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message 6351: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes besides Dumbledore's death." Liv laughed


message 6352: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Phew. That's good." he winked, jumping up. "You hungry?"


message 6353: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Hells yes." Liv said


message 6354: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Let's find food." he said, going on all fours and pretending to be a rummaging dog.

Teeghan went down the hall and found the kitchen where she sat.

Shadow eventually traveled down there, perching on the countertop with Avery in her arms.


message 6355: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv smacked him and walked out to the kitchen.

"Come on Patrik." Emmy said pulling him to the kitchen.


message 6356: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze stood up, laughing, and ran after her.


message 6357: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy jumped onto the counter and threw some foil at Liv.
"Hey!"
Emmy laughed.
Patrik walked in and pulled on Emmy's hair.
"Morning guys,"


message 6358: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What's the foil for?" Teeghan asked.

Salem was wondering the same thing.


message 6359: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Nothing. Just threw it at her." Emmy shrugged moving Patrik's hand out of her hair and down her back.
"Yeah and got some in my hair!" Liv spun trying to get it out.


message 6360: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze plucked it out, grinning.

Teeghan shrugged and smiled. "That's legit."


message 6361: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "I thought so too." Emmy nodded grinning

"You are so going to regret that." Liv glared at her.
"i'm sure.."


message 6362: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow grinned. "It would be funner to have a bubble fight."


message 6363: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Bubbles stand no chance against me." Liv smiled darkly wind sweeping through the room.


message 6364: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Well of course not!" Salem scoffed, bringing her own breeze in, careful not to rustle Avery.


message 6365: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy lit the sink on fire. "Stop." She smiled


message 6366: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem made all the wind settle, raising her eyebrows at Liv to tell her just to let it go.


message 6367: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv killed the wind not wanting to push it.


message 6368: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She smiled. "So, breakfast?" Salem tried to keep up the cheer.


message 6369: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Yes!" Rife said walking to the fridge
"What's in there?" Patrik asked
"Some random things."
"Cook it up, Rife." Liv smirked


message 6370: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ya, it'll still taste good." Blaze joked.


message 6371: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Better than nothing." Emmy said with a wicked grin.
"Out and off the counters!" Rife said with a smirk


message 6372: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What?! I was just getting comfortable!" Salem joked, jumping down and landing silently all without jostling the baby. "I am a pro!" she whisper shouted, pointing her free hand at the still-sleeping child.


message 6373: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed and plunked down on the sofa.
"The one thing I miss about your demension is the tv."
"I'm sure you'll live." Patrik laughed throwing a flat peice of glass to her.
"Oh yeah! I missed this!" She exclaimed drawing a design on it and it lit up.


message 6374: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "What's that?" all three of them asked.


message 6375: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "This demensions equivalent of a Ipad. But SO much better." Liv said
"They are so much fun." Emmy said sliding into Patrik's lap.


message 6376: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Teeghan watched over Liv's shoulder and Shadow just paced the room, keeping up a rocking/bouncing motion for Avery.


message 6377: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((gtg b on tomorrow))

Patrik rubbed Emmy's back slowly.

Liv smiled tracing a pattern o the screne.


message 6378: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me too, bye!))

Teeghan was confused but entranced.


message 6379: by [deleted user] (new)

((... well. Hm. Not much happened, anyway... I was kind of hoping to have another Ellis appearance, but maybe that wouldn't have been the best idea anyways. XD So. To fix things up, then.))

Sean hadn't slept much that night. He was glad that Shadow had come to him, but he wanted to talk to her and he wanted to have some time with her, just him and her, just to be together. He had stayed up and looked up at the moon, and by the time he fell asleep it was the early hours of the morning. He wasn't a morning person, so he was still asleep there when everyone else was awake.

Lizzie had stayed in Rife's room overnight, sitting in the corner and eventually falling asleep. She woke to an ache in her neck, and heard others talking. She stayed in the room, listening, wishing she could be down there and laughing with them. She knew, however, that if she went down there she would ruin the happiness there, so she stayed in the room, silent and thinking.


message 6380: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I was kindof hoping for that too..mabes we can still do it..when Salem's alone. it doesn't have to be dark.))

Shadow grinned. "I'll be right back, it's judt really warm with all the hotness in this room. I'm gonna get some air." she laughed. "Don't burn anything Rife!" she was outside after only a few steps and she sat with her back to the forest.


message 6381: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah, that sounds good. It was just more dramatic. XD So, I went to see The Lightning Thief. Have you read the books or seen the movie?))

Sean was still sleeping soundly.

Lizzie jumped as a voice sounded behind her, saying, "Feeling lonely? Want some company?"
She snapped her head up and saw Ellis. She scowled. "They hate me because I brought you through."
He shrugged, smirking. "They already distrusted you. Poor Lizzie."
"Don't call me that! I'm not her anymore. I'm not his Lizzie anymore..." Tears appeared in her eyes. "I wanted to be," she whispered, "I really did."
He smiled, a softness in his eyes that wasn't usually there. "So you and I have the same problem," he mused. "Hm..."
Lizzie glared at him. "You and I are nothing alike!" she whispered. "I'm not like you!"
"Oh, but you are, sweetheart. You really are." He waved and disappeared out the window.
She leaned against the wall, sobbing silently.


message 6382: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I haven't yet..but I want to so badly, did you like it?))

Salem was tempted to go inside, tempted by the image she saw in her mind's eye: Lizzie crying. How dare he!? How dare he do that to her? She is almost innocent in this, it's not her fault dammit. Ya..I don't like hr. But that doesn't mean I'm heartless. she pulled out blades of grass from the root, one by one, braiding them angrily.


message 6383: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah. I don't think they're planning on doing the whole series, though.))

Lizzie stood and walked past everyone else silently, and went outside. She didn't notice Salem; her eyes were blinded by tears. She looked up at the sky, brokenly whispering one word. "Why?"


message 6384: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((*nods*))

She glanced up, feeling bad for the girl but having no sense of comforting at all. Shadow sent her a thought. He'll pay for this.


message 6385: by [deleted user] (new)

Lizzie's eyes widened and she brushed the tears away, looking around. She still hadn't gotten used to that. She saw Salem and bit her lip, shaking her head. H-how do you know? she thought at first, then sighed as she realized. Oh. Right. Don't... it's not... it hurts because what he said was true. I don't want to be like him, but... There's nothing else. It's either... I have to be that way, or be no way at all. Just be nothing and let them keep me the way they keep everyone else. Just a prisoner. But now I wonder if that might be better. I have to watch him... the boy I love... fall in love again with a girl that he can love, who won't betray him like I had to, and I can't do it again. I won't. Please believe me when I say that I didn't want to bring him here, didn't want to come here at all. I had to... I didn't want to. I swear, I didn't.


message 6386: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lizzie..you love him? You love Sean? she was taken aback,utterly horrified, but she kept her thoughts calm.


message 6387: by [deleted user] (new)

Always did. From the first time he appeared in my dream. He hasn't changed a bit. But I'm not right for him anymore. I've changed. And... please don't call me Lizzie. Elizabeth winced, pain showing in her eyes as she looked at Salem.


message 6388: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Want me to call you Elizabeth? Salem allowed a small smile to rise in her eyes. You still love him. And the sad thing is...I think he feels almost the same way. He's torn.


message 6389: by [deleted user] (new)

Elizabeth nodded to answer the question. No! It's not real for him. He doesn't... he can't. I can't let him. He's... I can't do it! I have to do what they say, and I can't let him love me just for me to break his heart. Please. You're right for him, I can see it. You won't let him down like I would.


message 6390: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I already have." her voice broke the silent stillness of the morning with it's harsh reality. "I fail everyone I love and I don't have to try."


message 6391: by [deleted user] (new)

"No," Elizabeth whispered. "You can't. I've watched you and him. He can hold you together, if you let him. I know I should feel jealous... and maybe I do, a little. But he needs you. Think of it that way, and be there for him. He doesn't need me if he has you. Even boys need a shoulder to cry on, someone to support them." Her eyes filled with tears again.


message 6392: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Elizabeth..don't cry.." he words were broken, pleading; so unlike her. "It's not your fault. Not jsut yours."


message 6393: by [deleted user] (new)

Elizabeth shook her head, almost smiling. "If I hadn't left him before, I don't think he'd be here with you. That is my fault. But I'm glad of it. I was never good for him." She bit her lip. "You know how it is. Family. I have to do as they say. I have to. They... I can't tell you. I'm sorry, I can't. But now that I'm finally away from them, he is here. He asked to come, he wanted to, because of you." She took a shuddering breath, trying not to cry. "It must be hard for you," she whispered. "to be talking to me like this, when it's my fault he's here."


message 6394: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "That's the thing Elizabeth: they blame you. I don't. Not anymore. I know now what I didn't know before. I don't like it and won't pretend I do: but you're not that bad." she paused for effect. "And you know, I do know how it is with family. How when they are the the dark side, it's hella hard not to relinquish your grip on the light. Elizabeth, you could do it if you tried. I know you could. I know."


message 6395: by [deleted user] (new)

Making a sound of frustration, Elizabeth looked away, up at the sky again. "I can't! They... I... I can't even talk about it, I can't tell you. I want to, but I... they have... they don't let me."

((I was just thinking that maybe the Deceiver power affects people like Lizzie more. Is that okay? So, like, they can order her not to do something and so she can't do it? And maybe they find a way to break the hold of those orders on her, but for now she can't talk about it and she can't not do what they say?))


message 6396: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ya, that makes sense.))

"You don't have to tell me Elly, I already know. And I know..I just...know. I don't know how to explain it, but I know you'll get through this..someday."

((ahaha, she called her Elly, it's a cute nickname..but that all depends on if Elizabeth likes it.))


message 6397: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD It is cute. I was thinking Beth or something, but I like Elly better.))

Elly half fell, half sat on the ground, hanging her head and letting the tears come, the sobs making her shake. Thank you...


message 6398: by [deleted user] (new)

((Rawr.))


message 6399: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sanka))

Salem walked over to her, sitting beside her with the odd grace of a Fighter. For what? The truth?


message 6400: by [deleted user] (new)

For understanding. Elly looked up at her and smiled slightly through her tears, taking a deep breath to calm herself.


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