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Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon.
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Aug 06, 2012 07:08AM
EH? I don't know what he looks like...
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HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL.
Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."SHUT UP LAV LET ME BE HAPPY FOR ONCE
Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."I saw his face on your Facebook months ago, though. Just sayin'.
Colby wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."I saw his face on yo..."
Lucky :( hahahaha
~Yue~ [Starless Nights Will Cover Day] wrote: "Well, like it or not, Holden is a flower, pretending to be a human. BUT HE CAN'T FOOL ME"
So this happened:Dear Colby Cox,
Thank you for submitting your work to the Bellevue Literary Review. We appreciate the efforts that have gone into this piece.
Unfortunately, given the volume of submissions we receive, even quality work often has to be declined. Please be assured that your piece was read thoroughly and given careful consideration by our editorial staff.
We wish you luck in placing this elsewhere, and apologize for not being able to offer a personal reply.
Sincerely,
The Editors
Bellevue Literary Review
www.BLReview.org
Yup, it's my first. I'm fine with it, as Brigid has given me stuff to improve upon, but it's not like I would have been bothered too much if it got published anyways ;)
That said, I applied to Dairy Queen today, and, knowing the type of people who work at Dairy Queen, I will be pretty upset if I get rejected there.
I deleted my rejection so that it wouldn't be on my email and depress me. XD I'm just going to save them all on a word document so that when I get published I can giggle at them. At least the letter was nice.
Yeah, it's always sad at first. :/ Good idea! It's definitely an important part of the writing process.
Indeed! It would've been a lot worse if they said, "Sorry, but we hate your writing. We read the first sentence and threw up. Never send anything here again."
Indeed! It would've been a lot worse if they said, "Sorry, but we hate your writing. We read the first sentence and threw up. Never send anything here again."
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Colby wrote: "So this happened:
Dear Colby Cox,
Thank you for submitting your work to the Bellevue Literary Review. We appreciate the efforts that have gone into this piece.
Unfortu..."
I think that letter about sums up my whole life. Anyway, sorry about your rejection. D: But I'm glad my feedback helped you!
Dear Colby Cox,
Thank you for submitting your work to the Bellevue Literary Review. We appreciate the efforts that have gone into this piece.
Unfortu..."
I think that letter about sums up my whole life. Anyway, sorry about your rejection. D: But I'm glad my feedback helped you!
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Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader.
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Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"
I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D
I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D
Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter. *high fives* We can form a club!"
I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no matter what and I write stuff that they wouldn't approve of and I don't let them read my nice writing anyways so I'm stuck until I leave home.
Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "LOOK EVERYONE. LAV CAN'T SING HIGH NOTES. SHAMELESS ADVERTISING: But you should watch anyways. Because Defying Gravity is a lovely song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1bXCnc..."
EVERYBODY IS SO TALENTED AND THEN THERE'S ME
Emily [But I am, most of all I am] wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter. *high fives* We can form a club!"
I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no ma..."
Your parents will be proud of you if you get published no matter how dark it is/what they think about it.
Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "Yeah, it's always sad at first. :/ Good idea! It's definitely an important part of the writing process. Indeed! It would've been a lot worse if..."
Haha, I feel that way too, Holden.
Holden wrote: "That was really good, Lav! Especially considering you're playing piano at the same time! :-D
(My favorite part is the pause at 2:46, where I can tell you're just saying to yourself, "oh god oh g..."
Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"
I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D"
Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"
Colby wrote: "LAV SHUT UP I LIKED IT."
Thanks guys! ... now I feel like I was fishing for compliments. WHICH IS TOTALLY NOT WHAT I WAS DOING. PSSH.
(And yeah, Holden. That part is insane. My head voice needs a lot of work. I never use it unless I have to. xD)
(My favorite part is the pause at 2:46, where I can tell you're just saying to yourself, "oh god oh g..."
Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"
I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D"
Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"
Colby wrote: "LAV SHUT UP I LIKED IT."
Thanks guys! ... now I feel like I was fishing for compliments. WHICH IS TOTALLY NOT WHAT I WAS DOING. PSSH.
(And yeah, Holden. That part is insane. My head voice needs a lot of work. I never use it unless I have to. xD)
Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "LOOK EVERYONE. LAV CAN'T SING HIGH NOTES. SHAMELESS ADVERTISING: But you should watch anyways. Because Defying Gravity is a lovely song.
http:/..."
Oh, weird! That's actually not the reason I recorded it. Unless it was subconscious or something. I was home alone and when I'm home alone I like to play the piano and sing loudly and I liked how I sounded that day so I recorded it. xD
http:/..."
Oh, weird! That's actually not the reason I recorded it. Unless it was subconscious or something. I was home alone and when I'm home alone I like to play the piano and sing loudly and I liked how I sounded that day so I recorded it. xD
Emily [But I am, most of all I am] wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter.
*high fives* We can form a club!"
I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no ma..."
Technically your parents wouldn't have to know if something you wrote got published...
*high fives* We can form a club!"
I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no ma..."
Technically your parents wouldn't have to know if something you wrote got published...
Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "How do you publish a book and not have your parents know?"
Well, usually when books are published they don't skyrocket to the best sellers list, and unless your parents keep track of all the new releases of books, I doubt they'd even see it. You probably aren't going to be publishing a book until you're out of the house, so they wouldn't find out you were going through the process unless you told them. There are also things like pen names that are handy in situations like that.
Well, usually when books are published they don't skyrocket to the best sellers list, and unless your parents keep track of all the new releases of books, I doubt they'd even see it. You probably aren't going to be publishing a book until you're out of the house, so they wouldn't find out you were going through the process unless you told them. There are also things like pen names that are handy in situations like that.
Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "Holden wrote: "That was really good, Lav! Especially considering you're playing piano at the same time! :-D
(My favorite part is the pause at..."
I don't know very much about music, but from what I've picked up in choir (so don't take this is a textbook definition or anything), head voice is the light, airy higher voice and you're singing "from your head" and then there's chest voice, which is the lower range and it comes from your diaphragm and has a sound that's more rich and full. My chest voice sounds a lot better than my head voice, but when you start getting to a certain point, you have to use the head voice because the chest voice can't reach the notes. The notes my voice cracked on or wavered on happened because I didn't have a smooth transition into head voice or because I tried to sing the higher notes in chest voice and it didn't work very well. xD
(My favorite part is the pause at..."
I don't know very much about music, but from what I've picked up in choir (so don't take this is a textbook definition or anything), head voice is the light, airy higher voice and you're singing "from your head" and then there's chest voice, which is the lower range and it comes from your diaphragm and has a sound that's more rich and full. My chest voice sounds a lot better than my head voice, but when you start getting to a certain point, you have to use the head voice because the chest voice can't reach the notes. The notes my voice cracked on or wavered on happened because I didn't have a smooth transition into head voice or because I tried to sing the higher notes in chest voice and it didn't work very well. xD
Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.The end,.
Holden wrote: "Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "How do you publish a book and not have your parents know?"KEEL THEM
Once you've left the house and they don't have to know everything that you're doing! Tho..."
Bah I don't want to wait until then but I have too.
With my Camp NaNo I could really care less because that's actually a nice, happy story.
Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.
The end,."
*high fives* That's fantastic! I admire sopranos. But I'm glad I'm an alto. xD
The end,."
*high fives* That's fantastic! I admire sopranos. But I'm glad I'm an alto. xD
Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.The end,."
*envious*
I have a really low and small vocal range AND IT SUCKS BECAUSE THERE'S NOT ONE SONG I CAN EVEN SING WITHOUT SWITCHING OCTAVES EVERY FREAKING VERSE BECAUSE IT'S EITHER TOO LOW OR TOO HIGH
Hehe, I have to do that too. I can actually sing along with guys who have higher voices a lot better than most girl singers.
Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.The end,."
*envious*
I have a r..."
DUDE I KNOW RIGHT. And then whenever I go down an octave my voice is way lower than all the other girls around and I feel really self-conscious (which I always do when I'm singing anyway because I'm not very good at it).
I think society's obsession with "good" voices is kind of ridiculous. People should be able to sing for fun without being judged and stared at.
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