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(After Cassy, because I think if someone is honestly trying to contribute to the story and make it good, then they should have an equal chance of posting as everyone else. We should all be able to express our creativeness and not be shot down by anyone else.)Jem sat up wincing, gripping his shoulder. He tore open his shirt sleeve to reveal a tiny silver dart sticking out of his flesh. He grunted in pain as he pulled it out to examine it.
"Tracking device," Will said, pulling a similar one out of his arm.
Jem threw the little device to the side in disgust and edged towards Tessa.
She was laying on the ground, her screams having dissolved into moans, shivering uncontrollably, her face ashen.
"Jem . . ." she croaked. "I'm cold . . . I'm so cold."
"You'll be okay, Tess. Y-You'll be okay," Jem tried to reassure her, though his voice shook. He pressed the back of his hand to her forehead. "You're burning up, Tessa."
(is this fight a dream or actually happening?, im confused)
I think Cassy had a typo and left out the 's' in 'wasn't', accidentally making it 'want.' So, I actually think it's really happeneing. I think. lol
"Jem give her a hand we need to find a way out of here even if the will be able to find us I just don't want to be here." Jem having no other way to pick her up because of his hurt shoulder hauled her over his good one and looked to will who was writing open runes all over the wall till he found the hidden door which swung open and let in blinding light.
(Um... Is this thread dead? Anywayz...)It turns out to be Magnus' light. (His warlock power.)
'Magnus!! It's so great to see you here. Tessa, she's -' Jem said quickly. He glanced at Tessa, who had somehow fainted.
'Ugh! Just out of the way.' Will growled. He took out his witchlight and pushed past Magnus, who looked somewhat surprised.
Down the dark and twisting corridor, the four of them went. In what seems like an hour, they heard sounds. Screeching sounds.
'Ravener Demons. I will keep them busy.' Magnus said, trying to push past Will.
'No. You protect Jem and Tessa. I'll be right behind you.' Will said. 'Harahel.'
And his knife flashed with a burst of light
(!!!!! yay the thread died or something and i was really worried,,,,,but its back!!!!!!)
(Okay...)Will crept closer to the sounds, trying to be as quiet as he possibly could. Magnus had agreed to stay with Tessa and Jem.
He shouldn't be worried.He slashed his seraph blade into a Ravener Demon who opened it's gaping bloody mouth and tried to snap at Will.
'Curse you.' Will snarled as he slashed viciously at it's mouth.
Another demon charged towards Will, it's stinger ready to strike.
'Will!!' Jem shouted at him. He ignored it.
He heard a loud noise behind him, and was unable to turn around in time.
Crash! Bash! It was a terrifying sound.
'You should have been more careful and not to overestimate yourself.' Jem's smooth and comforting voice said.
His left hand which was gripping his blade hard was dripping green and black blood.
Btw, Ravener Demon look like this. I think. :)
"i did have a plan you know I was going to stab it with my knife" Will replied dripping sarcasm "before or after it killed you?" Jem asked a smile slowly spreading across his face
Areeba wrote: "salmon?"Huh?
(Ugh!! Come on. Keep posting. I don't want to be the only one here. Quite miserable...)
Bsp wrote: ""i did have a plan you know I was going to stab it with my knife" Will replied dripping sarcasm "before or after it killed you?" Jem asked a smile slowly spreading across his face""Before obviously then who would be the sarcastic handsome one?
Jem just rolled his eyes.
"come on we have to go back to mangus and tessa" said jem, helping will to his feet.but as soon as will got to his feet he fell to the floor unconsisous. Jem sighed but winced after he saw a big gash on his back.so jem carried WIll and walking back to Mangus so he could heal him.
♥ T.M.I ♥ wrote: "Gray"people
Steph wrote: "♥ T.M.I ♥ wrote: "Gray"people"
Are awesome. :)
"Do you boys ever stay out f trouble and by that I mean when ever you dont need me to fix something" Magnus sighed with a dramatic exasperated sigh "but no one we know, knows as brilliant of magic as you" Will muttered yes still closed but Magnus was quick to reply "that would because I'm the only one who can use magic that you know"
'And that just shows how awesome my darling brother is.' Tessa added hastily, giving Jem a sideways grin.Jem smiled idiotically.
'Ah, Tessa. If only you were mine. Mine.' Jem thought dreamily.
'JEM!! JAMES CARSTAIRS!! We need to keep going.’ Will snapped. ‘Before Mortmain comes after us.'
This is the most weirdst story ever kick butt of heaven??? Seriously
"jem looked distracted" thought Will,so he he told jem to come here."what about tessa and mangus" jem asked."just take them with us" will said simpily
And then Tessa falls through a hole in the floor. (:
tessa screamed. will and jem looked shocked
they called tessa's name but she did not reply
Finally, Will jumps through the hole to save the love of his life.
'WILL! You idiottt!!' Jem shrieked, dragging Magnus who looked baffled with him. They jumped into the hole.
It was dark and damp when they hit the hard stone floor of the tunnel and Jem could hear Will shouting at them "we need to put her in some kind of magical cage or something I swear" as they all sprinted through the cave.
In there haste to help Tessa they accidentally dropped her she woke up and looked into there eyes suddenly her head filled with Images of past ,and future she screamed when it was all over she suddenly knew what her heart desired from the very first moment she looked up only to see Magnus,Will and Jem looking up at her she said in a very small voice "I think I'm cured can you give me a second alone with Jem please" alll obeyed will and Mangus went far off do they wouldn't here she spoke to Jem " Dear Jem You must listen I have alwaysed cared for you that is why I must set You free I choose will if will have me From the very start then I illusioned myself that I might choose you I'm so sorry for my cruelty and I hope we'll be friends " Jem silently nodded helped her up and went back to Will befor he turned she could see tears in his eyes when the United Will looked in a curious look to them she spoke "can you teleport us back please ? I'm fine " Mangus waved his hands and suddenly the instatute Materialized in front of them right when she looked to the right she saw Jem collapsesed and said I need to go to Japan they have the cure " what ? Exclaimed every one " trust me I need to go there are else I'll die to this address Magnus quickly I'll be there about 5-forever years I don't know please " Mangus looked at Will to Tessa , Will looked at his friend and told Mangus " do it "
At least he will live Mangus spoke up and said this may kill you my dear shadow hunter" but Jem just nodded and he reached out and pulled Will close and wispered in a low voice so just he could here and said 10 simple words:" she chose you I love you protect her always" will was dumb struck but Jem pushed him away and Pulled Tessa close and said U will always love you then Mangus annoyed its time so they all stepped back and let Mangus work his magic Jem rose up in the air then dissapeared for ever
-AA
Three days later they got a message confirming Jem deaths and a coffin to burry Will still didn't tell Tessa he knew at the funeral Tessa everybody cried Even Will right befor they put the coffin in the ground he proposed to Tessa who said ......
"im sorry will. i cant do this now" said tessawill looked stricken.
"Sorry Tessa" he apologised quickly. "I didn't mean to be so forward with you".
'It's not your fault.' Tessa said then.Silver tears, which reminded Will so much of Jem's hair, trickled down Tessa's cheek.
'It's...It's...' Tessa said, swallowing painfully.
'Is it because of Jem? That you're so afraid, so... unwilling to marry me?' Will asked.
Tessa looked at Will, as if she had been slapped.
tessa nodded a little.i just need time to think she said and left.
What happened to the one word story idea?
(Oh. Hey Ashley. We kind of abolish that a longgg time ago. We can't really achieve anything with that. So, yeah... :D Hope you don't mind.)
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