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message 6001: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm still here every few mins))


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Sean sighed. "Well... I guess we just need to keep an eye on her."

((Okay. I was gone; I got coffee. Sorry.))


message 6003: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's fine))

"Haha, you can."


message 6004: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean huffed. "Well. Fine, then." He pretended to sulk.


message 6005: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem chuckled.


message 6006: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean grinned. "Okay then. I'll keep an eye on her."

((Will it be night soon? It needs to be night for my plans...))


message 6007: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((sure, it's almost night))

"Good."


message 6008: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. Cool.))

Sean looked up at the sky. "Are we going to sleep here or do we need to find somewhere else to camp? The sun will be setting soon..."


message 6009: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I don't know.."


message 6010: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean nodded. "Well. I'm tired, so I vote we sleep here, under the trees. If that's okay..."


message 6011: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I'm fine with that.."Salem said quietly.


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Sean nodded. "Are you okay?" he asked gently, looking into her eyes.


message 6013: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I'm back))

"Yep. Just peachy." she laid back on the ground, avoiding his gaze.


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((Cool!))

He sighed. "No one ever means it when they say that. It's become a phrase I don't like to hear, actually." He laid back beside her, a couple feet away, and turned onto his side to look at her. "You're thinking about him?" He guessed quietly.


message 6015: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo: yes CANADA! WON!!!))

"no..." she shook her head.


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((XD Coolio. Won what exactly? Are the olympics over or was it a certain thing? I don't know much about the olympics at all...))

He took her hand and held it lightly between both of his. "You really are gorgeous," he murmured, looking down at her face with a slight smile.


message 6017: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((Hockey! we got the gold!! yes! and we broke the wrecord for most golds won in the olympic winter games! we have 14!!))

"Shut up." she teased.

((what's the plan? or is it a secret?))


message 6018: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 28, 2010 03:21PM) (new)

((Cool. *nods* Hockey's the one on ice with pucks, right? XD))

Sean laughed, and continued. "You're also amazing. When I see you angry, it sends shivers through me, and I could imagine you as a goddess of war, or a dark angel. Your eyes seem to have flames in them, and they seem to see inside me and burn into me, but then when you smile it fills me with warmth. Your beauty can be chilling, but it is always beautiful and awe-inspiring, and it never fails to strike me."

((Secret. Mwahaha! It's just a little something... not like I'm introducing any big new powers or anything.))


message 6019: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yes..lol))

Shadow was speachless. "What? Ignore that.that was..um.."


message 6020: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Thought so. I don't know much about sports at all.))

He smiled softly at her. "You're beautiful. And strong. So strong, probably even stronger than I. You have endured so much, yet you still fight it, and you don't let anything touch your beauty, because you're beauty goes beyond anything physical. You are beautiful on the inside. Your heart, your soul, whichever, that is beautiful. And the greatest beauty is that which people can touch and try to hurt all they want, but that never fades."


message 6021: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((me neither. I was jsut happy))

She blushed, heat rising up her cheeks. "Stop that.."


message 6022: by [deleted user] (new)

((XD Yeah. I don't know anything about the olympics. XD))

"Why? It's not flattery if it's true, and I think you should know how amazing and beautiful you are." He stroked her cheek.


message 6023: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((haha, I barely know anything))

"Please stop?"


message 6024: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm finished," He murmured.


message 6025: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "well that's good," she smiled at him.


message 6026: by [deleted user] (new)

He chuckled. "How so? Is it bad for me to say those things about you?"


message 6027: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "No...not really.." she closed her eyes, yawning.


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Smiling down at her, he shifted so that he was laying on his back, and he sighed quietly, contentedly, looking up at the sunset. "Look," he murmured. "It's almost as beautiful as you."


message 6029: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments She chuckled darkly. "It's so much better.."


message 6030: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 28, 2010 03:40PM) (new)

He turned his head to look at her. "Not to my eyes," he whispered.


message 6031: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "you're blind." she conceded, a twinkle of mischeif in her eyes. Then she laid her head back and covered her face with her arm, tired as heck.


message 6032: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughed quietly and closed his eyes, yawning and slipping into sleep.

((Can we skip to late night?))


message 6033: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yes))

*skip to late night*


message 6034: by [deleted user] (new)

Everyone was asleep, and there was just enough light to see by the full moon and the stars. Lizzie was lying away from everyone else, also asleep.
A shadow crept into the circle of people, and knelt beside Lizzie, shaking her to wake her and putting a hand over her mouth to stifle her scream. "You want to drain everyone's powers for just a few moments, and you do not want to remember this when you wake," it murmured in her ear, and she could hear that it was a male voice, a familiar one.
Lizzie nodded, and did as he said, taking the powers of everyone around her, closing her eyes to concentrate.
Ellis smiled and stood, and walked over to Salem. He leaned over her and whispered in her ear, "You're dreaming, that's all. You don't want to scream," He whispered, stroking her cheek lightly.


message 6035: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry I took so long!))


message 6036: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((that's okay, it's a long post. o__O))

Salem woke up, looking up at him. The fight in her eyes drained as he spoke.


message 6037: by [deleted user] (new)

((It's my specialty. ^o^))

He smiled at her, a dark, almost hungry grin. "Dear Lizzie was sweet enough to bring me along. I've noticed that you don't get along with her very well. It's a shame. I'd hoped that you two would become the best of friends." He glanced at Sean. "Are you becoming attached to your new friend? He seems to be head over heels for you. Oh, yes, I've been watching. All day, I've watched."


message 6038: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I liked it))

"you watched?" she asked dazedly. "What are you here for?"


message 6039: by [deleted user] (new)

((Thank you.))

He shrugged. "You. It's a bit of a pain, falling so hard for you, but I have. I just can't seem to leave you alone."


message 6040: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((no problemo))

"But Ellis-" she furrowed her brow in confusion.


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"You still don't get it. How can you not? Did you think I kissed you just to torture you? Ah, but Shadow, I'm afraid that is just what I am going to do now. You will remember this conversation only as a dream in the morning. You shall never be able to forget me, dear Salem, and I think that might make it a bit harder for your Sean to get to you." He smiled, but a bit of sadness lurked underneath of it.


message 6042: by [deleted user] (new)

((gtg soon.))


message 6043: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Ellis! You don't understand.."


message 6044: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Bellie the Squirrelly Girl wrote: "((gtg soon.))"

((that sucks!))


message 6045: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Hey... what happened? Srry for vanishing. :[))

"It's like a staff." Liv explained "I can do a whole bunch of things with it."


message 6046: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((It's okay. well now that Bellie's gone. darnit. well it's night now, we'll say Blaze and Liv stayed up to try that thing out. Ellis is there and Lizzie is draining the powers because Ellis convinced her to. Ellis is talking to Salem.))

"Show me," Blaze said quietly. They were out of sight of the others.


message 6047: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Ok, Can we ever escape that Damned Ellis??))

Liv smirked raising an eyebrow
"Alright."
She grabbed the staff and spun it. Creating a mini whrilwind.


message 6048: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((prob not...olo))

Blaze smiled. "Cool.."


message 6049: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((lol Damn...))

"Get to kill shadows too." Liv smiled "This," She pointed to the black metal on the top "this can kill Shadows before they stop shifting. So it kills some time for us."


message 6050: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ahaha.))

"that's cool..how does that work?"


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