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message 101: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments As soon as I wrapped my fingers around the handle, my name was being called. Tyler... great!


message 102: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I tryed to act like I didn't see him, but he came up to my door to talk, damn it.


message 103: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Where is Hot Stuff headed?" Tyler asked running a hand through his shaggy chestnut hair. Damn his hottness.


message 104: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "I have to pick Katy up from the airport."


message 105: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Well let me drive you..." I could see the hope in his eyes. Ugh. I hate those beautiful green eyes.


message 106: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "I guess because otherwise I would have to stop for gas, and I really don't have time." Well at least that's what I told myself.


message 107: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "So that's a yes? I'm sure your little friend would like to see the finest piece of eye candy..."


message 108: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Yes that a yes, but if you keep it up I will drive by myself."


message 109: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "That's not what I meant Hot Stuff. I'm driving." Before I could argue my facts, he snatched the keys from me, jumping into the drivers side. I shook my head, and walked to the passenger side, not needing to argue, knowing that I would lose anyway.
As soon as I buckled up, he put the top down, and squealed out of the lot.
"Tyler! My hairs messing up!" I was practically shouting over the wind whipping my hair around in different directions.


message 110: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "It looks okay Clair" And then he winked at me. To take my attention way from him I turned on the radio trying to find a station, and finally I heard Burno Mars's "Just the Way You Are" playing and started singing along with.


message 111: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Wow. You have a really beautiful voice Clair. Where'd you learn? To sing I mean."

Tyler's big green eyes stared at me, then the road, and back. My voice hitched in me throat. I was done singing for now....


message 112: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments When we got to the air port I called Katy. Turns out I could have taken my time because she was in a coffee shop flirting with some boy.


message 113: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Grand. She just arrived in Florida and she's already found a boy.
Just when I was just about to go get her, she looked up from the tall boy. Her eyes met mine, then wandered to the boy standing next to ME.


message 114: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I think Tyler noticed the look Katy gave him because he put his arm around my shoulders. Then Katy's eyes wandered back to me with shock in them.


message 115: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I could have sworn that Tyler winked.
I wiggled my way from under Tylers heavy arm, only to have him set it back around my shoulders...


message 116: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I looked up and glared at Tyler, but he gave me a lopsided grin, and I just kind of melted.


message 117: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Katy came running at me full speed. She crashed into my hugging me so close, that I thought my circulation was being cut. "Good to see you to Katy." I said sarcasticly.


message 118: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments She wasn't even paying attention to what I said, she was just looking at Tyler. "Whose your little friend here Clair? You haven't said anything about him at all."


message 119: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Katy. This is Tyler."


Realization struck her face.

"Ooohh!! This is the really hot boy you were telling me about?"

Smooth one Katy.


message 120: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "How cute, you told your friend about me." Tyler said with a big smirk on his face.


message 121: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Don't flatter yourself. I told her how obnoxious you are." I hope he didn't realize that Katy totally just clarified that I called him hot.

"Your friend here just said you called me hot..."
Damn, he did catch my fluke.


message 122: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Then Katy finally came flying in for me. "Well she didn't say hot, but she said you had big arm muscles, abs, and were tan. So I just assumed you were hot, and I assumed right."


message 123: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Well well. I can see why you two are best friends;... you both have very good eyes."
Tyler was so full of himself. I kinda hate-loved that about him.


message 124: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I rolled my eyes at Tyler, then hugged Katy again, and whispered a thanks in her ear.


message 125: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments She just smiled. "So... shall we get going?" Tyler commented.
I turned to stare at him.

"Shall? Who says shall anymore?" I didn't give him time to respond, I took Katy' s hand, and led her to the jeep.


message 126: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments The whole way home I was thinking of what I was going to dad, but I kept getting side tracked because Tyler kept looking over at me and smiling.


message 127: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Would you stop that? It's distracting when I'm trying to think." A wicked smirk swept across his face. No response. Just smiling. I melted in the leather seat a little.


message 128: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments When we got home dad was standing in the drive way waiting for us.


message 129: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I'm guessing now would be a good time to tell him that Katy is here.


message 130: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments But I didn't have to because as soon as the car stopped Katy jumped out of the car and screamed "Daaaaadddd!" and gave him a big hug. I knew she did this because it would drive dad insane and she loved driving anyone insane.


message 131: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Dad didn't know what to do so he just patted her back uncomfortably. I stifled a giggle. "Dad. Katy' s here."


message 132: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments But I guess Tyler thought it was to funny to hold back because he brust out laughing this deep laugh, and then soon I joined in.


message 133: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments It was then that I fully realized that I'm staying in the same house, this very boy next to me is. Not on the same house, but only a staircase away... Lord help me.


message 134: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Maybe I was wrong about him...


message 135: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Katy then order me and Tyler to get her bags and bring them to her room. Damn she is such a princess.


message 136: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Don't stress Hot Stuff. I've got the bags." Tyler said. I said a silent thanks, then took Katy by the hand, leading her to my room, where she was staying with me. My dad got me on of those trendle bed thingies.


message 137: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments When Katy saw my room she freaked. "Why in the world don't you have anything on your walls!? If you are going to be here all summer you need to personalize it!"


message 138: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments That meant pictures. And I was okay with that. I loved photography. "Here you go." We both turned to face the door at the sake time. Tyler had his shoulder leaning against my door frame.


message 139: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments He was sweating some, which was probably from carrying all the crap Katy brought with her.


message 140: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Thanks sexy." God Katy. Did she really just say that?!

"Right. Well, you can go now..." I said as politely as possible

"I know. Just wanted see what you two were doing... Maybe we can all bond..." Tyler said.


My eyes jumped out of their sockets. Did that just happen. Katy opened her mouth to say something, but I threw my pillow in her face, and slammed my door, after shoving a laughing Tyler out the door.


message 141: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Katy told me everything happening back home, and I told her about what had happened here. Then when I was done telling her she looked at me and said "Do you like him? Be honest because if you don't I'm going cut in and have my slice of Tyler pie."


message 142: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Tyler pie? Just saying, but he's much sweeter than pie..."


message 143: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "You like him! OMG you haven't like ever admitted you liked anybody!"


message 144: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "I didn't admit anything. I just said he was sweeter than pie." Jeez. She interprets everything the wrong way...


message 145: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Fine if you don't then you won't mind me asking him to go out sometime."


message 146: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "No! I mean that's totally fine....ish. Don't. I'm undecided. I'll let you know later about the whole Tyler thing...."


message 147: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((Btw. I liked the whole Tyler pie thing...))


message 148: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Fine, but you only have a week! If you haven't made up your mind by then I'm going to cut in."

((it just kinda came to me.))


message 149: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I did an over-dramatic sign. "Fine. Wait! Is it to late to change my mind? Two weeks??"

((Good metaphor))


message 150: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "No I leave in two weeks, and if I wait that long I won't be able to get my slice of pie."


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