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message 11301: by [deleted user] (new)

Ben sighed. "Fine. Don't talk to me. But at least listen."


message 11302: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby bit her lip to keep the groan from coming out. Just go away.


message 11303: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm sorry. Abby, I was just your age when I left. I had no idea what I was gonna do to keep myself from starving or freezing to death. Look Kid, I was gonna get you. I really was. As soon as I turned eighteen and they wouldn't have been able to do anything. I'm sorry I left you. Jeez kiddo, I've missed you to death."


message 11304: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby's eyes fluttered open, unable to resist the urge to see Ben's expression. She quickly snapped them shut. "I'm trying to sleep," she said into the pillow.


message 11305: by [deleted user] (new)

Ben sighed. "Night Abby. Love you."


message 11306: by Elliott (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:10AM) (new)

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"G'night."

((Now what? Next day?))


message 11307: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's a good idea.))


message 11308: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sure.))


message 11309: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby must've fallen asleep, even though she had no memory of ever drifting off, because the next time she opened her eyes, sunlight was sliding into the room. She moaned, still tired and burrowed under the covers trying to make it dark again.

((If he has windows in his room.))


message 11310: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Chesney woke up with the sun in her face and jolted out of her semi-awareness into being instantly alert. She calmed slightly when she saw that it was all due to her drapes having been pulled open sometime during the night. But who came in?

Arkady was in a Starbucks, sitting in a plush chair by the small gas fireplace, drinking a Cafe Americano with an extra shot of espresso.


message 11311: by [deleted user] (new)

Ben walked in and sat on the edge of the bed. "Good morning, sunshine."


message 11312: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She got out of the bed and winced as her warm toes met the icy cold of the hardwood floor. Chesney ran on her tiptoes to the bathroom and jumped in the shower with the water on Hot.


message 11313: by Elliott (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:24AM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It's too early to be awake," Abby moaned, but she came out from under the covers and sat up, her hair sticking out all over the place.


message 11314: by [deleted user] (new)

Shannon paced her old room and sighed, why did this always happen to her? What was it about her that made everyone love her? She couldn't see it. She moved on to thinking about this organization. There had to be more to it. There was no possible way they could make every single person on the Earth the same.
Shawn walked in and motioned for her to follow him silently. She did so and he led her down the hall to a room she'd never been in before. He crouched in front of a floor vent and patted the ground next to him. Shannon sat down and heard voices coming through the vent.


message 11315: by [deleted user] (new)

Ben grinned. "I missed your hair in the morning."


message 11316: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Oh shut it," Abby said, throwing a pillow at him.


message 11317: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:31AM) (new)

Ben laughed. "Okay, I'm gonna leave but I'll be back in a couple of hours. There's breakfast on the table, and I'll send Shannon over as soon as I can. Don't let anyone in. Lock all the doors and windows, she'll say something so you can recongize her. Anyway, bye." he kissed her forehead and walked out the door.


message 11318: by Elliott (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:41AM) (new)

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"Bye," Abby said, too tired to be curious about where Ben was going. She shut the curtains and tried to fall back asleep.


message 11319: by [deleted user] (new)

Ben went to find Shannon.


message 11320: by [deleted user] (new)

Mr. Matthew's and Jame's voices came through the vent.
"We've got every major company in the world under our control," James reported.
"Good, now what about governments," Mr, Matthews asked.
"We've got everyone but the US, sir," James replied.
"What are we going to do about that girl," The boss asked suddenly.
"We've got it all under control sir," James said. "We'll find her." Shannon stiffed a gasp, they were talking about her
"You've got to, she's the only one who can do it."
Shannon looked at Shawn and mouthed, "Do what?"
He shrugged his shoulders and got up. Shannon nodded, they had to get her out of there. even if she had even more questions then before.


message 11321: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments When she stepped out her long blonde hair was tangled. "I hate this hair...I'm going to cut it," Chesney smiled as she thought of what her mother would've said if she were there. She wrapped her towel around herself and brushed her hair until it was perfectly straight again.
Taking the scissors from her desk she ran back to the bathroom and used her comb to help her cut her hair.


message 11322: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:43AM) (new)

Ben burst through the door and saw Shannon standing by a vent. He grinned. "Well that was easy. I need you to do me a favor."


message 11323: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2010 11:47AM) (new)

"Shut up," Shannon whispered frantically. "I thought I lost you," She mumbled next.
Shawn looked at the guy then heard his father and James stir and wonder what the commotion was. "We've got to get out of here." He said then led the way out the door.
"How come you keep coming after me, I don't need your help!" Shannon told Ben.


message 11324: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby found it was going to be impossible to fall back asleep, so she got out of bed and went to the small kitchen to see what kind of food Ben had. Cereal. She frowned. She was kind of in the mood for a bagel and a frappechino. She checked her jeans pocket and realized she had forgotten to grab money. "I'm sure Ben has some money around here somewhere," she muttered and scanned his apartment. She searched high and low until she finally found a twenty dollar bill inside of a cup in his cupboard. She raised her eyebrows. "Okay then."
She quickly changed her shirt and ran her fingers through her hair trying to straighten it out, and left the apartment. I'll be back before Ben even knows I left.


message 11325: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments When she was done her hair hung only to her shoulders with layers and bangs. Chesney grinned at her reflection. "So there."
Back in her bedroom she got dressed and tramped down the wood stairs to the front foyer. "Shoes shoes.." she muttered, stopping only when she found her Converse All-Stars. Chesney sat on the bottom step and pulled on her high-tops, black with white laces in one and blue laces in the other.

Checking that she'd remembered to put in her contacts she slipped out her front door and closed it carefully behind her before walking slowly to the sidewalk and counting each step to keep from being bored.


Bored and hungry, Arkady set his cup down in the small table beside his seat and left his messenger bag in the chair when he stood and went to the counter for the second time that morning.


message 11326: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby left the apartment and watched as her breathe showed up in the chilly air. She walked a couple blocks until she came across a Starbucks. She walked in and stood in line to order, looking up at the menu, trying to decide between a Caramel Frappechino and a Double Chocolatey Chip Frappechino.


message 11327: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Arkady was just in front of her. "Yes, I'll get a ginger molasses cookie and a venti mocha frappuchino with extra espresso and whipped cream." He said his order with ease and leaned against the counter as he paid, slothing over to the other end to wait for his choices.


message 11328: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'll have a, um, Choclatey Chip Frappechino," Abby said softly, not looking the person at the counter in the eye.
"What was that?"
"A Ch- ch- chocolatey Chip F- frappechino," Abby tried to say louder, causing her to stutter.
"Okay," the worker rang her order up and she handed the money over the counter still not looking him in the eye. She slid her change in her pocket and went to wait for her order quietly.


message 11329: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Arkady smirked. That girl was either shy or or had never been to Starbucks. He was guessing the former.


message 11330: by [deleted user] (new)

((I have an idea...))

James needed to find Shannon there was no other way to put it, but maybe he could buy himself some time if he found a new subject for the boss.
He dialed Arkady on his cell, hoping he was available.


message 11331: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby fought the urge to start chewing on a piece of her hair.


message 11332: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments When 'Prom Queen' by Lil' Wayne started playing in Starbucks Arkady grinned and answered his phone. "What is it?"


message 11333: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's James. I need you to find someone for me." He started. "Shannon is still missing, and I need someone to keep the boss busy."


message 11334: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments He turned his back to the other customers. "How busy do you want him kept?"


message 11335: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby grabbed her Frappechino and looked around trying to figure out where the straws were.


message 11336: by [deleted user] (new)

"Long enough to find her, and it might take a while, you know how much pride he took in training her." James said scanning through lists of recruits while he talked.


message 11337: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Arkady chuckled. "Got it. Should I call you when I find someone? Or just show up?" He took his drink and cookie back to his seat and sat, putting his bag on the floor.


message 11338: by [deleted user] (new)

"Just show up," James said. "I don't want the boss thinking this was planned." He hoped this would work.


message 11339: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby sat down at a small table by the window so she could watch the people walking by. She sipped her drink slowly.


message 11340: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ha, right." Arkady laughed darkly. "Another question: does this person have to want to come?"


message 11341: by [deleted user] (new)

"No, but try not to make a big scene," James said, thinking about past experiences with trainees.


message 11342: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'll make sure they don't get a chance to make a scene. No worries, James."


message 11343: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ok, try to be quick about it too, the boss is getting impatient," James said and hung up, the boss was calling him.

((gtg, time for church!))


message 11344: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby looked down at her cup. It was already half gone. She sighed.


message 11345: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((kay. Talk to you later?))

Arkady cancelled the call and put his Blackberry back in his pocket. "This day has gotten considerably more interesting."


Chesley bounced along until she reached a park and then she strolled to a place where there were just a few people. This way, she wouldn't be overwhelmed by their emotions.


message 11346: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby saw a girl who looked like she was around her age staring at her. She looked down at her drink, trying to ignore her.


message 11347: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby looked up again and saw the girl still looking at her. She waved, shyly.


message 11348: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby frowned at the girl's weird expression. She guessed any other girl would probably go over and say hi. But she stayed firmly rooted to the table. If that girl wanted to talk to her, she would have to make the first move.


message 11349: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2010 03:18PM) (new)

Ben wondered what Abby was up to as he dragged Shannon outside.


message 11350: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Abby was starting to get really ticked off by the girl staring at her. Can't anyone just leave me in peace to drink my Frap? She drank the last few sips and got up to throw it away. She tripped over a chair right next to the girl and her trash went flying.


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