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message 6951: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 06, 2010 02:15PM) (new)

"I liked the way my hand looked on your head," he began, smirking,
"In the presence of my knuckles,
But the beauty of this vision alone just like yesterdays sunset,
Has been converted by the sentimental and mistaken for love.

The Felix of your truth will always break it,
And the iris of your eye, always shake it,
And the armies yeah, the armies I have created,
Will always hate it, always bait you on, oh...

I liked the way my hand looked on your head,
In the presence of your struggle,
But the beauty of this vision alone I can't shake from my tree just yet,
It's invading all my private moments, listen to me now...

The Felix of your truth will always break it,
And the iris of your eye, always shake it,
And the armies yeah, the armies I have created,
Will always hate it, always bait you on, oh, oh no, c'mon...

Until I take their price,
Unitl I take their price, c'mon,
Until I take their price,
Until I take their price,
Until I take their price, deep inside my prayer,
Until I take their price.

The Felix of your truth will always break it,
And the iris of your eye, always shake it,
And the armies yeah, the armies I have created,
Will always hate it, always bait you on,
Until I take their price."


message 6952: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was confused by his song choice and voiced it. "And what is that supposed to mean?"


message 6953: by [deleted user] (new)

He shrugged and smiled. "You can take your own meaning from it."


message 6954: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well then," she scoffed. "It really doesn't matter, what do you want from me Ellis?"


message 6955: by [deleted user] (new)

"You. What I've always wanted." He laughed.


message 6956: by Ky (last edited Aug 22, 2010 11:33PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's not funny, I don't see why you're laughing. And I'm not something you can own Ellis." she said angrily.


message 6957: by [deleted user] (new)

He smirked. "Fine then. There're are few things I want from you. I'll ask for one every day. The one for today is... a kiss."


message 6958: by Ky (last edited Mar 06, 2010 02:29PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Never," she spat vehemently.


message 6959: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughed. "I thought not... so I'll leave you to your thoughts. I'll be asking for something else tomorrow. See you around, darling."


message 6960: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Don't call me that," she said quietly, her mind racing.


message 6961: by [deleted user] (new)

"Ta!" He grinned and waved, taking a few steps back.


message 6962: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow stood, walking towards him.


message 6963: by [deleted user] (new)

He chuckled. "Changed your mind already?"


message 6964: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Nope," she lashed out at him, her fist catching him in the jaw.


message 6965: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis winced and stumbled back a few steps before steadying himself. "Hm... you haven't done that before." He put a hand to his face. "Ouch."


message 6966: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Good," she said smugly.


message 6967: by [deleted user] (new)

He raised an eyebrow. "I'll be going now, darling, unless you have an objection."

((Brb, gotta bring plants inside.))


message 6968: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki))

"I object to you calling me 'darling', and unless you plan on being hit again I'd suggest no longer using that particular word." Salem said menacingly.


message 6969: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back already!))

He chuckled. "Sure. Bye, Say."


message 6970: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((awssie!))

She clenched her fists. "Touche, idiot, touche."


message 6971: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 06, 2010 02:53PM) (new)

He grinned and waved. "Bye." He turned and strode away.


message 6972: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I hate you," Salem said halfheartedly, watching him leave.


message 6973: by [deleted user] (new)

He chuckled. "Sure."


message 6974: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Damn you," she turned and marched back into the house, slamming the door.


message 6975: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean jumped at the sound of a door slamming. He'd zoned out and was almost asleep. "Salem?" He got up and went to her. "Are you alright?"


message 6976: by [deleted user] (new)

((Gtg in five minutes, gonna watch a documentary.))


message 6977: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki, what documentary?))

"Yes. I'm fine." -Dammit. She looked up at him. "Were you asleep?"


message 6978: by [deleted user] (new)

((The Story of India.))

"Almost." He frowned slightly. "You don't seem fine. You seem ticked off."


message 6979: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's cool))

"When am I not ticked off?"


message 6980: by [deleted user] (new)

"Hm... more often, now. You had a good few hours earlier." He almost smiled.


message 6981: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "True," she smiled at him.


message 6982: by [deleted user] (new)

((Gtg now! Bye!))

He smiled back at her. "Really though, what's wrong?"


message 6983: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((buhbye!))

"Nothing," something flashed in her eyes. "Nothing that matters."


message 6984: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back! For a little while, until I disappear.))


message 6985: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))


message 6986: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean sighed quietly. "Okay. Please know that you can tell me anything, though. I won't press any more."


message 6987: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She nodded. "I know."


message 6988: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled a little. "Okay." He raised a hand and softly brushed the tear trails from her cheeks. "You were crying," he murmured, "Was it because of me?"


message 6989: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not entirely." she murmured.


message 6990: by [deleted user] (new)

"But partly? I apologize." He ran his fingers through her wild hair, trying to tame it.


message 6991: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's not your fault though, it's my own."


message 6992: by [deleted user] (new)

He felt a strange pulling at his heart, the pain of regret for hurting her. He suddenly took her in his arms, pulling her against him and holding her close. "I'm so sorry," he whispered again into her hair.


message 6993: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She put her arms around his waist. "It's not your fault.."


message 6994: by [deleted user] (new)

"But I hurt you, I made you cry. And I wasn't even there to stop the tears. I didn't even know." He raised his head to look down at her. "I should've been there with you."


message 6995: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow looked up at him, "Not your fault."


message 6996: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm still sorry."


message 6997: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Don't be."


message 6998: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled sadly. "Can't stop me."


message 6999: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can try."


message 7000: by [deleted user] (new)

"Go ahead and try, then."


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