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message 351: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I got really scared for a second, but then remembered Tyler and Katy were there so he wouldn't do anything. Or so I hoped. Once I gathered myself I looked at dad and said "You get mad at me for nothing, but you. I never got mad at you! You treated mom and me like crap!"


message 352: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Then, the thing I though my father, my FATHER, would never do, he did. He slapped me. And that was what really set Tyler off. I'm not even kidding, like Tyler was up in my dads face, screaming. Yelling. Threatening. I was terrified.


message 353: by [deleted user] (new)

"You think you scare me Mr Pecs an Attitude ?", wised my Dad. "I'll have your ass for assault if you so much as breath on me wrong!". He pushed past Tyler and glared at me and Katy...."Get in the godamm car, both of you, NOW!"


message 354: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "As if I would do what you say." I spat back at him while holding my face.


message 355: by [deleted user] (new)

Dad grabbed my arm and started pulling me towards the car...."Back off son!", he barked at Tyler, "This is family stuff!".


message 356: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I tried to pull away, but my dad was to strong. He opened the car door, and was about to push me in when Tyler hissed "Let her go or you'll regret it!"


message 357: by [deleted user] (new)

Dad turned on him, rage in his eyes, "Take a telling son! BACK THE FUCK OFF!", and swung a punch which smacked into Tylers guts and doubled him over with an air grasping "OOOOOF!"


message 358: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments When punching Tyler my dad let go of my arm, so I bolted. I grabbed Katy and dragged her to the jeep, I didn't want either of us getting hurt.


message 359: by [deleted user] (new)

My dad, saw what I'd done and began to stomp towards the jeep. I noticed Tyler had left the keys in the ignition.


message 360: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I slid over to the drivers seat, and started the jeep. I locked the driver side doors. Tyler knew what I meant by this and ran over to the passenger side, and hoped in. Before his door was fully closed I started pulling away.


message 361: by [deleted user] (new)

My dad grabbed and kicked at the car as it moved, but he stumbled and fell to his knees as we accellerated. I watched in the rear view mirror as he got up and shouted and screamed and waved his fists. A tear running down my cheek as we left him behind us.


message 362: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler looked at me, and said in a sweet voice "Pull over at the gas station a few blocks down sweetheart." I nodded and whispered "Okay," but nothing more than that because I knew if I did I would start crying even harder.


message 363: by [deleted user] (new)

Katy sat, puffy eyed and ashamed in the back of the jeep, "Sorry, sorry, sorry....." she muttered.


message 364: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Don't be you know how he gets, you did the right thing. Think if you didn't, he would have really hurt you, at least you brought him to us so he didn't hurt one of us terribly." I said to Katy while I looked at her in the rearview mirror.


message 365: by [deleted user] (new)

"Thank you for under standing....", Katy sighed.
"Let's all head back to mine and discuss what you guys wanna do next....", suggested Tyler, settling back into his alpha male role.


message 366: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Sounds good to me." I said, happy we had somewhere to go.


message 367: by [deleted user] (new)

I watched Tyler as he drove us to his place....I kinda wished he had kicked my dad's ass ...but kinda was glad he hadn't. He had been such a hero standing up for me though....wow, talk about my very on knight in shining muscle!


message 368: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments When we pulled up to Tyler's house was when I realized I was meeting Tyler's parents!


message 369: by [deleted user] (new)

"Mom and Dad will be back soon, but they won't mind you both coming in to clean yourselves up and rest a little till you work out what to do.", invited Tyler. Just try and stop me I thought....their house looked awesome!


message 370: by [deleted user] (new)

We went into Tyler's massive house and looked around. Katy started to get back to her old self and joke whispered, "If you married him this would all be yours!".


message 371: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Then I joked back to her. "What do you mean if, it's more like when."


message 372: by [deleted user] (new)

We raised our eyebrows and burst into giggles....this was more like the old times.


message 373: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments After our giggle fit Tyler lead us to the kitchen. "Take a seat girls I'll make you guys some food."


message 374: by [deleted user] (new)

"oooh, service with a smile!", I grinned. Katy winked and said "we'll need perfect waiting if you want a tip tho....!".


message 375: by [deleted user] (new)

Tyler prepared some open sandwiches with a side salad...'fridge food'. But we ate it hungrily and washed it down with mountain dew.
It was about then that his parents walked in on us feasting on their food....


message 376: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Tyler, honey, who are they?" Tyler's mother asked, trying to sound nice,but failing horribly....


message 377: by [deleted user] (new)

"This is Clare and Katy Mother...They are my study partners for the maths quiz!", lied Tyler.
"Oh! Well in that case we shall leave you to study....may I suggest BOOKS might help", she snapped as she walked through a door into a room of yapping little chow's".
Katy and I looked at each other, then Tyler..."Math Quiz!",we gawped.
"It was the best I could do at short notice!", he blushed.


message 378: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "How about we were just hanging out..." I suggested.
"Hmm. I never thought of that." Tyler said, dumbfounded.
"No dip." Katy mumbled. Man, I love her.


message 379: by [deleted user] (new)

"At least she doesn't mind you both hanging here now", smiled Tyler. "Let's go to my room to plan".
"Way to go Poindexter! Does that work on all the girls?", laughed Katy, nudging me.
Secretly, I hoped we'd still go to his room though.....


message 380: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "For your information when I have people over to study, I never bring them to my room..." Tyler said quietly.


message 381: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Oooo!!! We're special, Clair!! Special!!" Katy said, prancing around happily. I laughed under my breath.


message 382: by [deleted user] (new)

Katy was such a putz ! But it didn't stop us following Tyler to his room......YUM !


message 383: by [deleted user] (new)

Tylers room was cool, he had everything ! music, posters, sound system, DVD's and games consoles... "WOW! Go the bank of mom and dad!", whispered Katy into my ear...


message 384: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "I'm not deaf. But, thanks. I'm an only child. I used to get everything that I wanted. Then, I turned sixteen, and had to find my own job. That's when I met your dad." Tyler said, turning to look at me. "I've been working for him ever since." He told us.


message 385: by [deleted user] (new)

"sorry", I blushed....
He took my hand and kissed it! "Don't be sorry....be mine...", he whispered so that Katy could not hear. OMG ! I nearly wet myself right there on his expensive carpet...


message 386: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "I don't think now is the time to be discussing this." I blushed a deeper shade of crimson. "Later." I promised.

*Holy shit. I made a comment for the first time in ages!!!!*


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