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Tears ran down her cheeks. Wasn't she good enough? She was losing blood quickly and her breaths were becoming shallow.

"If I continue giving her the pain she's going to bleed to death." Cas said softly. "We need to go fetch her."

Sam nodded. "It's okay."

Naomi fought the pain for a second. "You may your choice. I was fool to trust you." She whimpered through the pain closing her eyes and flashing to the lake her quiet place. She laid on the ground shaking. Hoping something would happen to her.


Cas nodded his head. "She's at a lake." He told Dean.

Naomi's heart started to break. "Please Dean stop." Her back started to bleed again. "Make it stop. If you don't stop it then we are over." She was serious this was the worse pain and if Dean didn't have a hold of her she would be on the ground.


"Yes." He said softly. "Cas can you heal her?" Cas nodded and healed her.

Cas nodded and snapped his fingers sending waves of pain. Naomi whimpered at the pain. "Stop it. Please stop hurting me."


Sam picked her up. "I'm going to have Cas heal you." He whispered softly in her ear.

Naomi looked at him she felt him tugged. "Master help." She screamed.

"Dean do something to her." Cas said. "Or I will."

Naomi lost focus again. She wasn't going to fail. "I have to kill those people." She said. "Let go of me."


Sam coughed again and nodded. "Okay we need to get to them and see if they got Naomi"

Tears sprung in her eyes as he hit the cuts. "Don't do that." She hissed. "They hit me over ans over again with a whip." She whispered.


"Okay. It seems like this is getting worse." Sam said.

Naomi looked at the hospital. "It needs to burn." The connection was coming back. Her eyes landed focus on the hospital and she thought about the fire. It started again.

"Over here." The smoke was getting worse.

Naomi stopped struggling. "What's happening?" She asked softly.


Sam was on the lower levels looking for Wyatt.

Naomi winced at the pain from her back as he grabbed her. It was enough pain to stop the connection for awhile. Her eyes darted around.


Sam started to look for Wyatt.

Naomi didn't even realize half the things she was saying or who she was talking to.


"Dean grab her now. We can't worry about if she is in their. All we know is Lucifer can't get to her." Cas said.

Sam was coughing at the higher levels were almost done evacuating.

Naomi looked at Cas. "Your powers are useless. Master fed me his darkness." She looked to Dean. "Lucifer will make you pay."


Cas sighed some. "What ever Lucifer gave you the is messing up your logic the fire is gone the only thing that remains is smoke."

Naomi moved at of the way swiftly. The fire was already starting and caught the building on fire. "My work here is done." She was going to flash away.

Sam rushed the people down from the higher levels. He notice the lower levels were going to catch on fire the most.

Cas popped up beside them. "You can't take the bracelet off, because Lucifer has to that or he has to get in the cage. I can clear up the fire." He said snapped his fingers.

Naomi lost focus and the fire went out quickly. "Master told me to burn the hospital down." She said with a smile. She looked back as she started to focus on the fire again.


Sam walked the opposite direction pulling the alarms.

Naomi started to think about the building on fire. She could feel the fire starting on a small bush.

"Wyatt we need to pull the fire alarms." Sam said.

"I want you to burn down that hospital you were just in." He said. Naomi nodded her head flashed outside. All she had to was think the building was on fire to please her master.


"She's outside." Cas said. "I think she wants to burn the building down." He told Dean.

Naomi was quick. "Bye bye." She said flashing to where Lucifer called her to.

"Hello my pet " Lucifer smiled wickedly everything was going as plan.


"Yes." He whispered softly. "Cas take us to New Orleans where ever they were." Cas nodded and flashed them into the hospital room where Naomi just left.

""He's doing good." Naomi said looking around the room waiting for something to happen. She felt a tugged. "Master is calling dor me."

Sam picked Wyatt up. "Calm down I'm fine. Naomi will be fine too. Cas is down stairs we can have poof us there rifht away." He whispered in calm voice.

Naomi moved her wrist back quickly. "Lucifer isn't bad and he will come for me, then you will pay."


Sam walked over to Wyatt. "Hey look at me calm down. Everything will okay. I'm sorry they took you. Naomi is going to be okay. We aren't going to let her be a puppet."

At the mention of Lucifer her eyes widened. She wanted to obey him. Naomi shook the feeling off, but then it came back. "You're going to pay for taking me from my master." She didn't realize what she was saying.

Lucifer smiled and gave Wyatt to Dean. Before Sam could say yes Lucifer frowned. "What do you mean she's gone?" He asked. One of the demons looked at him afraid. Lucifer disappeared not caring about Sam at the moment.


Sam looked at them confused on just exactly what happend. "Wyatt your dad must have broken Naomi free, but why is he acting this way?" He asked.