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message 201: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "That's stupid. stupid mean,if she loves him, she needs to go to him. This is effed up." Tyler said, pulling the move, by yawning and putting his arm around me, pulling me closer to him.


message 202: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments It was a really lame move, but it felt so nice to be so close to Tyler. So I moved closer, and laid my head on Tyler's shoulder. "It is really effed up."


message 203: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I lowered my head to the crook by his neck.


message 204: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler then lowered his hand and started making small circles on my back. Dang did that boy smell good.


message 205: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments When the movie was over, I stood in the middle of the theater, waiting for Tyler to stand. "Come on..." I said, tugging on his hand. Let's go." I tugged again. Finally he gave in, and stood up.


message 206: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments We went to my jeep, and Tyler opened the passenger door for me and then got in the driver seat himself. He didn't turn on the jeep right away, but instead turned to me and asked me. "So did you catch the end of the movie, or where you to busy smelling me?"


message 207: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments My blood froze. "I was NOT smelling you." I said clearly. I was though. And he smelled amazing. "No..." I said again.


message 208: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Don't deny it sweetheart, I know you were. So tell me, do I smell good?"


message 209: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Loser." I said.
"Tell me." Tyler demanded.
"Fine! You smell damn great! Okay?!" I yelled.
"Jeez. You don't have to be feisty. Though, I kinda like it." Inside, I was smiling, outside, scowling.


message 210: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler finally started the car and backed up out of the parking space. "Now it's part two of our date, swimming." Tyler said with his sexy lopsided grin.


message 211: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((Anthony))

"I CANNOT swim." I said aggravated.
"Don't worry. You can hold onto me." Tyler said.
"I'm good."
"Fine, but just think of it this way. If you drown and go unconscious, I get to give you mouth to mouth." Tyler said, licking his lips.


message 212: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I gave him a death glare even though on the inside I love the idea of our lips touching.


message 213: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments When we made it back to the house, I ran to my room to change. I wore a pink bikini. I wasn't as skinny as all those gagging models, but I did have legs that none of them will ever have, and they all ogle over. "Ready." I say, wrapping a towel around my body.
Tyler's wearing nothing but trunks low on his hips. I couldn't help but stare at his muscles.
"See something you like?" He asks me.
I walk past him, hitting him in the chest. I just wanted to touch him. Hitting wasn't entirely necessary. I heard Tyler's low chuckle as I walked out the door. The light from the moon reflected off the ocean. It was beautiful.


message 214: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I was nervous about taking my towel off, but I finally took a deep breath and dropped it. I looked over at Tyler and saw him staring and smiling, and I think I heard him whisper "Dang."


message 215: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((D.C.))

"Shut it." I said, walking closer to him.


message 216: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments ((That's what I thought of.))

Tyler closed the distance between us and took my hand. "You ready for this dollface?"
"Let's get the embarrassment out of the way already."
And then we started walking toward the ocean.


message 217: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments All of a sudden, Tyler picked me up, and threw me over his shoulder.
"What the?!?" I screamed. Put me down! I didn't say that out loud, I kinda liked it.


message 218: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments He didn't put me down until the water was to his belly button, and when he did he pulled me really close, and looked into my eyes, and said "You are beautiful Clair."


message 219: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I made a face, a splashed him with water. "Come get me. Member. I can't swim." I said, wading deeper into the water.


message 220: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler smiled his lopsided grin and started coming after me. "I'm going to get you pumpkin."


message 221: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Pumpkin? Are we four? I thought I was, and I quote, Hot Stuff." I Sid, going deeper and deeper. This was fun...


message 222: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I was in water that was to my shoulders when all of a sudden there was nothing under my feet. I had heard about little dips in the sand like that, but never had it happened to me. Before I knew it water was all around me and I couldn't breathe.


message 223: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments My breath was cut short. All of a sudden, sting arms wrapped around me, pulling me above water. "You really wanted me to give you mouth to mouth. Didn't you?" Tyler joked. I held onto him tighter, shivering.


message 224: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments **strong


message 225: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "It's okay, it's okay I got you now, no need to worry nothing is going to happen." Tyler brought me back to my towel and once I had it wrapped around me, with the help of him. He picked me up again and started bring me to the house.


message 226: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "You can be pretty stupid sometimes pumpkin." Tyler told me.
"Thanks Tyler." I said, putting my head on his chest.
"Your welcome sweetheart."


message 227: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Once we were in the house Tyler brought me to the kitchen, and asked "You want me to make you some food, almost drowning takes a lot away from a person."
"Will you make me some eggs? I don't know what you do to them, but they taste amazing."


message 228: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Tyler's face broke into a smile. "Sure thing Hot Stuff. Go change." Tyler said, grabbing a pan.


message 229: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I ran up stair, and put on my favorite fuzzy pj pants, which are pink with purple polka dots. Then threw on an old T-shirt, and ran back down stairs because I hated being away from Tyler.


message 230: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Here you go." Tyler said, sliding a plate in front of me.
"That wad fast." I said.
"I like things fast." Tyler smirked at me.
"Gross." I mumbled in disgust.
"You walked into that one." Tyler said smiling.


message 231: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler and I sat in the kitchen and talked all night. About a little but of everything. We talked some about our school lives, our families, and our nonexistent love lives.


message 232: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Sometime around three, we both were sitting on the couch, fast asleep. Tyler at one end, and me on the other. Well, I started on the end, but managed to end up curled next to Tyler, his strong arms wrapped around me.


message 233: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments We sleep soundlessly, until my dad got up at 6:30.


message 234: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments He noticed us the minute he woke. "Clarrisa Hunter! What do you think your doing?!" My father's voice startled us awake.
"Dad..." I said stoic.
"It's not what you think Mr. Hunter. We just fell asleep. That's all. all I swear." Tyler's voice was panicked.


message 235: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "It's not what I think! I see you and my daughter on the couch cuddling and sleeping, and you want me to assume it's nothing! Clair get upstairs and go to your room, I be up in a bit to talk to you. Tyler, you and me are going to have a good talk down here."


message 236: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments After what seemed to be hours, but was only twenty minutes, minutes door opened to reveal a very pissed father of mine. "Hi daddy." I said sweetly.


message 237: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Don't you hi daddy me Clair, it's not going to get you out if trouble."


message 238: by [deleted user] (new)

I looked at my dad, the disappointment on his face, and wanted to cry...but I was just too angry at his assumptions about Tyler and I to let the tears out.
"Why don't you ever just listen first ?" I hissed.


message 239: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments My father walked over to my bed, and scooped me up in his arms."I'm sorry sweetheart." My dad said.
He can't call me that. That's what Tyler calls me...
"Don't call me that." I told him, the anger dripping off of my every word.


message 240: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "I know your mad at me for assuming something was going between you and Tyler, but can you blame me?" He lifted my chin so that I was looking into his eyes. "My beautiful daughter was sleeping on the couch, laying with a teenage boy, and all teenage boys want is one thing. I assumed something was going on because that's what all dads would do."


message 241: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Dad. I'm more responsible than that." I told him.
I could not believe I was having this talk with my father. Guess what dad: mom beat you to it five years ago...

"I know... What we're you two doing anyway?" Dad asked.
"Tyler took me out." I whispered. "Oh. And I almost drown, but Tyler saved me..." I said.


message 242: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "You almost drowned? Are you okay? Do you need a doctor?" The last time I saw my dad get this nervous was when I was ten, and got lost for five minutes in the mall.
"Everything is fine dad, Tyler saved me, no need for a doctor."


message 243: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "I don't know whether to thank him, or slap him for taking you swimming when you don't know how." Dad said.

"He was going to teach me, but I sorta fell, then I couldn't breathe, then Tyler got to me, then we talked about nothing, then I fell asleep next to him." More like on him. But I was not going to tell my FATHER that. "So that's the whole story dad." I said.


message 244: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments He took a deep breath, and looked me deep in the eyes to see if I was lying. When I didn't flinch he smiled. "I'm glad nothing happened." A short pause later he added "And nothing better happen."
I gave him a big smile. "Nothing is going to happen daddy."
"Good." And then he gave me a kiss on my head, and left the room.


message 245: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Seconds later, a very eager Katy burst through the door. "Tell. Me. EVERYTHING!!!" She yelled, then fell onto her air-mattress.


message 246: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I was debating if I really wanted to tell her everything, but the look on her face made me spill.


message 247: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I told her everything. Even the part where I fell asleep in Tyler's arms. When k was finished, she said, "Wow. That's... hot!" I could help the smile and laugh that erupted from inside me.


message 248: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "I'm sorry is hot not the right word, is sexy a better word?" She said with a big grin on her face.


message 249: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Just shut up. But my dad is P.O.ed. Like SUPER. I don't what to tell Tyler. I'm a little embarrassed to even talk to him now." I admitted.


message 250: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "No need to talk to Tyler. I saw him on my way here."


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