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message 6551: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She found that grimly funny. "Oh it'd still be this way, only worse most likely."


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"Oh." He nodded and bit his lip. "I'm glad I don't wish that, then." He sighed quietly. "Come on, let's go inside."


message 6553: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't want to go inside," Salem said stubbornly.


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"Okay." He shrugged. "Do you want to be alone? I can go..."


message 6555: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "no. Stay." she looked up at him through wet lashes. "Please."


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He nodded, his eyes soft and caring. "As you wish," he murmured. He raised a hand to her face and gently brushed away the tears.


message 6557: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Her cheeks heated when he touched them, but as involuntary as it was; it felt nice. Salem leaned into his touch before slowing moving back so just the tips of his fingers touched her cheek.


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His fingertips traced up along her cheekbone, and he tucked a tendril of stray hair behind her ear. He leaned in slowly and pressed his lips to her forehead. "I'll always be here for you, as long as you want me to be," he whispered against her skin. "Always helping, as much as I can. I promise."


message 6559: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I know, she wanted to say. But instead she just said a simple thank-you.


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He smiled, just a little. "No problem." He kissed her forehead, then pulled away to look at her. "It's saddening, seeing you cry. I see you smile so little, compared to how much you cry."


message 6561: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "You should have seen me before: neither."


message 6562: by [deleted user] (new)

"That's very sad. Everyone should smile. Especially a girl like you, whose smile lights up the world." He wasn't smiling now, entirely serious.


message 6563: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Not everyone's world." was all she could manage to say after that.


message 6564: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 04, 2010 01:11PM) (new)

((Gtg, dinner. I'll be back for a little while after dinner, but then gone again at five.))
"I suppose not... but you are the center of my world." He smiled now, wrapping his arms around her.


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Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))

Shadow smiled lightly. "I couldn't tell."


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((Back for, like, twenty minutes. XD))

He laughed and nuzzled her neck. "You're so beautiful."


message 6567: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "Elly suddenly thought of something. "Rife," she whispered, "Could you... do something for me? Could you wait in the hall and listen at the door of your room? The... a person will come in there when..."

"Yeah of course." Rife nodded

Liv smirked at him.

"Well, Salem's inside again." Emmy commented.


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Elly smiled in relief. "Thanks... I promise you'll understand after this. And if not... Salem can explain." She caught his hand and tugged him towards his room.


message 6569: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow let her mouth curve in a smile again. "Thanks, so are you."


Teeghan sighed. "Well that's good."

Blaze chuckled.


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Sean looked up at her, eyes wide in disbelief. "I'm not beautiful," he protested. "You don't call a guy beautiful!" His eyes were smiling, but the rest of his face was completely serious.


message 6571: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem laughed. "Sure I can!"


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He grinned now. Her laugh was intoxicating, and he couldn't help but smile with her. "Fine. It's a bit strange, but I guess that suits us."


message 6573: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I was playing with you, but still."


message 6574: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh, I know." He kissed the tip of her nose. "That doesn't mean I can't play along. So, shall I call you handsome?"


message 6575: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why not?" she winked. "It's how they described girls in the dark ages," Salem smiled slyly.


message 6576: by [deleted user] (new)

((This is my last post, unless your next is really really quick. So, byes!))

He chuckled. "Well then. You are quite handsome. So handsome, in fact, that you look positively kissable. If I may, my lady?"


message 6577: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((oki))

She nodded slightly. "As well may be, sir."


message 6578: by [deleted user] (new)

((You were just quick enough. Bye!))

He smiled and kissed her, the fingers of one hand playing with her hair while he placed the other hand on the back of her neck. He closed his eyes.


message 6579: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((bye!))

Salem relaxed, leaning into him and feeling his lips against hers like honey.


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((Back!))

His lips parted as he deepened the kiss, happy to be feeling this again, now, when he was so much more in love with her than the first time. His skin tingled where it touched hers, and waves of warmth went through him.


message 6581: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife followed after her. A smile barely concealed on his face.

Liv luaghed.

Emmy nodded.


message 6582: by [deleted user] (new)

Write, Read, Music, Volleyball wrote: "Rife followed after her. A smile barely concealed on his face.

Liv luaghed.

Emmy nodded."


Elly turned to him once they got to his door, saying, "Rife. Whatever you hear... whatever I say, don't burst in. I'll explain after. You might hear some things you don't like, but... it'll be okay."


message 6583: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked at her, a puzzled look on his face. Then he said
"Alright.Promise,"


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She smiled. "Thanks." She let go of his hand and went into the room. With a sigh she flopped down on the bed and looked up at the ceiling, waiting. Soon she heard a light thump as shoes hit the ground in front of the window.
"So, it's Elly now?" The voice said.
Elly nodded, sitting up. "Salem's idea," she shrugged.
Ellis smiled mockingly. "Cute. So, you're getting on her good side, are you? How about the others? Are you earning their trust yet?"
She frowned, bound to tell the truth. "I like them. Emmy still hates me... And I don't know about Patrik. He just tries to calm her down. Teeghan... I don't know, same with Liv and Blaze. I've been talking to Rife. He... he's starting to trust me more, I think."

((Brb in twenty minutes.))


message 6585: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((ok sounds good. ))
Rife leaned on the wall, staying away from the door. He could still hear them from where he was. He grew angry when he heard Ellis's voice.
What the hell Why can't he leave us alone?


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((Back, but I'll be disappearing soon.))
((My next post will take a while...))


message 6587: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol ok ))


message 6588: by [deleted user] (new)

Ellis noticed the slight blush on Elly's cheeks when she mentioned Rife. "Do you have a crush?" he asked, amused.
She stammered, "What? N-no! Well... maybe... I barely know him!"
He chuckled darkly. "You like him. Well, maybe it's mutual... that would be lucky. It'll make the betrayal harder."
She flinched. "Please, take back that order... I don't want to do it!"
"Sorry, I have orders, too. You're to watch them and let me do what they want, then get them to make a portal, so we can take them back through." He smiled.
Elly sighed. "Don't make me do it! Please!"
"Ah, Lizzie. I can't take it back." He pretended to be remorseful.
"Then get out! Leave us alone! Leave all of us alone! Especially Salem." She glowered at him.
"Ah, but you need to finish your report first. What's been going on today?" He leaned against the wall, perfectly at ease.
She told him, reluctantly, everything that had been going on. "Salem isn't back yet," she finished, "But Emmy can sense her again."
Ellis smiled. "Bye-bye, Lizzie. I'll see you tomorrow."
Elly groaned and collapsed on the bed as Ellis left and the window slid shut again. "Rife... you can come in now," she said, afraid of what he would say, afraid he'd be angry at her.


message 6589: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked up at the celing, not sure what to think anymore he walked in. He sighed and leaned on the arm of his chair.


message 6590: by [deleted user] (new)

She sat up, tears in her eyes. "I... he made me," she whispered. "He made me come here. He ordered me, and I can't disobey that. I just can't. I try, but if I start to I black out, again and again. And it hurts me. I just... I'm sorry. I have to... but it won't happen if you know. It won't be betraying you. I won't be able to convince Patrik to make a portal. It won't happen. That's why I needed you to hear."


message 6591: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Rife looked at her and sighed
"Alright, Elly. It'll be ok."


message 6592: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem pulled back regretfully as the kiss deepened. "Sean," she whispered his name, softly, like rain falling in the spring. "We should get back."


message 6593: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((she's not here. :())


message 6594: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Blaze smiled at Liv, "I want to show you something."

Teegehan put Avery to bed and came back, perching on the end of the couch. "Is she coming back yet?"


message 6595: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Ok." Liv said

"No, give her a minute." Emmy grinned


message 6596: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Why are you smiling?" Teeghan asked quizzically.

Blaze tapped on the screen, pullnig up a site a lot like YouTube.


message 6597: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy shrugged smiling wider. "Sean's there."

Liv looked over his shoulder and laughed "Youtube?"


message 6598: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ya, YouTube. It's a really funny vid!"

Teeghan made a face, "Sean?"


message 6599: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments (( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1tcR19... it's also weird. But it's what Blaze is showing Liv))


message 6600: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv laughed "Seriously?"

Emmy smirked "Seriously. Sean."


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