Savannah W ~’s Comments (group member since Jul 11, 2012)

Savannah W ~’s comments from the Kingdom of Barath *Advanced* group.

Sunshine: I think I'm just gonna get a small Job for a year then maybe vet school :). I'm not sure what they are called if abbreviated...lol


KV: would you want to play the King's hand? His name is Author and made by Jessica. You can check him out and see what you think :)


Hannah: I asked KV if she wanted to play him just now :). Woot! Courtroom drama! Haha

Echo understood completely. She understood it was a long shot. "Go get a coat," she told her. "I'll stay and help you. It'll be a little easier with two of us working on it..." It would still be next to impossible. The ground was frozen solid. The best thing to do would be to cremate him. One, it would give warmth for the girls, two less work and less chance of getting ill from the weather, and three it freed the soul in a way--Echo believed. Burying them caused their body to be trapped forever. While, cremating them allowed their bodies to flutter into the world as ash and their souls drift away. She would suggest it to Arcadia, but didn't expect a yes considering she wished to bury him near her mother.

Echo remained beside the body, mind still distant until Arcadia spoke. Echo looked up to the kind hearted woman. A tear escaped Echo's eye and she swallowed a lump in her throat. "Of course...I'd do anything to help..." Slowly, Echo stood. She looked to the sky then back to Arcadia. "It is late, though, and blistering cold...I realize this is an outlandish thing to say in ways, but you should wait until the morning to burry him. It would be to cold and to risky..."

That's how I try to do it, keep even with males and females.

Mississippi State University for my bs in Biological Sciences. Should be graduating over the summer :). Skipped a year with concurrent credits from high school :)

Dude, I totally understand the applications and research crap. I had that when I graduate hs as well :/. Yeah, no, actually no assassins that I recall. We may have just one. But, it's not being played. I have a master thief haha, but that's it as far as dirty deeds on my part. A female or male assassin? It doesn't matter, naturally, just curious :). My thief is a girl >:)

How comes you're character(s)? :)

KV: of course. Feel free to message it to me and I'll read over it :)

Sunshine: and as far as catching up, you don't need to know to much. Most of the big stuff is among the Lords of the houses and their first hands. So, unless you've made one of them (which I think all are made?) then, you don't really have to catch up or know much beyond there is a war about to start and whatever the descriptions in the group info thing gives :)

KV: Awesome! I've got a few characters not busy I can rp with you with when you get he or she made.


Sunshine: nice to met you and glad to have you! You don't have to write a ton, just enough to fit the scene :). If a few sentences works, then damn, no use in stringing it out! Lol. Don't worry, though, writing generally makes you use to it and expands your skills ;). So, you'll learn well if you don't know already ^_^

Echo slumped more, her shoulders losing posture and her eyes going soft as she stared at the dying man...or dead man. She wasnt sure just yet. The snow hugged around her knees that pressed so deeply into it's top layer. Should she speak? What would she even say? There weren't words for a thing lime this, was there? 

ʜʏᴘɴᴀɢᴏɢɪᴄ ʜᴀʟʟᴜᴄɪɴᴀᴛɪᴏɴ (Karkat Vantas) wrote: "Hello everyone. I know my name is kinda long so call me KV for short ( I might be changing my username soon if I could think of anything :P ).

Anyway, I've decided to take this short time in intro..."

Nice to meet you! Thanks for taking interest in the group :). I hope it doesn't disappoint.



Hannah: it's fine. I've been busy as well. I'll just wait back for your replies :). I'm anxious for the court room blow out ha. Do I need to make more male characters as well as females I gues that are minor characters?

Do we need him to have an input?

Sabrina had made her way slowly through the upper city and into the lower. Her thoughts were a buzz with her interaction with General West and the thing she cradle so close to her. He let her go...to steal from the castle, a precious treasure that even belonged to his home, Sorrel. He hadn't alerted the guards or anything. He...let her go. 

Why? Why would he do that? She pondered it over and over, but finally shoved it to the back of her mind as she neared her destination, one of her many small homes. She directed her thoughts to the object she cradled. West believed her gibberish of that being an egg. So gelable. But...then again...witches existed, so, was it a far stretch to believe in dragons? Sabrina shook her head to try and clear her thoughts as she entered the small broken down home. 

It was built between to steady structures with only two entrances. One, the ragged appearing door and one using a small, trap door type thing on the ceiling that allowed to the roof. The city's wall was right behind the home--meaning the home's back wall was the city wall. There were very indiscrete hand and foot holes to climb the wall off the roof incase an escape is needed. So, the condition of the home wasn't important as far as keeping out intruders. It existed just to house Sabrina or her father for a night or two when they needed. 

She walked in and plopped to the straw covered floor after closing the door behind her. She took the artifact from the cloth and looked upon it, studied it. 

"Have you considered the reason the roads are dangerous?!" Braylin's voice went from slightly normal to a bit louder than meant. This king actually thought he was fixing things. He was making them happen. "Its a chain reaction of what you've done. You raised taxes and did something with the money we don't even know of. Rumor has it you've been building forces on the side to keep our houses in place or to pay off whores, both I would believe. The money isn't being used to help any of our cities, including yours,  though. Due to the rise in taxes, people go bankrupt and become desperate. Those that become desperate resort to things such as thievery along travel ways between cities. Since the roads become dangerous, no one can travel. Since no one can travel, trades don't happen, messages can't get sent, and those that had made the roads dangerous start going to higher degrees of desperation such as burgarly and murder." 

And...that's going to be almost all thi king can take, Max thinks to himself. But, he doesn't bother stopping his friend midway. He was right. Why stop him? 


Asher could feel the tension coming to the highest level. Things were going to break out. He looked to where his sister was again and hoped she caught the look in his eye to leave before things got bad. But, he didn't have time to stare and ensure. He focused on his father as Asher stood from the wall and straightened up a bit. 

"Had you of not made mistakes of such high caliber, my king," Braylin said with a bit of edge but normal volume, "there would be no huge issues to resolve." He realized that would be something a bit over the top to say, but like he could control himself.


((whenever you want :).))

We can improv till then :)

He's not taking to them... Echo thought, her heart dropping a bit. Her eyes went to Arcadia. Echo couldn't do anything else to help. But, maybe this was supposed to happen. Maybe Arcadia's father was the push that she needs to reach her greatness. But, even so, Echo couldn't stand watching the pain across one of the future savoys of their world. Pain can bring out the best in people though...sometimes. Or the worst. 

"So, what you're saying is, you've been unobservant of your kingdom," Braylin spoke seeing as everyone else was short of a response. "You should know why the houses bicker. Taxes have been heightened over our homes to better your great city, yet even here the city perishes. There are restrains coming from your part. Communication has been rendered between the houses by your hand because you wish for them to first come to you and display their issues with another house. Well, even after the issue is addressed to you, the other house never hears of the problems."

 Braylin took in a quick breath before continuing, "You have failed to aid Sorrel--as well as the rest of the houses I assume--when we've asked for it. There are things we lack that we do not have access to that you've kept us from getting. Our trading has been limited as well seeing as the small junction cities between each major city has been allowed to run to the ground. There are no check points between the cities now, no way to rest and eat for the traders, travelers, or anyone. You've stopped supplying these checkpoints with the minor things needed for survival. Honestly, I'm sure you can see how your major issues can be reduced back down to one common issue."

Max had closed his eyes and could feel his body growing more tense. This was going to end badly. So badly. Damn it, Braylin and your big, honest mouth and temper. Max, again flashed West a look. He should be ready if things get out of control. Besides Asher, the three from Sorrel were the youngest and probably the most skilled with the weapons they held on them. That's if things got the most out of control as the could. 


Asher shifted a bit, an satisfied smirk coming to his lips. But, a small flutter of blonde caught his attention near the top of the room. His eyes fell to a small area in the wall near the ceiling that allowed a vantage point. He caught sight of her small, cute face. Rain. He let his smile go a bit more gentle and gave her a small wink. He adored his sister. She needed to hear all of this probably. She was more brilliant than most even years above her. If only their father got had her brain. Asher averted his gaze quickly to keep others from noticing what he had.

Echo allowed herself to be drug behind the home where she saw her friend's father on the ground in the snow. Flakes had began to cover his frame and even if he was saved, frostbit wasn't out of the question. 

Rushing around Arcadia and to her father, Echo collapsed to her knees and examined the man. His convulsions had slowed to mere tremors. He was dying. Echo had seen this before. The name of it was foreign to her, but the only cases she had heard of and the one she saw had resulted in death. Perhaps their medicine hadn't advances far enough yet. "I...I don't know if I can do anything," she admitted distantly as she searched her small bag for anything that may help. She pulled a small array of berries and other herbs that may help. But, she was losing hope to it actually helping. Echo forced the herb/berry mixture into the man's mouth and held his noise to make him swallow. 

I'm on spring break now lol. So, I won't be quite as active next week. But, I'll try to reply, of course :)

Understandable :). You're busy tonight?