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message 6851: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'm going to post the lyrics to the song that inspired that poem in the lyrics section, if you want to check them out. They're really beautiful.))

With his free hand, he reached up to caress her cheek, his eyes closing.


message 6852: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki, sounds cool))

Her silver eyes slid closed as the kiss deepened.


message 6853: by [deleted user] (new)

(('Kay, I posted it.))

His hand slid up and into her hair, and he tangled his fingers in her curls, bringing her closer.


message 6854: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I saw, it was so cute!))

Salem gasped, having forgotten to breathe.


message 6855: by [deleted user] (new)

((I love it. Glen's songs are just so great...))

He pulled away and rested his forehead against hers. "Sh..."


message 6856: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods*))

She calmed down a little, her heart racing.


message 6857: by [deleted user] (new)

His thumb rubbed in circles on the back of her hand, his fingers loosening in her hair. He ran his fingers through her soft ringlets.


message 6858: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She was about to complain about him messing up her hair, but thought better of it since it was technically already messed up.


message 6859: by [deleted user] (new)

"Shall we go inside now?" He murmured reluctantly.


message 6860: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Only if you want to," she replied softly.

((haha Ellis should've seen this))


message 6861: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Yeah! You don't think I've been making him too out of character, do you?))

He grinned. "Yeah? Well, I don't."


message 6862: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no, that is so him: obsessed with Salem, and cruel))

"Me neither," Salem smiled.


message 6863: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay, cool. XP))

Unnoticed by Salem or Sean, a young man was standing in the trees, watching, planning his next move to pull the two lovers apart. He smiled darkly.
((I'm thinking that Elly has kind of put a shield around him that leeches powers away if they come near him, and it's permanent unless she takes it off.))

Sean smiled back at her. "Excellent." He put his arms around her.


message 6864: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((alright, that actually soudns really cool))

Salem shivered, though he helped warm her up.


message 6865: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thanks. I've been plotting at night after the internet goes off...))

"You're cold?" He asked. "I could get a jacket or something..."


message 6866: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((nice. don't you love evil plotting?))

"I'm not cold." she had to wonder why else she felt that way.


message 6867: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yup. Mwahahaha...))

He frowned slightly. "Are you okay, then?" He already was getting worried.

Ellis retreated a little farther back into the trees. They couldn't notice him. Not now...


message 6868: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yah, I think I'm fine," she smiled up at him.


message 6869: by [deleted user] (new)

"Good." He smiled back at her. A song came to his head, and he began to hum quietly.

((Will post what he's humming in the lyrics section. Another great song from Glen.))


message 6870: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((okipoki, lol))

Shadow smiled, humming along the parts she knew.


message 6871: by [deleted user] (new)

((Posted it.))

He looked down at her, his eyes full of love. "Thank you, thank you..." he sang a little.


message 6872: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I saw, I like it. :D))

"You brought this peace-"


message 6873: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah, I love it. It could be interpreted so many ways...))

He smiled as they finished together. "I wish I could've met Glen. He writes great songs, and seems like a pretty cool guy. And I'd like to ask him what he was thinking of when he wrote that song."


message 6874: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods*))

"Me too," another song came to her mind, a song very unlike the one they were just singing.

((I'll post the lyrics in a minute))


message 6875: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay! I'll wait... XD))


message 6876: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo. you can post something, it'll take a while anyway))


message 6877: by [deleted user] (new)

((I just looked mine up online. It's quicker. XD))

Sean smiled and listened to the music in her head.


Ellis had a plan, and now was perfecting it in his mind. He grinned darkly.


message 6878: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo I can't find them))

Shadow grimaced.


message 6879: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((this is the song: not the best quality, but not horrid: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edTFc1... ))


message 6880: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean's eyes widened and he winced. "Not a happy song," he commented, shivering slightly.


message 6881: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No..not really." she shivered, tightening her hold on his hand.


message 6882: by [deleted user] (new)

He stroked her cheek. "Everything will be okay, though. Don't self-destruct on me, please."


message 6883: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She nodded. "That wasn't about you. I don't know why I thought of it."


message 6884: by [deleted user] (new)

"Okay." He shrugged. "That happens... ugh, what's horrible is when a song gets stuck in your head for no reason."


message 6885: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Indeed," Salem murmured, casting the song out, replaced by 'you belong with me' by Taylor Swift. She blushed.


message 6886: by [deleted user] (new)

((One I've actually heard!))

He chuckled quietly. "Hm..." He grinned and began thinking of 'Easier' by Glen Phillips.


message 6887: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

((do I get to know what our sneaky little Ellis is planning while watching them?))

Shadow chuckled, kissing his cheek.


message 6888: by [deleted user] (new)

((Hm... no. 'Cause I don't yet. *grins*))

Sean laughed. "Not the most cheerful song, but..."


message 6889: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*laughs* nice))

"But what?" she asked, pulling back to look at him.


message 6890: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'll know later... maybe.))

"It seems fitting." He shrugged.


message 6891: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*grins* well hopefully, cause we need somethin' to happen))

"Yah, it does."


message 6892: by [deleted user] (new)

((I know, I know! Btw, I'm planning on Elly falling for Rife. XD And... I think Ellis is going to be mean to Sean.))

"My doe eyed, beautiful evergreen girl..." He smiled, his fingers tracing the outline of her lips.


message 6893: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahaha, sounds good. Both of them))

Shadow blushed. "I never heard that song until today."


message 6894: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Okay.))

"I hadn't heard your song, either... I've heard pretty much everything Glen has done. I never really understood some of his songs completely until recently." He smiled.


message 6895: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled. "I never listened to Glen, I was more of a Skillet girl..though by the time I was born, all the members of Skillet were either dead or old..so I just listen to their classics. Glen is good, thanks for showing me him."


message 6896: by [deleted user] (new)

"You're welcome. I was never one for angry songs, so I like his a lot because of that. His songs can be sad, but they're never angry." He started to hum another song, Gather.


message 6897: by Ky (last edited Mar 06, 2010 12:15PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She chuckled and the song 'bite my tongue' from Reliant K came into her mind, making her laugh. "Reliant K isn't mad..they are either serious or silly...or both."


message 6899: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 06, 2010 12:13PM) (new)

"Nice..." He nodded. "Idlewild is good, too. I've only heard one album, but it's good... They're Scottish." He smiled as a song came into his head. "Sometimes I can't understand the lyrics, but it's all good."


message 6900: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Scottish, me too!" she had to laugh. "They have good music though, yah." Salem had the nagging feeling that someone was watching.


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