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"It should still be here..." She said felling along the back of the closet.
"Ah-ha!" She said, pulling a door open. "This way."
Shannon ducked into the dark tunnel.
"Ah-ha!" She said, pulling a door open. "This way."
Shannon ducked into the dark tunnel.
Shannon came to a fork in the tunnel, "Which way was it?" She remembered Lillie telling her which tunnel took her out, but the other tunnel led deeper into the mansion, which was the exact opposite place she wanted be.
Shannon took the left path, hoping desperately it was the right one. We'll find out soon enough, she thought.
Shannon took the left path, hoping desperately it was the right one. We'll find out soon enough, she thought.
"You sure we're going the right way?" he asked, just to pressure her.
"Shhh" Shannon said annoyed but she wasn't really sure this was the right way. She didn't remember this many turns. She was about to turn back and go the other way when she saw a door in front of her.
"Finally!" She said relieved. She listened at the door and hearing nothing she walked into a brightly lite room.
"Finally!" She said relieved. She listened at the door and hearing nothing she walked into a brightly lite room.
Shannon smiled at the people. "Oops! Well, if you'll excuse use, we'll just go this way." She said walking to wards the door.
Ben smirked at her, "Told you."
"Shut up," Shannon said almost walking into someone.
"You look familiar," He said, almost smirking.
Shannon gasped, it was the guy from her apartment. She grabbed Ben's hand, "Well, we'd love to stay and chat, but we have places to be, people to see." She ran out the door dragging Ben behind her.
"You look familiar," He said, almost smirking.
Shannon gasped, it was the guy from her apartment. She grabbed Ben's hand, "Well, we'd love to stay and chat, but we have places to be, people to see." She ran out the door dragging Ben behind her.
Ben ran after her. "So... Why exactly are you here?" he whispered.
"I don't know, I never found out, and no one would tell me..." Shannon said then stopped running. "I'm going to find out!" She turned down a hallway with new conviction.
"No, you're not. Let's leave." he said, grabbing her arm.

"Territorial are we?" Josiah laughed "Salem, I like her she'll be difficult to read.""
Damien nodded. "As I said before: we'll have a good time."
"So you're going to tell me what I can and can't do too," Shannon snapped, pulling her arm out of his grip. She shook her head and jogged down the hallway, away from Ben and towards Shawn.
Ben rolled his eyes and kept walking. "Good luck." he called out.
"I don't need it!" Shannon called back to him, "You do!" She saw the guy who'd been in her house walking toward Ben. She hurried away from the scene and walked into Shawn's room.
"Hey!" The guy called to Ben. "What are you doing here?"
"Hey!" The guy called to Ben. "What are you doing here?"
"I'm actually just leaving, but thanks for asking. Bye." he sped off down the hallway.
"Don't let him leave," James ((the guy)) said to a group of men, pointing after Ben's fleeing figure. "He's seen too much!"
"Shawn," Shannon said looking around and saw no one. She smiled, her plan had been to confront him, but this may work better. She started to look through all the papers in his desk.
The group of men ran after Ben, and seeing him drive away in a car they came back one of them explaining the situation.
"Then find him!" James yelled, Jordan wasn't going to like this.
"Then find him!" James yelled, Jordan wasn't going to like this.
Ben drove around aimlessly in case he was being followed.
((gtg, last post!))
The men quickly got into cars and drove off trying to find Ben. James shook his head, two failures in one day, this was not good.
One of the men saw Ben's car and kept a tab on it, but stayed far enough back to seem like a normal person, not a pursuer.
The men quickly got into cars and drove off trying to find Ben. James shook his head, two failures in one day, this was not good.
One of the men saw Ben's car and kept a tab on it, but stayed far enough back to seem like a normal person, not a pursuer.
Ben kept driving around.
((Awww bye))
((Awww bye))
((Gwendalynn, dear, I know you´re online..))
((oh, sorry! I didn't see that! But this is my last post, my sisters kicking me off..well, she already did, but I'm butting into her time)
The man called for back-up and told them Ben's position, surrounding him and blocking him in between four cars.
The man called for back-up and told them Ben's position, surrounding him and blocking him in between four cars.
((Haha, nice.))
Ben swore and silently cursed Shannon.
Ben swore and silently cursed Shannon.
The cars slowly decreased in speed until the came to a complete stop. One man got out of his car and knocked on Ben's window.
Ben rolled the window down, sighing. "What?"
"Don't make any trouble, just get into that car," He said pointing to the car he'd just left.
"You've trespassed on private property," He said, smiling as if he were a genius. He'd not realized he'd need a reason, and just thought it up.
Ben nodded. "Well... Considering I'm no longer trespassing, you should let me go."
"It's still on offense. You better come with me," He said, ready in case he had to take him by force.
Ben went, not so willingly.
The mad followed Ben into the house after they'd arrived. He kept a cautious eye and steered him to James' room.
((my sisters kicking me off again, UGGG!!! be on later!))
((my sisters kicking me off again, UGGG!!! be on later!))
((Awww okay.))
Ben walked in, glaring at the man.
Ben walked in, glaring at the man.
James waved the man out and looked at Ben, "So, what do you have to say for yourself?" He asked, he needed to figure out what this guy had seen while he had been in the mansion.
Shannon was frustrated, there was nothing! Only old notes, bills, and photo's. One photograph caught her eye, it looked like Jordan, Shawn, and Mr. Matthews. It never occurred to her how much alike they all looked and they did have the same last name. How could she not see it.
She shook her head, she had to be more observant this time. She cautiously walked into the hallway, maybe there was something in Jordan's room.
Shannon was frustrated, there was nothing! Only old notes, bills, and photo's. One photograph caught her eye, it looked like Jordan, Shawn, and Mr. Matthews. It never occurred to her how much alike they all looked and they did have the same last name. How could she not see it.
She shook her head, she had to be more observant this time. She cautiously walked into the hallway, maybe there was something in Jordan's room.
Ben shrugged. "I'm going insane."
James wasn't pleased with his answer. "Why were you here?" He asked another question hoping it might get him the answers he needs.
Ben chuckled. "Because I'm going insane."
James jaw tightened, "So in other words, we should just send you to the nearest asylum?" He asked.
Ben chuckled. "No, you should let me leave, and I promise to never come back." He grinned.
"But how would I know if you decided not to keep your mouth shut about this?" James asked, although he would know.
Ben smiled. "You could always, you know, find a way to bribe me into silence."
"And if you decided to take the bribe and not be silent, where would we be then?" James said, he was getting nothing out of this guy.
"You could always look me up, find me, and do whatever you think is deserved," he shrugged.
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"This was Lillie's room," She said walking toward the closet.