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Sam sighed. "You can go faster."

Naomi nodded her head slowly. "It hurts." She said softly. "Is it ok if I sleep." She asked softly.

"You're lying." He said with a wicked grin.

"You will find a way we always do." Sam said.

Naomi frowned softly some. Fighting to stay conscious. "How are you going to explain this to the hospital."

"If she is crazy then the darkness will take control then she can use the dark power for what I want her to do. Don't worry I have a plan."

"Dean I don't know we have a choice." Sam looked down. "I'm not going to let something happen to her like Jessica."


Naomi nodded and smiled weakly. "It hurts Daddy, is Wyatt with us? " she asked.


"Naomi has the power to do so much." Lucifer said.

"Things will get better. You do understand I don't know what's going to happen. I know there's talk about Sam saying yes."

"Daddy was I your biggest mistake?" She asked softly. She probably wouldn't remember everything clearly, but right now it was something keeping her awake.


"I mean if she is a live she will be a crazy person the rest of her life."

"Don't worry she will be okay." Cas said. "She's going to make through it."

Naomi closed her eyes. Her breath was becoming shallow from the blood lost. "You always take care of me."

"Oh she's probably dead."

"Naomi is in a fading in out of reality Lucifer trapped her in a vision of you in the pit" Cas said.

Naomi felt like she was going die. "Daddy are you alive?" She asked. "You don't hate me."

"The more you struggle the tighter it gets." He said.

"Naomi is with the man who raised her." Cas said.

She was so distracted from the darkness. "Why are you haunting me in your death?" She asked. "Are you going to make me feel worse?" She asked in a hush voice she wasn't completely there. "It hurts."


Lucifer sighed. "Just wait and see."

Cas popped on the back of the car. "Yes I know she's in Detroit."

The keys were on the floor. Naomi heard a noise. "Daddy?" She asked. "No daddy doesn't want me." She said mindlessly. "Don't hurt Dean."


"You doubt yourself." Lucifer said.

Sam looked at him and walked to the car.

Carter nodded and flashed him to where Naomi was. Carter left leaving the two alone.

Naomi heard noise. "Dean please don't hurt him." Her back was covered in blood and she was very pale. "Darkness everywhere."


"He's going to say yes in Detroit don't worry." He said.

Bobby nodded his head. "Be safe you two." He said he hope they didn't mess anything up.


Someone would save her. She whimpered again. Carter flashed near Seb. "You're waisting your time with those the demons are gone. I can flash you over there, but that's it."


"Sam is my vessel." Lucifer said. "He likes you and he will save you at any cost. Because when you get here you will be dying."

"Wyatt's dad is alive and he's going for Naomi." Bobby said.

Naomi screamed at the pain in her back. "Dean please no. Don't hurt him." Her eyes closed.

"I'm not stupid enough to tell you anything." He said.

"Okay." Sam said. "We need to hit the road now. Cas can pop in at any time."


"Okay." Bobby said. "I have to go, the boys are planning to go now." He told her. "Be safe there and hurry."

Naomi whimpered again. "I'm going to die." She whispered
to herself.

"Sam's going to say Yes, in exchange for you." Lucifer said with a wicked grin.

Sam saw Dean and frowned. "We have to go now." He said.


"Okay. I think the boys are going to Detroit right now. Wyatt has importance to what's happening." Bobby said. "You have to go get her out Seb, no telling what they did to her." Bobby said. "You are the closest and you can make sure nothing else hapoens."

The demons weren't paying attention. Lucifer popped in."You guys she's breaking free." He shook his head. "You're glad she's in a cage." Snapping his fingers to put a cage around her.

Naomi whimpered. She wincing at the pain in her back. "I'm going to die."

Sam nodded his head some. "Okay bye." He said hanging up his phone.

Naomi screamed he didn't hear her. She was so confused. She didn't know the really what was real.

"Seb you're alive. That's so good." He quickly explained what was happening. "The boys have an idea where Wyatt is, but Naomi is missing. We don't know where she is. Where are you? There has been numerous demon attacks in New Orleans and Detroit. Wyatt is in Detroit so Naomi might be there. The area code you calling from looks like New Orleans." Bobby was over flooding him with information. Everything was happening so quickly.

"Because that's where I'm suppose to say yes at." Sam said.

Naomi knew she was left alone because they lost interest in her. She heard Dean's screams. "Dean where are you?" Her eyes flashed and she was thrown into a vision she saw him calling Bobby. "Help." She shouted her dad said she could make a person hear her if she really needed to. She hoped Seb would hear her, but it wouldn't matter he didn't care about her.


Bobby looked at his phone. "Hello?" It looked like a New Orleans area code, but he could be wrong.

"I think I know where they took Wyatt." Sam said. "Detroit." He whispered quietly.

The demons kept muttering stuff around her. "Lucifer wants us to leave and go to the other one." They all thought Naomi was far too gone so they left her alone. She thought they said something about her father the person she called dad for so many years. But she wasn't sure though.

"Wyatt is on high alert. Lucifer says she's the only way Sam will say yes."

Sam nodded. "This whole thing was a trap and we fell right into it." He said angrily.

Lucifer disappeared quickly. Leaving Naomi in the cage. She heard someone fighting. "Dean?" She whispered softly and weakly.


((Okay))

"They took her." He explained quickly what happened.

"Don't do anything to her. Everything is at stand still." The demon shouted.

Naomi was so confused about everything. She heard Dean's screams as well as what was happening outside od her mind.


((Wyatt's dad sorry I didn't make that clear.))

((I was thinking it was her their dad who had been missing and he happened to be on a case full of demons.. I was wondering if you would mind playing the him.))

Bobby nodded running to see Sam on the floor. He quickly told Dean what happened.

The demon smiled at her. "You're sister." He frowned. "Guys wait there is something wrong."


Naomi winced not sure if she heard the guy right.

"I can't take you to the pit, but I can trap you in that vision you had of Dean in the pit." He whispered in her ear. "It's not going to hurt you." Lucifer said softly putting her mind in the vision. Naomi heard noises something was happening unexpectedly. She heard a familiar voice.

Sam heard his phone and couldn't reach he left in Wyatt's room. He winced at the pain. This was all his fault.

"Why are you standing there orders are orders make sure she sees her sisters torture." The demon barked the order as they rushed to do it. "Sorry if you don't care, this will probably hurt you a lot either."