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Hollie
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Apr 07, 2013 04:17PM
His smile broadened when I almost ripped going UP the stairs that led to the pool. He caught my wrist, and set me upright before walking again. "Gee Clair. No wonder you can't swim, you can barely walk." Tyler told me. I stuck my tongue out at him.
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He smiled and laughed....Oh, gee it was like music from heaven !
"Let's stake out a good spot...." He quipped, although we were in fact the only people around.
I pretended to be choosy and took my time before deciding on a suntrap next to a cabana.
"Let's stake out a good spot...." He quipped, although we were in fact the only people around.
I pretended to be choosy and took my time before deciding on a suntrap next to a cabana.
I walked over to the spot, and then turned back to Tyler, put my hands on my hips, and got a big cheesy grin on my face. "This is the spot, it's perfect!"
"Your ladyship", bowed Tyler, making me giggle at the thought of me being the lady and him being my servant....like Lady Chatterly's Lover. He walked to the spot and spread the two towels next to each other.
Once Tyler stood up he grabbed the sunscreen like he was modeling it, and asked "Sunscreen?"
I gulped and my heart started to skip faster. A tremble of anticipation tingled through me.
"Front or back first ?" asked Tyler.
"Front or back first ?" asked Tyler.
"Back first." Was he really going to put sunscreen all over me! I barely had anything covering!
Tyler gently squeezed the body of the bottle with his masculine hands. The cream slowly poured and melted into them. He started moving his hands back and forth, round and round, warming them and covering them from rounded palm to dimpled tip.
He stretched towards me, hands open and toned, muscular arms primed.
He stretched towards me, hands open and toned, muscular arms primed.
I melted into his big meaty hands, soaking up his warmth. All of a sudden, I felt his lips by my ear. "My turn." Tyler said.
"But you only did my back......" I smiled coyly, turning to face him. Only inches from him, feeling the heat from his body and hearing the waver in his breath.
Tyler smiled, put only a drop on his forefinger, then touched the tip of my nose. I pushed him playfully, then took the bottle out of his hands, squeezing the cool liquid on his back. After I finished, we walked onto the pool deck, and I dipped a toe in. "Brrr!" I shivered. Just then, Tyler grabbed my hand, pulled me in with him. He kept me cradled near him, though I could touch.
Once I had warned up a bit Tyler looked me died in the eyes and said "You ready to learn how to swim sugar?"
"Nope. But let's get it over with." I looked at Sean, and he smiled, then started to explain the basic concepts.
Learning to swim was so much fun, in so many ways. Tyler cradled me in his strong arms whilst I paddled, then glided, then kicked. He was REAL close the whole time....almost like I might have meant it.
His reassuring whispers and gentle touches spurred me on to try and please him...and BOY did I want to please him.
Finally we started to get a little tired and climbed out the pool and onto our waiting towels. We lay down next to each other, Tyler lazily running his fingers up and down my back and neck as I dozed in the sunshine.
"Why can't it just be like this forever?" I murmered contentedly.
His reassuring whispers and gentle touches spurred me on to try and please him...and BOY did I want to please him.
Finally we started to get a little tired and climbed out the pool and onto our waiting towels. We lay down next to each other, Tyler lazily running his fingers up and down my back and neck as I dozed in the sunshine.
"Why can't it just be like this forever?" I murmered contentedly.
"Be like what Sweetheart?" Tyler asked, removing his hand from my back and arms."So perfect. Like, right now, I don't have a worry in the world, AND to make it even better, I can swim. SWIM!! SWIM TYLER, SWIM!!!"
Tyler laughed at my outburst, "You are just the prettiest thing I've ever seen when you get all excited like that", and he kissed me sweetly on the top of my head.
I don't know how long we just laid there talking, and I don't really care because it was perfect.
A perfect day in perfect company, ending with what was looking like it was going to be a perfect sunset. All I needed to hear to complete it was Lou Reed on the radio....
Tyler picked my hand up off the ground, and pulled me.back to the Jeep with all of our things in his hands.
Hollie wrote: "((What the heck is a Lou Reed?:) ))"
((singer - ancient - "It's Just A Perfect Day" COOL SONG !))
((singer - ancient - "It's Just A Perfect Day" COOL SONG !))
((Oh. I totally knew that.....))"You want to go someplace else, or wanna go back home?" Tyler asked hummingbird at me.
"I go where you go. After all, you are the driver..." I told him.
"Then let's hit the road!" said Tyler, stroking my cheek and accelerating into the sunrise. I felt like I was in the coolest movie ever.
A stationwagon turned the corner into Otis's street and accelerated, discreatly, after Tylers jeep. In it sat Claire's very pissed off father and a puffy, tear streaked Katy.
"You did a good thing telling me about this Katy..." reassured Claires Dad.
((Does he have a name? Can we give him a name?))
A stationwagon turned the corner into Otis's street and accelerated, discreatly, after Tylers jeep. In it sat Claire's very pissed off father and a puffy, tear streaked Katy.
"You did a good thing telling me about this Katy..." reassured Claires Dad.
((Does he have a name? Can we give him a name?))
Oh my gosh! Why was dad here? I looked over at Tyler, but he was already getting out of the Jeep. "Hi Frank, what happens to bring you here?"(( hint, hint I just kinda sorta completely named the dad frank...))
(( sorry Hollie your comment wasn't there when I started to write, so I just named him Frank))
My dad pulled the car to a stop, and we both got out. "What's going on?" I asked.((Btw Charls, I think he meant, like a time skip, Tyler's at home, and Clair and FRANK
(( I was home for a bit, but then had to leave, and im still out and about now))
((Oh my bad, i was distracted when i was writing, so it was hard to think stait))"Clair, where you two just now?" My dad asked with a hard face.
"Umm. I don't really know..." I was telling him the truth. I didn't know where we had gone. To one of Tyler's friends house. That's about all I knew.
"Frank, we were at my friends house about fifteen minutes away."
"Swimming ? Why didn't you just use our pool ?" frowned my Dad...he does that a lot....
"Well Frank it needs to be cleaned, and I have been doing other things around the house,so I haven't had time yet. I really didn't think teaching Clair how to swim could really wait, especially after what happened last time, so we just went to my friends house." Dang was Tyler good under pressure!
Frank looked uncertain...."So no funny business right?", he frowned, "My baby has studies and a future...to consider".
I looked from Tyler and back to my father. "You know dad, I was excited to come here... at first. Now, your just kinda pissing me off. So... just... Don't worry." I grabbed Tyler's hand, and pulled him along behind me.
I dragged Tyler away from my idiot Dad...then I remembered....Katy was still sitting in his car !
I hated having to do this, but I turned around to get Katy.
"So, young lady, you are finally seeing sense and coming home ?" stated my Dad.
"I'm checking on my friend!" I glared at him, hating that he was my Dad and could make me feel this way.
I got to the car and knocked on the window, which slid down immediately...."I'm so. so, sorry Claire...", sobbed Katy, "I didn't know what to do or say when he asked. He got SO angry...."
"I'm checking on my friend!" I glared at him, hating that he was my Dad and could make me feel this way.
I got to the car and knocked on the window, which slid down immediately...."I'm so. so, sorry Claire...", sobbed Katy, "I didn't know what to do or say when he asked. He got SO angry...."
"It's okay, I know you didn't mean to get me in trouble. Just come on, let's go."
I dragged Katy from the car and began pulling her with me back towards Tyler.
"Just what do you think you are doing ?" asked Dad angrily.
"Just what do you think you are doing ?" asked Dad angrily.
I didn't even bother answering. I bet he didn't even care anyway. Why would he? He left me a long time ago, and he barely ever sees me now. He probably didn't ever care!
"Come back here!", My Dad shouted
I turned around at yelled back. "Why should I? So you can lecture me on something I didn't do wrong? Why don't I lecture you on what you have done wrong!"
"How dare you talk to me like that!' shrieked my dad, raising his right hand the way he had to my mom so often....
