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Dec 12, 2015 05:50PM

150761 One of the demons managed to disappeared with Naomi to New Orleans. "Hello my dear Naomi. I sense you want to destroy some things oh and you will. You see I can't let you free just yet." Naomi was so confused where she was now. The darkness felt so good. "I have to make sure you won't ever be the same again."


Sam heard Wyatt he winced at the pain and swore when everything went slient. He hoped Dean returned soon.

The demon quickly chained her up. "We are suppose to let her mind see what Lucifer is doing to her sister." He pointed to Wyatt. "Make sure she sees everything."
Dec 12, 2015 05:38PM

150761 "So your Prince is coming for you." The lead demon whispered in her ear. "Welcome Dean." He flew the door open. "I was just explaining to your girlfriend that what we are doing is no compare what Lucifer has planned for her."


Sam winced a bit. He wanted to tell Wyatt, but his legs were causing him a lot of pain. One demon popped in front of her while the other one popped behind her. The demon from behind wrapped his arm around her mouth and used a rag with something to make her fall asleep. Flashing her to Detroit. "Wyatt?" He called out.
Dec 12, 2015 05:26PM

150761 Demons smiled as they heard the car pulled up. Naomi didn't move mostly because the darkness was luring her in. The other thing she noticed if they saw her move what woukd they do next.

Sam made his way to the staircase as his knees gave out. Right then and there he knew this was a trap. He snelt sulfer, but he couldn't move.
Dec 12, 2015 05:18PM

150761 Naomi laid there. The demons started talking loudly because everything was working well. Her eyes opened as they were putting a blind fold on. They chained her to a post for the Winchesters to see her right away.

Sam walked into the storage grabbed some more salt. He walked to get them some weapons to be prepared.
Dec 12, 2015 05:11PM

150761 Sam found the salt and grabbed it. "Dean did you find it?" He asked softly. "Be safe." He told him. They didn't even know if she was there.

Naomi eyes shut as she passed out from the blood lost. They left her there not caring. All they had to do was deliver her alive.
Dec 12, 2015 05:03PM

150761 Sam looked at her. "No we are staying here. You were just stabbed and too much movement will break those stitches" Sam said. "Dean can handle himself. He will bring Naomi home. We don't need you getting hurt worse." He said as he walked into the storage room and got some salt.

Naomi blinked a few times feeling the darkness take over. The last crackle of the whip happened and everything was silence. She couldn't feel anything nothing mattered. She wanted to destroy. "Good girl." She heard someone say. Her was covered in blood and it hurt a lot, but she couldn't feel it.
Dec 12, 2015 04:52PM

150761 Naomi knew their plan and she couldn't do anything about. She was a goner. Her body craved the darkness and she was trying not to give in, but it was hard. Her back stinged. She felt her body slump over some. "Come on give up. I know your so close. A few more times with the whip, trust me that's better then what Lucifer has planned for you and your sister."


"Okay did they took the bracelet off?" Sam asked calmly. "There has been recent activity at the old abandoned building like 10 minutes from here. Bobby has been monitoring it. Dean you go check out meet us back. I'm going to go grab the salt."
Dec 12, 2015 03:52PM

150761 ((Oh.....))


Jay smiled and kissed her.
Dec 12, 2015 03:34PM

150761 Then she felt hands go around her mouth. She tried screaming, but she was dragged to the nearest alley way. "You thought you could run away, Bitch." He threw her against the brick wall. Then threw her on the ground her head hit a rock, but it was already bloody. He started to kick her in the stomach and in the head. She whimpered some as he dragged her behind the trash can so no one could see her. Then left her for dead. Lily hope Michael saw and came for her.


Jay smiled. "I love you too and I promise I will never let anything happen to you." He was really happy to have her. "And I promise that our life will be happy."
Dec 12, 2015 02:42PM

150761 The demon grabbed her and put his hand around her mouth. Naomi struggled in. The demon took the bracelet off. "Lucifer has plans for you." He whispered in her ears flashing to an Abandoned warehouse in town. "Start feeding her that darkness that Lucifer has ready for her." The demons nodded and moved towards feeding her it.

"Dean is going to come and find you. He will kill you all. Once I break free so will I." Naomi said moving in the chains. The darkness went into her. Her eyes widened as she felt the rush. She felt something hit her back. They were hitting her with a whip because she was fighting. "Please no." Another crack happened.

"If they arrive deliver her right away to New Orleans from there we are suppose to take her sister to Detroit." The demon said to them as they continue to hit her.


"Feeling any better?" He asked.
Dec 12, 2015 01:46PM

150761 Naomi walked out the door kicking the door. Then she saw another demon popped beside her.

"I got you a burger." He said handing it to her.
Dec 12, 2015 01:38PM

150761 "We could have gotten more information." Naomi snapped. "You don't understand what I saw. You don't know what happens we need all the information we can get."

Sam walked up to Wyatt. "It was just a demon."
Dec 12, 2015 01:28PM

150761 Naomi looked at Dean. "Why didn't you listen."


Sam started to exercise it.
Dec 12, 2015 01:24PM

150761 Naomi wanted to fight it, but then it might know why. "Dean no wait we could use him to figure out why they want me." She said.
Dec 12, 2015 01:20PM

150761 Naomi frowned some. She felt a demon flash in. "Dean." She grabbed kitchen knife.

Sam was about to say something before he saw the demon.
Dec 12, 2015 01:11PM

150761 Naomi looked at him some backing up a little bit. "I'll play matchmaker if I want."


Sam walked in slowly. "Thank you."
Dec 12, 2015 01:07PM

150761 Naomi nodded her some. "You sure that I'm better off without it?" Asking softly. She hate thinking about this. "I think we need to set up Wyatt with Sam."
Dec 12, 2015 01:00PM

150761 "Why did this feeling come back?" She said softly. "I do need it Dean." She felt a lot better, but the feeling told her different.
Dec 12, 2015 12:55PM

150761 Naomi nodded her head yes. Taking his hand ready to go.

Eventually they got back with the burgers. Naomi felt the jitters start to set in. "Dean I need it."
Dec 12, 2015 12:47PM

150761 "Thanks Dean you might want to pick one up for Wyatt." Sam said.