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message 7101: by [deleted user] (new)

"For one, it feels good to take a walk in the mornings. Don't you agree? And two, I thought we might talk a little. I little walk, a little talk, all good." He looked at her and smiled. "We don't have to talk, of course... one thing at a time, I think."


message 7102: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She sighed audibly. "We can talk, but I have nothing outright to say to you, so you'll have to start. If it's what you want."


message 7103: by [deleted user] (new)

He shrugged. "So... you're happy with Sean, I see." He said the name bitterly.


message 7104: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Happy enough," she replied. "Why?"


message 7105: by [deleted user] (new)

He didn't answer, instead changing the subject. "Have you noticed Lizzie and Rife?" He asked. "She likes him."


message 7106: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yeah, I noticed, found it amusing." she smiled.


message 7107: by [deleted user] (new)

"But you know why she is here. Do you still find it amusing, knowing that she will betray you?"


message 7108: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes. And you know it isn't her fault. It's yours."


message 7109: by [deleted user] (new)

"It is only my fault that she will have to carry out the orders. I only relayed them to her. The orders were from your parents." He looked at her to see her reaction to this.


message 7110: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her fists clenched. "Why?"


message 7111: by [deleted user] (new)

"They want you back. They knew they couldn't stop you from coming here, so they sent her here. Me, though... I came because I wanted to." He smiled.


message 7112: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "They need to let me go! Dammit, it's not like-" It's not like what? It's not like you're the only one they can do that stuff to? Liar, you know why they need you. She shook her head. "Nevermind."


message 7113: by [deleted user] (new)

"How can you expect anyone to let you go, Salem? Once someone has met you, you leave an impression. It's even harder for those of us who have known you all your life to let you go. You are so special, so much your own... that everyone wants you to be theirs." He shrugged. "That's how things work."


message 7114: by Ky (last edited Mar 07, 2010 12:18PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's not my fault," she said sullenly. "It's not like I've let you go,and I still live my life."


message 7115: by [deleted user] (new)

He shrugged again. "Maybe we shouldn't talk about you and me."


message 7116: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Maybe not," because I don't want to cry.


message 7117: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked up through the trees at the lightening sky. "Emmy was having problems, I heard."


message 7118: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How'd you hear that? Lizzie?"


message 7119: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled. "Sometimes I listen... and sometimes I just have Lizzie tell me. This time I just listened, though."


message 7120: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "How do you manage to get so close without me noticing?"


message 7121: by [deleted user] (new)

"Can you hear me now?" he asked.


message 7122: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No, and it's frustrating."


message 7123: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled. "Sorry... I wouldn't want your boyfriend to hear me snooping, is all."


message 7124: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem cringed, thinking about it. But I love them both. "Shut up."


message 7125: by [deleted user] (new)

"Alright, alright." He grinned.


message 7126: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments His grin made her want to smile, but she quenched the need. "So, now what?"


message 7127: by [deleted user] (new)

He shrugged again. "You can go back... I'm not stopping you. I'll be waiting for you every morning."


message 7128: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't want to go back yet," Shadow said, surprising herself.


message 7129: by [deleted user] (new)

He looked at her strangely for a moment, then smiled. "Alright then. I guess we can just sit and... talk."


message 7130: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "sounds like the good old days," she smiled, sitting on a fallen tree.


message 7131: by [deleted user] (new)

He laid along the tree on his back, putting his head in her lap. "They don't have to be gone," he said with a sudden, strange gentleness.


message 7132: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Maybe they aren't, maybe they're just hiding, scared of what could happen to tear them to shreds."


message 7133: by [deleted user] (new)

He was silent for a long moment. "I could leave," he finally said. "Without convincing you to go back... I could leave you, and let you live in peace with your friends."


message 7134: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What if I don't want you to leave?" she whispered, playing with his hair in her lap. "What if...what if I'm afraid that if you do..I'll never see you again? What then?"


message 7135: by [deleted user] (new)

"Didn't you come here thinking that you wouldn't ever see me again?" He asked quietly. "I certainly did."


message 7136: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes, and you don't know how hard that was." she held back tears. "The only reason- do you remember that battle? The one where I turned on Emmy? You know why I did that?"


message 7137: by [deleted user] (new)

((That was at the beginning, right? The first time he comes into the roleplay? I haven't read the whole thing...))

He shook his head wordlessly.


message 7138: by [deleted user] (new)

((I'll be going soon for dinner.))


message 7139: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yah))

"I did it for you. She was going to kill you El." she said softly.


message 7140: by [deleted user] (new)

He closed his eyes for a moment, then opened them again. "Why do you even care anymore, Salem? All I do is hurt you. Why would you care if I were gone?"


message 7141: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I can't help it," she said truthfully, quiet with his hair soft beneath her fingertips. "And I love you, I always have Ellis. You jsut make it hard to."


message 7142: by [deleted user] (new)

He closed his eyes again for a long moment, savoring the words. "You wouldn't believe me if I said what I want to," he murmured.

((Gtg!))


message 7143: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((aw bye!))

"It all depends on what you want to say," she said, her voice low and her eyes sparkling with unshed tears.


message 7144: by [deleted user] (new)

((Back!))

He sighed and raised his hand to her face. "I won't say it."


message 7145: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((awssie!))

"I think I know what you want to say...and thank-you," Shadow said, his touch like a flame to her face. She was cold apparently.


message 7146: by [deleted user] (new)

He nodded. "You should go back. I'm sure your friends will be waking soon, and I think you don't want them to know about our walk, do you?" He was tempted to make sure she wouldn't tell them by using his gift, but he decided not to.


message 7147: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I will," she was happier than she should've been. Happy that he was giving her her own free will.


message 7148: by [deleted user] (new)

He shrugged, sitting up. "Alright, then. I'll see you tomorrow."


message 7149: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Tomorrow it is," she smiled at him, lightly, full or sorrow. "Tomorrow." Shadow started back to the house.


message 7150: by [deleted user] (new)

((You didn't mind the sudden-ish change in Ellis, did you? I kind of didn't feel like making him all evil today. XD))

He watched her and waved. "I'll be around."

Sean wasn't awake yet, but Elly was. She had woken a while ago and was watching Rife sleep, smiling.


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