed to her))"Charlotte! come quick" shouted Will as he dropped to his knees and held Jem in his arms.
(Good. Thanks for clearing my doubts btw. :P)'Of course Charlotte ain't there.' Will thought, swearing loudly, with great volume and speed. He grabbed Jem's shirt and yanked it off, fumbling for his stele, he drew an iratze.
"Will..." Jem said in a thin, sickly voice. "I think...that it's time for me to-" Jem broke off in a fit of coughs. Will rush to get the water on the bedside table."I think it's time for me to leave..."
Will wasn't going to give up that easily, though. He simply looked at Jem and said, "No."
"You have to let me go" Jem said between coughs.
"No, you WILL NOT die," Will said, his voice breaking. "You can't...""Tell Tessa...that she can have you now...you deserve her," Jem said weakly before he took a deep breath and...
(omg I just can't finish that line...I don't like gem but I CANT! Can someone please do it?!!!
(I can't either!!) His eyes drooped slowly shut. Will looked frantically towards Jem's chest and saw that it was still rising and falling with some effort, but he was still breathing nonetheless. He'd simply succumbed to exhaustion and fallen asleep.
Katie wrote: "(I can't either!!) His eyes drooped slowly shut. Will looked frantically towards Jem's chest and saw that it was still rising and falling with some effort, but he was still breathing nonetheless...."(Im gonna do it!!!!!! AAH HERE I GO!)
Will sat there for what seemed like forever. Suddenly he heard a whimper come from beside him.
"Jem?" Will asked in a frantic voice. "Are you okay?"
Jam laughed in a weak raspy voice. "No Will. Do I look okay?"
Will smiled slightly.
Jem's smile wiped off his face quickly. He screamed in agony.
Will reached for Jems hand, trying to comfort him, but they didn't stop.
"Will..." Jem said, "I...love you, brother"
They were the last odds he said before his hand went slack.
Will closed his eyes, tears pouring down his face as he bent over. He reached over and shut his eyes.
Marie wrote: "Katie wrote: "(I can't either!!) His eyes drooped slowly shut. Will looked frantically towards Jem's chest and saw that it was still rising and falling with some effort, but he was still breathin..."whoops I meant words POOR JEM I CANT BELIEV I DID THAT
Tears slid down Will's face. He knelt beside his dead friend, too shocked to move. Suddenly, the door slowly started to creak open...
He raised his head above his newly deceased friend, ready to kill the next person that came through the door. He had enough self control for that before he became a blubering mess...
Tessa stepped through cautiously. "How is he?" Tessa asked worriedly.
Will lost all control. His face scrunched up as he began to cry again. Tessa rushed over to hug him, holding his head in her arm as he bent over, tears pouring out of his eyes. Tessa cried with him silently, holding Will's head on her lap as he broke down in sobs.
((i didnt really like Jem that much but I started to cry when he died))Meanwhile Tessa was struggling or composure as well. She had loved Jem too but as a friend. Now he was gone, she would never see his silver eyes again.
Then they heard a soft sound from where Jem was laying, a groan Tessa looked over at him and his eyes fluttered open. "Will" Tessa said......
When he didn't respond she said started to repeat it each time she said his name was a bit louder than before until she was yelling. Finally, he looked up to see Jem struggling to sit up, at least until Will gently pushed him back down.
(OMG!! I AM SO FREAKING MAD!! I TOLD YOU ALL SPECIFICALLY NOT TO KILL HIM!!)
FYI he's not dead...
(For your information, I am referring to the people before you. -.-Thanks for making him live anyway.)
Will was relieved. So was Tessa who was now crying.
'Jem... Jem... You must live. Must LIVE!' Tessa cried.
Will felt like comforting that heartbroken girl, but his own broken heart was too much for him to bear. So was the disturbing thought of Jem who was on the verge of dying.
(You're welcome.)Will was physically and emotionally exhausted, so he was quite relieved (and a little confused) when Tessa finally found the point where she could no longer keep consciousness and passed out next to Jem. After sharing a knowing look with his parabatai he scooped her up in one arm and helped and supported Jem with other. After he had helped Jem to his room he took Tessa to her's and set her on her bed. He was about to leave when he caught sight of her looking so peaceful and decided to stay for awhile.
Tessa's gray eyes opened and locked with Will's blue ones,"are you okay?" Tessa inquirered. "Is Jem okay.... yes we're fine Will told her...
[Lol.]'What? Are you blaming me? Is that your way of saying thanks? Wow, I really appreciate your thanks.' Will said, amused.
Now Tessa was really confused. Then, she realized something. "Wait!" she exclaimed "What are doing in my room?" she demanded horrified.
"no, i didn't mean it like that." she paused, "Go." sh ordered him, Will looked slightly confused,"What?"
Tessa smiled, "Go, look after Jem."
a wave of relief flooded over Will, when he realized that she wasn't sending him away. "Okay." He said, and with that-he went to comfort his Parabati.
((Oh, By the way-they have cast three characters for the Mortal Instruments movie: Jace, Clary and Isabelle :))
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