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"She's remembering..." Shadow said emotionlessly.
"I guessed as much." Patrik said simply to Salem. His eyes still on Emmy's. Her arms dropped to her sides and she fell into Patrik's arms.He caught her and layed her on the couch. He moved a strand of hair behind her ear and sighed raking a hand through his own hair.
I can only take so much of this... He thought to himself.
I know how you feel, for different reasons, but I know all the same. However I can help-
"Salem..." He sighed, it was a sad, tired sound and for thr first time yu could see how much loving Emmy had taken it's toll on him. It was also just as plain that he didnt regret it, any of it."I... I don't know what to do anymore." He admitted
"Neither do I, but I'll try," she whispered unhappily.
He closed his eyes in a defeated way, it looked odd on him. This was a side of him he kept to himself, but there was no pretending anymore. He was tired of it, tired of trying so God damned hard an having nothing ever be okay. "Salem, I am trying, I have been for years now. I wake up trying to keep everything together and I fall asleep doing the samething. I'm just tired. Tied of everything I want being almost beyond my help. So I can watch and be taunted with the fact that I only do a little." He said all of this in a slight rush, as if the words couldn't get out of his head fast enough.
"I never said you were'nt trying, dammit. I said I would too." And I'm sorry you had to go through all this.
Patrik looked at her blankly "I just said it because that's all that has been in my head for the past few weeks. I'm tired of waking up unhappy when all I ever thought of wanting is sleeping next to me. And thank you, I'm glad you'll try. You have no idea how much I appreciate it."
He shook his head sharply, as if he was waking himself from a trance and said to Salem"I shouldn't have dumped all of that on you. I'm sorry. The last thing you need is my issues on top of your own." He sighed becoming his old self again.
This time she shook her head and found a ghost of a smile taking over her face. "You think I'm not used to it? Cause I am, it's no problem. I'm sure I've done my fair share...and it was good to know."
He smiled a little "Thank you, so much Salem."
He exhaled and leaned on the couch's back waiting for something to happen. His name found its way to him as if through water"Patrik..." He spun and leaned over Emmy his hand finding its spot on her cheek thumb rubbing small circles on the shallow spot of her neck
"Hey beautiful." He murmured.
Shadow felt like she was intruding on their moment and turned away, picking up her glass of water again.
((gtg. -.- mom making me. *sigh*))"My head feels like it got pounded with a hammer." She mumbled.
((buhbye..I was actually getting really tired....weird. anywho! Bye))"Oh don't worry, that'll fade...we didn't hit you that hard," Teeghan said, her tone sarcastic yet ominously serious at the same time. But it was Teeghan. You just don't believe Teeghan. Salem choked on her water, backwashing it back into her cup with a groan of distaste, "Now I have to rinse it!"
Blaze grinned.
((Sorry I had to go. Thanks for reading it, WRMV! I wrote a poem from Sean's POV, I'll post it in a bit.))
Sean had laid in bed for a while, thinking. He eventually wandered out of the room and saw Emmy on the couch. He looked to Salem. Is she okay?
Sean had laid in bed for a while, thinking. He eventually wandered out of the room and saw Emmy on the couch. He looked to Salem. Is she okay?
((oki, sounds good!))I'm not sure...probably, but it's got to hurt.
He nodded and came to lean against the counter beside her. "Here, let me." He took the cup from her hands and rinsed it out for her, then filled it up again with ice water and handed it back to her.
She smiled a little. "Thanks, I was beginning to think I'd never do that."
Salem took a refreshing sip, her hands no longer shaking like leaves in the wind.
((XD okay.))
Smiling at her and watching, Sean relaxed against the counter beside her. "Guess what I did while I was in there all alone?" he said, smiling and blushing slightly.
Smiling at her and watching, Sean relaxed against the counter beside her. "Guess what I did while I was in there all alone?" he said, smiling and blushing slightly.
((I'm back already. *grin*))"What'd you do?" she asked.
((Yay!))
"I wrote - well, I didn't write it, actually, I thought of it - anyway, I made up a poem. I'll write it down and you can read it, if you want." He looked away, embarrassed now that he'd mentioned it.
"I wrote - well, I didn't write it, actually, I thought of it - anyway, I made up a poem. I'll write it down and you can read it, if you want." He looked away, embarrassed now that he'd mentioned it.
((olo))"You wrote a poem?" she didn't sound rude, in fact Salem was actually jsut shocked. "About what?"
"I haven't written it down yet, but yeah. About us. It's probably pretty sappy, but... yeah." He blushed.
"Would you rather me read it, or would you say it to me?" she asked gently.
((Gtg clean the kitchen, it's my turn today. Brb in twenty minutes or so.))
"I could recite it for you... just not in here. I'd rather not share it with everyone else if that's okay." He smiled slightly.
"yah, I get that," Salem smiled, "Maybe outside?"
((Back!))
He nodded. "Yeah, outside is fine."
He nodded. "Yeah, outside is fine."
((good job, wilkomen))Shadow set her glass down on the counter, half-full, and walked to the door.
He followed just behind her, and when they got outside he sat in the grass. "Okay..."
She sat beside him, leaning against him.
He was hesitant to start, afraid some of it might upset her. "Um... look, some of it I don't really understand myself, I just thought of it and it was as if it was already written for me..."
((lol))
((lol))
((aww, cute))Salem nodded, "It's okay."
((XD Thanks.))
He smiled at her. "Okay. It's called 'True'." He began,
"I love you,
Truly I do,
You are the only one,
Who has made me feel how I do.
True.
He loves you,
A bit, not true,
I am the only one,
Whose world revolves around you.
True.
She loves me,
But she set me free,
By letting us have each other,
Forever, just you and me.
We.
You love me,
Really, truly,
We are together, forever,
Able now to always be happy.
We."
He smiled at her. "Okay. It's called 'True'." He began,
"I love you,
Truly I do,
You are the only one,
Who has made me feel how I do.
True.
He loves you,
A bit, not true,
I am the only one,
Whose world revolves around you.
True.
She loves me,
But she set me free,
By letting us have each other,
Forever, just you and me.
We.
You love me,
Really, truly,
We are together, forever,
Able now to always be happy.
We."
Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "((XD Thanks.))He smiled at her. "Okay. It's called 'True'." He began,
"I love you,
Truly I do,
You are the only one,
Who has made me feel how I do.
True.
He loves you,
A bit, not true,
I am the..."
Shadow froze, shocked by the truth and emotion in the words. "That- that was-"
He bit his lip, afraid of making her cry. He didn't want to make her cry again. "Is it okay?"
"it was amazing!" she saidsuddenly, looking over at him.
"Really?" he blushed. "I meant every word."
"I know you did," she whispered. Then, smiling, she joked, "If you didn't I would've hit you."
He laughed. "And I would've deserved it."
"Darn right!" she leaned closer, kissing his cheek.
He turned his head at just the right moment and his lips met hers. He smiled and took her hand in his.
Like always, her hand tightened around his, not enough to cause pain though.
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Patrik knelt down in front of her putting his hands over hers.
"Emmy." He whispered
Patrik seemed to make the pain lessen, the silent gasp that she was holding back fell from her lips. Her breathing went ragged and her eyes opened. Patrik put his forehead against hers. His was so cool against the heat of hers, and it felt like heaven to her.