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message 6151: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Salem knows some..cause she talked to her 'member?))

"Ya.." she felt a little awkward now, in the almost-silence.


message 6152: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes member but i'm addign somethign to their talk. Emmy's gonna go darkside if she gets her Shadow powers too quickly, and if she does Patrik's going to have to kill her. :( ))

Patrik shook his head "Anything else you guys 'Learned' that I should know about?" He asked
"No. Nothing." Emmy said quickly.


message 6153: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((OMGosh))

Shadow looked at her funny.Is there something you aren't telling us Emmy?


message 6154: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((IKR?! Just thought of it! I'm quite in love with that little twist.))

Emmy looked at her
No, what would I have to hide?
Patrik looked at her, she was hiding something and he knew it. Whatever it was there was a reason for her not saying, so he let it go.


message 6155: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that is crazy! AHHH! NO!!! Salem will freak out if that happens!))

You're lying to me...but I'll admit I've lied to you. Youll tell Patrik when it's time...right?


message 6156: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((So will Patrik and Liv and everyone else. But I'm liking it. Give her some incentive to not loose it))

Emmy laughed a little
I will.


message 6157: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Be careful Emmy. We all have to be careful. Her 'words' were loaded, just like the emotion in her eyes. emotion that didn't dare spill over onto her face.


message 6158: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Tell me about it." She murmured walking away. Patrik looked at Salem She will tell me what's wrong won't she?


message 6159: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She said she would..but I am thinking we all just better be really careful right now...really..really careful.


message 6160: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments What do you know that I don't?


message 6161: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I don't know what she's hiding...but I know her mom was in the dream hell.


message 6162: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik's eyes widened considerably Her mom? How-? Her mom has been dead for 18 years.


message 6163: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I don't know how she was there..but they talked. and I could tell Emmy didn't like what she heard. I missed all the important stuff most likely.


message 6164: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked after Emmy Yeah, maybe. Should I drop it or talk to her?


message 6165: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She seems a little off about it...I'd talk to her..but don't push it.


message 6166: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Alright. I will, thanks Salem. I'll let you know if I find anything out. He smiled at her and went off after Emmy.


message 6167: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments thanks, and you're welcome. she frowned and sat i nthe grass.


message 6168: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv walked over to her
"What's been going on around here?" She asked sittign next to Salem.

"Emmy. Hey." Patrik said running after her. She had wandered into the trees stopping when she heard him
"Hey what's up?" She asked him with a small smile
"You actually. What happened when you were stuck in your dream?"
"Nothing. I told you that already."
"No you told Salem nothing. Tell me."


message 6169: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem shrugged. "A whole bunch of crap. That's what."


message 6170: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv nodded "I've noticed."

Emmy looked at him
"Patrik- I... I want to tell you. I just don't want to scare you."
"What is it? Just tell me." he went to her placing a hand on her cheek. She put her hand over his keeping it there.


message 6171: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem smiled at her. "It'll work out. It has to."


message 6172: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at her a grin in place "I'm sure it will. This is us, we've been through worse."

She closed her eyes and inhaled steadying herself then she said
"There's a chance you're going to have to kill me."
Patrik looked at her
"What?!"
"You won't have a choice. You'll have to and if you don't you'll die."
"Why?"
"When I was in dream prison, I talked to my mother and she told me that I was placed with you so you could save me. And that you had to keep me from getting at the Shadow part of myself too quickly. And if I do, I'll become one of them. I'm not going to live like that. I wont become one of them. Promise me, if that happens you will kill me."
"Hey, look at me."
She did.
"That's not going to happen. I'm not going to let that happen."
"Promise me, Patrik."


message 6173: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Right." And it'll get worse..


message 6174: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at her "I'm not niave." She smiled a little "I know it'll get worse. Much worse, before it ends."

Patrik looked at her, pain and fear in his eyes.
"Promise me Patrik!" Emmy said feircely.
Patrik stroked his thumb over her cheek then said quietly
"I promise."
She fell into him
"Oh god, I'm scared Patrik." She said into his chest.
"I know Emmy, I know." He held her running his hand over her back.


message 6175: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yep, you're right."


message 6176: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv looked at her "I'm just wondering, Do you know how worse?"

They stood like that for a while. Emmy holding on to Patrik just stood and held onto her, she was his everything. She had just asked him to kill her, she didn't want to be evil and she didn't want him to let her be like that.


message 6177: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "A lot worse."


message 6178: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Liv sighed "Nothing ever goes right for us does it?"

She must have fallen asleep against him or something, she hadn't moved in a while. Patrik scooped her up and carried her back to the others. He caught Salem's eye and shook his head.


message 6179: by Ky (last edited Feb 28, 2010 07:41PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Nope. Not yet." Salem said. It's bad?


message 6180: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Let's go guys." Patrik said over Emmy's head.
"Time to move."


message 6181: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I'm gussing yes. Salem stood.


message 6182: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah Salem. Bad. Patrik said biting his lip.

"Is she ok?" Liv asked walking to Patrik's side.
"Yeah she's just sleeping." Patrik responded
"Go track everyone down Liv."
"On it." She left to get Blaze, Teeghan and Sean.


message 6183: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shoot..dammit that's not good..I'm gessing I won't want to know. Salem massaged her temples.

Avery had just fallen asleep again.


message 6184: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments You might want to know. Patrik said holding Emmy.

"Alright, that's everyone." Liv said
"Let's go then." Patrik said walking.


message 6185: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Would you tell me? Salem walked behind them.


message 6186: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Yeah. I would.


message 6187: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Thanks. I think I would've died of curiosity.


message 6188: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments She said I'd have to kill her. She made me promise. I told her I would kill her if that ever happened. I can't do that, Salem. I can't kill her, she's everything to me.


message 6189: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem clenched her fists. What? Just out of nowhere?


message 6190: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments That's what happened in dream hell. He sent her the memory of of Emmy telling him.


message 6191: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Holy crap Patrik! We can't let it get that far.


message 6192: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Tell me something I don't know Salem. I've been protecting her for as long as I can remember. I won't let her go that far.


message 6193: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I'll help the best I can..you know..gag Sean or something. Get rid of Lizzie in the process.


message 6194: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik looked down at Emmy I don't know if it'll be enough.


message 6195: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Don't talk like that. You're being negative...I don't want to be negative: I'm a horror when I'm negative. she chuckled darkly.


message 6196: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Salem, she's scared. She is the strongest person I know. If she's scared... He shook his head.


message 6197: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments I know. I was there when she started being scared. Hell, I was scared. I don't get scared. she rambled. We'll help her.


message 6198: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Patrik nodded I know we will. I plan on me never having to harm her in any way, ever.


message 6199: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Good. That's better. Where are we going by the way?


message 6200: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Another house we have set up.


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