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message 5901: by [deleted user] (new)

"Don't," he murmured.


message 5902: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I-I just am.."


message 5903: by [deleted user] (new)

He shook his head and put a finger over her lips. "Please. Just don't. Don't apologize. If you do, I will, too." He smiled crookedly.


message 5904: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments That made her smile, just a tiny bit. "And I don't want that."


message 5905: by [deleted user] (new)

"I thought you wouldn't." He lowered his finger and ran a hand through her hair. "Do you know how beautiful you are?"


message 5906: by Ky (last edited Feb 28, 2010 12:09PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem's eyes flashed in anger and she pushed him away. "Don't!"


message 5907: by [deleted user] (new)

((I kinda thought she'd not react right to that. Remember, Ellis said that? Or did she really not remember what happened?))


message 5908: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ah okay, just a sec))


message 5909: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 28, 2010 12:12PM) (new)

((Okay. I thought she remembered.))


message 5910: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean stumbled a few steps backwards. "What? What's wrong?"


message 5911: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Don't EVER say that to me! I-" she turned her back to him and ran a few metres before collapsing on her knees and sobbing furiously.


message 5912: by [deleted user] (new)

((Sorry I was gone a minute.))

Sean hesitated before going to her and kneeling beside her. "I'm so sorry," he murmured, "I didn't know, Shadow, didn't know it would upset you..."


message 5913: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((it's kay. I'm cleaning and watching the olympics))

Shadow tensed and put her hands on her thighs. "Don't be friggin' sorry. Just stop!"


message 5914: by [deleted user] (new)

((Okay. I don't watch them... because I don't have cable TV. XD))

"Salem. Shadow. I didn't know." He didn't touch her, only spoke gently, his eyes filled with apologies.


message 5915: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((:D))

She relaxed a little, the urge to hit him fading, and she glared at him instead. "You don't need to know. Just don't say it."


message 5916: by [deleted user] (new)

"I won't say it again," he swore quietly.


message 5917: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Good. Good." she sighed.


message 5918: by [deleted user] (new)

He hesitantly covered her hand with his own.


message 5919: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow wanted to pull away, but she knew it would hurt him, so she didn't.


message 5920: by [deleted user] (new)

"Shadow... I'm so sorry I made you upset," he said earnestly.


message 5921: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "DON'T APOLOGIZE TO ME!"


message 5922: by [deleted user] (new)

He flinched and took his hand away. "What else am I supposed to say? Should I just say nothing and let you guess that I regret having made you upset? You're leaving me no clues as to why you're upset, only that I can't do or say certain things, and I'm supposed to just go along with it? Why? Why, Shadow?"


message 5923: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I apologize," she said roughly.


message 5924: by [deleted user] (new)

He frowned and looked away. "I don't want to fight with you. I don't want it to be like this. I just want everything to be alright, or if it's not then I want to be able to make it right. But I can't. And everything's going wrong."


message 5925: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "It's him. It's the stupid kid who can't take no for an answer. It's the retard I grew up with. The boy I thought I loved. The boy who no matter what, is like a brother to me. But he takes it too far, wants too much, takes the same." she whispered, emotion filling her words.


message 5926: by [deleted user] (new)

He turned his head towards her and looked at her with sadness filling his eyes. "Shadow, you're gone from him now. Try to forget him."

((Ah, if only he knew... *evil laugh*))

Lizzie had disappeared behind a tree somewhere, and was talking urgently in a whisper to a boy her age, who was arguing in a calm, even tone. "You must stay with them. No, no one else will do. You are perfect for the job. Think of it as an honor," he was saying.
Lizzie was shaking her head, but eventually she gave in with a resigned sigh. "Fine. I'll stay with them. But don't expect me to be happy about it."
He grinned. "I don't. Just don't act suspicious."


message 5927: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((I know..ahaha))

"I can't forget him!" she said unhappily. "I've tried."


message 5928: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Can I jump back in??))


message 5929: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((yup, now we can do the fight!))


message 5930: by [deleted user] (new)

((Well, yeah!))

He sighed and tentatively raised a hand to touch her cheek, ready to be pushed away but wanting to soothe her and make her feel better. "So he had said that to you?"


message 5931: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "Yes." she stood, breaking the touch. "They're coming again, and they're damn close."


message 5932: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Guys! We got Shadows!" Liv yelled interupting everything wind spazzign out in the space.
Emmy stood waiting tattoos already glowing.


message 5933: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments "I know." Shadow said,too quiet to be heard.

Blaze snapped to attention and Teeghan pulled Avery closer.


message 5934: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yay! Agh, but I'll have to go soon. Good thing my charries won't be needed much. XP))

Sean stood, too. "Where's Lizzie?" He muttered, looking around. He frowned slightly as she appeared from behind a tree. "They're close," he told her. "Are you ready?"


message 5935: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((olo))

Shadow glared at the girl.


message 5936: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Poor Salem and Sean...))

Shadows appeared from out of nothing and stood there. Each kid had their own little army to deal with. Emmy smiled at the ones facing her, they all looked a little frightened. And with just cause.


message 5937: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((ack, it's fun))

Teeghan didn't know how she'd fight with Avery.

Shadow smiled. "Brothers," she joked.

Blaze stepped forward.


message 5938: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Oh yes. Our poor charries. We always torment them. lol))

Emmy laughed and fire sprang up engulfing the ones around her. She stepped through and did the same for Teeghan.

Rife was holding his own against his horde.

Liv whipped the shadows around.

Patrik had already frozen or killed most of his.


message 5939: by [deleted user] (new)

((Yeah. Drama is fun! When you're writing it, anyway.))

Lizzie scowled at Sean. "Yes, yes." When the Shadows appeared she felt slightly afraid, but then they completely ignored her, and started towards Sean. Her eyes widened and she bit her lip. She couldn't let him get hurt... it wasn't part of her job. She stood in front of him and said, "Go away!"


message 5940: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments ((Yes it is. Keeps it all interesting.))

The shadows walked right around her.
"It'll take more than that norm." Emmy growled turning on Lizzie.


message 5941: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow chuckled darkly and killed two of 'her' shadows.

Teeghan thanked Emmy with a nod.

Blaze had managed to kill two of them, but it wsa hard to get his power to work that quickly.


message 5942: by [deleted user] (new)

Lizzie ignored Emmy, closing her eyes and trying to use her power on one of the Shadows, seeing if it would leech their power away or if it would do anything at all.


message 5943: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments Emmy, with a flick of her hand, incinerated the shadows.
"Move it you two."

Patrik ran over to Emmy.
"I think we got more comming."
Emmy turned and looked at him, she winked
"It wouldn't be homecomming if there weren't."


message 5944: by Ky (last edited Feb 28, 2010 01:19PM) (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow smiled at Emmy and Patrik, finishing off the rest of hers and Blaze's packs. "Yeah, there are more."


message 5945: by [deleted user] (new)

Lizzie opened her eyes and looked to Sean. "I don't know what to do!" she said breathlessly.
Sean shook his head and said, "Just get in the middle."
Lizzie shook her head, too. "They don't care about me, it's yourself you should worry about!"


message 5946: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments " I wanna try something." Emmy smirked
"We all know how the last thing you wanted to try went." Patrik commented.
"Shut up and come here." Emmy said waving him over. She closed her eyes and put her hands by her sides Palm up. She stayed like that for a second then opened her eyes.
"Shadow problem, dealt with." She grinned


message 5947: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Shadow grinned, "That was great Emmy."


message 5948: by [deleted user] (new)

Sean laughed quietly, relieved. "Cool."

Lizzie was disturbed by the fact that the things- the shadows- had just ignored her.


message 5949: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Salem looked over to Lizzie and sent a thought to her. I know what you did.


message 5950: by Hannah (new)

Hannah (lettingtheinkdry) | 4824 comments "Why thank you." She bowed and Patrik smacked her.
"Hey!" She said indignantly
"Come on you pain in the ass." Patrik laughed.

"Don't you feel the love?" Liv whispered in Salem's ear.


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