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message 51: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments ((Don't worry I would go all caps lock on you))


message 52: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments ((You can pick her name))


message 53: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((What's her name?))


message 54: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((Clair.))

"Clair. This is Tyler. He's sort of like my house-keeper. Ty, this is my daughter Clair."



My dad turned his attention to Tyler again.




"I thought you wern't coming home till tommorrow? How did the thing with your family go? Rough?"


message 55: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((Was that a little confusing...))


message 56: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I couldn't believe dad didn't tell me there was going to be a strange boy working in the house! But before I said anything to dad I realized I was still in my night clothes!


message 57: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "Clair, honey, why don't you go back to bed... or cover up..."


Dad must have notice Tylers big green staring at my chest.
I instinctivly put an arm over myself and slumped up the stairs. Perv...


message 58: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I'm not here for a summer fling. I here to spent a nice fun summer with my father. Who happens to have a really beautiful boy living with him. US.
I don't even like him. He's just like all the others. A waste of time.
And that's what I tell myself as I crawl back under the covers. Although, I know that's not his story, and as much as I hate to admit it, it's oh so very true.


message 59: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I tryed clearing my mind of him, but it just wouldn't work. No matter how hard I tryed he kept popping back in my mind. Finally I decided to call Katy, and tell her what went down.


message 60: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "It freaking three in the morning! What do you want?!?!"



I missed Katy...


message 61: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Oh, sorry I forgot about the time change. When are you coming? I really need my best friend right about now."


message 62: by [deleted user] (new)

A girl with long black hair comes in.


"Hello." I said nervously


message 63: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments (( how is that relevant?))


message 64: by Amanda (new)

Amanda Shamblin (Brinlee_20) | 4 comments this is great!!! girls love it name suggestion Hollis,Calla,Dakota uncommon in the book world always hear the same names emma Bianca sam ect.. but love the story:)


message 65: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((I'm just gonna start at the time change thing.))

"What do you want. I don't care what time it is, I just care that you woke me from my beauty sleep. Talk. Explain yourself."

She loves me, and she knows it...


message 66: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "There is this extremely hot boy living here with me and dad! O yeah, and he saw me half naked!" I highly doubt she heard a word of that because of how fast I was talking, but I needed to get it out fast before I exploded.


message 67: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I heard static on the other line...


((ask me what i'm doing...))


message 68: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Katy? Yo Katy can you hear me?" No respone, and then all of a sudden the line went dead. Of course, as soon as I really need to talk to her I couldn't.

((what are you doing???))


message 69: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((I meant as you asking Katy... oh well...))

Five minutes later, my phone rang. Katy. What?


((Now as the person, ask Katy what she's doing..))


message 70: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments ((by as the person do you mean Clair?))


message 71: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((Yes....))


message 72: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "What are you doing Katy?"


message 73: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "My bag is all packed. I'll be there sometime tomorrow. Wait for me!"

The excitement in her voice was almost to much... almost.


message 74: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "I can't wait! I really need a best friend right now, I have super juciy stuff you will love to hear."


message 75: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Little did she know that I'm not going to fall for the amazing boy who, it turns out is sleeping right down the steps from me. He will not turn my life around. I like it just the way it is. Nothing needs changing.
Katy hung up after she gave me her flight information. I was super excited for her to come.


message 76: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I decied to get ready for Katy to come, so I put on my cleaning clothes. Which consisted of old soccer shorts which said "Hot Stuff" on the butt, and an old swim team shirt. I threw my hair up into a slopy bun, and started to get to work.


message 77: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I headed down the steps to find my father at the kitchen table driking some coffee. The boy, Tyler, was no where in sight. "Arn't you going to sleep in?" My dad asked as I walked towards the fridge to get some juice.


message 78: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Not today, I didn't sleep the best last night, and since I wasn't sleeping anyway i decided to get some things ready for when Katy comes."


message 79: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments He nodded his head. "So when is Katy coming? Tomorrow?" I could tell that his comment was suppose to be sarcastic, but little did he know, that she was coming in tomorrow.


message 80: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I decided not to tell dad yet, because I didn't want to put him in a bad mood. Maybe I'll just surprise him with her tomorrow.


message 81: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments As I poured my OJ, I heard a door open and close. No later than two seconds, Tyler walked in the door. Shirtless. And dripping in sweat. Normally I would be appalled, but he just looked sexy...


message 82: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments Tyler noticed me looking at him and gave me the sexiest lopsided girn, and because I didn't know any other way to respond I just rolled my eyes and turned away.


message 83: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments No boys, no boys. That's what I kept chanting in my head. "Clair, mind getting me a glass of juice also?" I heard Tyler say.


message 84: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Yeah sure!" I went to grab another glass for Tyler, and that's when I realized my hands were shaking. I tryed to hide it, but when I went to pour the juice, it went everwhere. It got all over the counter, and then started to drip on the floor. Right then I knew my face was as red as a cherry.


message 85: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments "I'm it gonna lick it off the floor, but I will off you..." Right then, I knew my face grew even more red. Ten I heard a slap. I turned to find Tyler holding his face, smiling. My dad on the other hand, looked like was bout to kill someone. Tyler... someone.


message 86: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((I'm NOT gonna lick it off the floor.))


message 87: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I couldn't look at Tyler for the fear my face would get redder, if that was even possible. I could't believe he had said that, expicially since my dad is sitting right there! So instead of looking at anyone I grabed paper towels and started cleaning up the big mess i made.


message 88: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments As squatted down I could feel Tyler's eyes boring into me... creep.


message 89: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I know my dad noticed him looking at me too because he turned to Tyler said "You will stay away from my daughter if you know what's best for you. She isn't just some random girl you can just hook up with, and then forget forever." Right then is when I think I died of embrassment, my dad had used air quotes around hook up with acting like he was all cool.


message 90: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I felt nit only embarrassment, but anger build inside of me. I slammed my glass and paper towels on the ground, and yelled at the two of them. "Stop it!! Dad you have to worry about anything going on between us. And you," I pointed a finger at Tyler. "Back the frick off dude." I sidestepped the mess on the floor, and stomped up to my room. "I like your short 'Hot Stuff'" Tyler called to me before I shut my door.


message 91: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I couldn't believe the balls Tyler had! Yeah I like the complements, but he was acting like a pig the way he kept talking to me. And I hate pigs!


message 92: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Breathe Clair breathe. Maybe... if I confronted him. Nope. He would make fun of me.
There was knock at my door. "Who is it?"
Tyler abruptly walked in. So much for answering me.
"Your dad told me I have to apologize. So... I'm sorry?"


message 93: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments "Really your apologzing because my dad made you? I don't want to hear anything from you if my dad made you say it to me. Apology not accepted!"


message 94: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments Anger boiled in my veins. Tyler took a step closer to me, lifting my chin with his fingers. "Well he didn't MAKE me, I just needed an excuse to get you alone..." I jumped away from him. "Kidding." He was so amused...
"Get out!!" I pointed towards the door. "Now!!"

"How bout a kiss to go, with a side of tongue...."

"If you don't leave, I'll make you, now go!!!"



((Did you like metaphor?))


message 95: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments ((*my metaphor...))


message 96: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I couldn't believe he talked like that! He was such a pig, but in the back of my mind I knew, no matter how hard I tried I wanted to give him a kiss to go. Maybe even with a side of tounge.

((Where do you come up with this stuff???))


message 97: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments He gave me one last , and a wink before he shut the door after him.

((I don't know!!!! :::)))) I'm grinnin so much...))


message 98: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I have never had a boy annoy me so much before. I used to brush it all off, but with Tyler I just couldn't. There was something different about that boy.

((Me too.))


message 99: by Hollie (new)

Hollie | 449 comments I was determined to find out what it was that was so different about him. And soon.
I played in bed till about three, reading, when Katy called. "I'm here Sugar! Come get me!!"
She could have given me a heads up. But it was Katy, so that's impossible. I ran down the stairs to tell dad, dad but he wasn't anywhere to be found.


message 100: by Carli (new)

Carli | 160 comments I had to pick Katy up soon, so I left a note on the counter for dad, grabbed the keys to my Jeep and headed to the airport to get Katy.


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