Savannah W ~’s Comments (group member since Jul 11, 2012)

Savannah W ~’s comments from the Kingdom of Barath *Advanced* group.

I suppose it's a good thing Hannah is going to be gone for a while now...

Mkay. So, my idea is until Hannah gets back, the characters in conversation with her's are frozen. If she gets back before Jessica, then we can maneuver Jessica's characters a little to get the RP up and going. If Jessica gets back before Hannah, Jess, we can just go with the characters we have talking or our free ones since Kron is needed for the meeting. 


Aye, im sorry you came in when everyone seemed to have to go :/. I still have two characters that are able to move about freely. Zahara isn't placed anywhere yet, so I can move her wherever. And if you'd like to put your Lord's son  at the castle in Meneara because maybe he came with his father, I can run into him with Braylin. But, you can keep him in Milton if you prefer and I can make either a new character out there or put Zahara out there. 

Asher waited a short moment before saying what was on his mind. "Well, I'm certain that at least one of the Lords here today believes they can do it better," he said, looking William in the eyes. His voice had been rather serious. Asher wasn't sure who it was--or if it was everyone, but he knew someone had the idea of the throne in their mind. 

I think I'm going to make another witch that control's the element fire. I want her to have been basically raised in the fires of hell (a vicious volcano). She has a twin brother who controls water and he's out basically in the sea (he'd be open to play). 

I was wondering if we could make a volcano near the stone lands or somewhere 

Also, like off of Ergon, I was wondering if the Dragon Masters would have control of "magic" like the elements and what not. 


Opinions?

((Asher def admires William. He thinks highly of all the lords. The only person he truly dislikes is his father, but even then he will defend his father from death. So when war comes and if someone tries to kill his dad, he will sadly fight against it. 

It sounds good! Oh, just to add sides, Braylin is going to convince Max that Asher would be best for the throne, but the king does need to be overthrown. So, Sorrel will fight for Asher, but against the king, so thats gonna be a sticky thing considering Asher won't let his father just be killed. But, i've got a mild idea already stirring for that. But it's to early to solidify anything. 

So, Braylin and Max will be against the rule of William, even though the respect him. It's something about how Asher was raised for that position and had already been bettering the land when his father was to drunk to.... Idk, still to be determined lol))


Asher had tried to rid himself of the headache that was starting to rise. Nothing was being accomplished. There was no solution in his eyes beyond the one that caused a fall through in his family. He fully believed he was able to handle the throne--far better than his father. But the only way his father would step down for him would be death and Asher wouldnt be able to consider killing his dad or letting anyone else do it. So, he was at a nasty standstill. 

The voice of Lord William rang into his ears and Asher's gaze snapped to the wise-man's. His words made Asher laugh slightly. "I thank you for your complainant, William, but I do believe that there has not be much mentioned or brought to attention that would even remotely posse difficult to not handle finely. So, even a man of any bloodline could easily handle this finely thus far." He didn't wish to be disrespectful if he was, but the way he saw it, there had not been anything said in the meeting worthy of making Lord William's words applicable. "To be truthful, I believe I am handling it poorly since it is getting no where."

((it's okay :). Braylin is actually standing outside of the courtroom, so your maid would actually run into him if you wanted to RP that with me, im down with that :).))

At first, Sabrina's smile faded. There was no lie to cover this up and she was still in the castle with plenty around to try and hinder her escape. She might even be able to get out, but not with the valuable object she held. So, she debated shortly what to say, staring darkly into the man's eyes. Then, another lie started to bubble. 

She'd heard tall tells of what the thing she held was. An egg--a dragon egg. There was tale of a master to the beast with the jeweled shell as well. It had been taken from the deep forest of Sorrel, so Sabrina assumed the master would be of Sorrel City residence. 

So, her lie based on tall tale was formed on why she carried the egg. "You know as well as I, this kingdom is corrupt," she spoke in a strong voice still. "The king wishes to keep other's hindered and unable to come against him. So, when the treasure in my arms was found deep in the forrest of your own city, the king ordered it to be taken from your home and locked away here. It was only right of mr to take it back to it's home and keep the playing ground for Sorrel even with others. Because, without the dragon master of your city having his or her dragon, you and your home would be at a great disadvantage." She wondered what he would do with the hopefully plausible lie she tossed out

((sound okay? Sabrina is rather smart on her feet and has a lot of knowledge of this like this and what not...)) 

Max took in a breath and decided to act more like his best friend. "Well, I did not have much to say since he's not much of a king in my eyes. I see him as our king, yes, but not one worth the title. He isn't here for some reason his son had to cover for and this is perhaps the most important thing for him to be at. He's completely incompetent and he does not properly rule. He's selfish and--" he cut himself off realizing he was ranting. 

Byes :/. Talk to you in a few days I suppose.


All my characters are halted here! We won't really be able to go forward for a few days everyone. But when those days end, we shall start back up :).

Sabrina smiled lightly and looked to him, not letting her unease be shown. He was cute with his tone in ways, but that could be for a long range of reasons. Perhaps he just found her pretty and wished to speak with her on a different level than the average conversation. But, regardless, she needed him to be away from her. It was seriously dangerous for her to be with a stolen treasure talking to a general.  "On normal, I would gladly allow such a fine man as yourself to accompany me," she said gently. "However," she looked back before her. "I head to my fiancé's home who lives right outside of Manera. I feel he would disapprove of his future betrowed to be seen with a single man as yourself, alone none the least." 

"I wouldn't expect you had found someone as good as him," Max agreed. "He's one of a kind, that's for certain. He saved my life the night my father was murdered, since then I knew he would be the one to always be there when I needed and the same for me with him." He looked to the door, feeling slightly guilty for sending him out the door as he had. But, max had known Braylin would basically say that removing the king by any means was what was needed. So, Max didn't want fingers to point at Braylin.

Max was fast with his response, having answered something simlar to this before. "Indeed I do. The man we choose to be our right hand should be spoken highly of if we have them beside us," he said firmly. "Braylin Wes is absolutely one of the men I know and I'd easily die for him just as I know he would me. Do you not consider greatly of your hand?"

And that was when Sabrina's heart skipped. Damn her luck. Not only did Sabrina know the man's face and name, but she knew he was rather familiar with the other lords and very familiar with Braylin and Max, so the lie she told the maid was out the window. 

But, she could handle this surely. "Well I do believe I am headed no where currently seeing as you have stepped between me and my way," she chimed as she made an effortless turn that just allowed her to get by him. She didn't figure West would stop his questions there. He probably knew she was not of royals. But, she could easily agree and admit to not being a Lady but rather the daughter of a small city's ruler perhaps? They still dress nice. So, a small city right out of Manera would work. Ruth Village would be the name of the place thrown out, very small but living off the wealth of Meanera and practically a part of Meanera even. So, Sabrina prepped her lie. 

Max couldn't help but cringe on the inside at the mention of Braylin's mouth. But, he didn't let his discomfort of the subject show. Max stood straight as he spoke to Kron. "Aye, he does. But, he never argues for anything short of the truth or best of others. In full honesty, he is perhaps much more worthy of ruling than the majority of men I know that hold more power than he," Max defended his closest friend. There had always been something about Braylin that was enticing and alluring. It just begged people to follow his words and become greater than they thought themselves to be. It was like he could bring the best out of people without even trying. 

As the maid had said, a guard did come. "My Lady, I was told to keep you company until the maid fetched your company," the guard said with a small smile as he bowed to her. 

"Oh, well I am indeed of some company," she charmed as he stood straight. He wasn't at all the type of guy Sabrina would ever go for, but at the time being, she had to fully act like he was. She took a step forward and ran the tip of her finger over his cheek, wondering her eyes along his body. "Do tell me, are you...in need of company, handsome knight?" 

From there it was a piece of cake. The guard did whatever she asked, opening the heavily locked doors to the room she needed to get in. Within a few seconds after closing the door behind them, Sabrina had made three small, quick motions that resulted in her having his neck tightly locked in the crock of her elbow and his back to her. Twenty or so seconds later, Sabrina was laying his unconscious body to the ground, dragging it out of sight. 

Sabrina let out a small breath as she went to a large chair that looked very simlar to that in the throne room. It was mounted to the wall and hide the room Sabrina had learned about all to well. She stood beside the chair, searching for a small hinge lock. She unclasped the lock and shoved the chair hard, causing the whole part of the wall it was connected to to slide and reveal the small room holding one thing. 

It was oddly beautiful and a little smaller than one's head. The color was a deep purple and jewels glittered in the light. Sabrina was almost stunned by the dark beauty of the unknown treasure. But, she had no time to waste. 

She went into the room, carefully picking up the egg. She pulled a small cloth out from with her bosom and wrapped the egg, cradling it like it were a baby. She shoved the chair back into place and left the room.

Guards looked her way and just assumed she to be caring a child. 


((egg, but imagine jewels on it.



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Oh, who ever. If you're having West follow her from the start, I don't guess another theif is needed :). I just didn't wanna be lonely with Sabrina until she crossed paths with your guy's characters again lol.

((I can make Braylin convince Max to overthrow the king since Braylin is certain that the king needs to be removed. But, Braylin thinks Asher should be king...so, that makes it a bit more difficult for him to betray Asher as well. So maybe someone more certain they can rule should overthrow him? If not, I can do it. 

Also, I would like to RP still even though the meeting is on break. So, Imma make max talk to Kron ^_^))


Max followed Asher in his motions of standing. There was to much avoidance of the large issues. This is where Max would of been happy to hear Braylin voice all the truths no one else seemed daring enough to. Sadly, Braylin's words suggested that the only route possible would be to take the king down. Max was starting to see that more so with each moment. 

He lingered near the table, considering what should be done. 

I'm glad you liked it ^_^. We can still RP with Asher, Max, and Kron in the court room till Jessica gets back, if you'd like. 

Also, would you wanna make a character that is a thief that sorta knows Sabrina? That'd be kinda fun someone who's thievish like herself ^_^. 

I'm thinking im going to say that Jessica's maid character went ahead to fetch the guard and that way I can have Sabrina not frozen in place...

"Oh, thank you," Sabrina chimed, already knowing what she would need to do to remove the guard from the picture. A simple seduction trick and a quick few movements that would render the guard unconscious would be all needed to allow her entrance to that room. If she played her cards right,  she might even be able to get the guard to open the door to allow them somewhere more "private" for what she had in mind for the two of them. Though, his mind would be full of sexual pleasures, Sabrina's were full of much different things. 

"You have my forgiveness," she assured.

((are you going to back on later? You should ^_^.))

((As good as we are to get lol. We won't end the meeting until giving Hannah a chance to throw Kron's says in, but we can round about some thing till then. Or have then in a break an one on one conversations until she gets on then group again.))


Asher had called for a break. It seemed everyone was being coy beyond the outspoken Braylin who Max had dismissed. Asher almost wished Max had allowed Braylin to further his words, wishing someone would just be blunt about they believed. 

Folk tales of witches was nothing solvable and Max had taken step up on saying such. He burned with passion about that subject, hating that his people and his house was targeted as devil worshiping, dark magic wielding witches. That was probably why his father and uncle had even been killed. Because they were claimed to be witches. 

Taxes weren't reason for total war but for war amongst themselves in their own cities, though the other cities could come at Meneara considering the king had issued higher taxes to the lands. Asher suggested he speak with his father of lowering those, but he could not guarantee anything which sickened him. The taxes were not needed to be that high and he knew it. 

Trust. No one trusted anyone. That was a huge issue that couldn't be just fixed right up. 

Asher rubbed his temples as he stood from his chair and let out a deep breath.