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((Do you still want to do this?))

Naomi looked up to see Richard the guy who just got done flipping out on her not even 20 minuets ago. "The body is my friend Jane." She whispered softly not wanting to talk anymore. Tears fell down her face she wasn't cut out for any of this. Everyone made a fool out of her including this guy here. "We were going to go out tonight to this bar." She said in barley audible voice. What was she going to do now?

"I'm sorry I have to go." She wasn't sure if she should be alone. Naomi said she had to go, but she couldn't move from the spot she was in. Her knees was shaking some. Feeling like she was going to be sick to her stomach. She was a messed up person and this was her attempt on moving on with life getting her dream job and working hard. Then this happened.

If this case was connected to Chloe's case she would have to get the information from Richard, but how? She wasn't even sure if she could think of away right now. Inhale, exhale Mentally telling herself that as she forgot to breathe. "You have no right to ask me how I'm doing. If I remember correctly I'm a fraud." She said turning around looking at him. Her eyes were filled with hurt and sadness. This was a just dream she tried convincing herself, but it wasn't working.

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Ashton drove away for awhile not wanting to arrive there too quickly. "Ashley change of plans. My girlfriend found out about what I was doing so she had to go. Bad news is that was Naomi's best friend and she will be doing anything to solve this case at any cost. You have to destroy all of his evidence." He said softly. "Or we will both get caught."

This wasn't the original plan, but plans change. He knew he had enough stuff on Ashley that she would go down with him too. "You better do it now before he comes back." He hung up the phone as he drove back to the gas station. Pulling in yellow tape was surround the crime scene and there was multiple people there. Parking his car and then getting out.

"Naomi what's wrong?" He asked then he notice Jane. "No." He whispered, but he couldn't add the emotion he should have. "I'm sorry for your lost." He whispered softly to her.

Naomi heard Ashton he sounded odd. "Sorry for my lost she loved you too. After all you were her boyfriend." She whispered softly not really thinking about again because he was most likely in shock.

Naomi heard sister. "Dean I'm sorry for doing that I know I shouldn't have risked it." She was just telling him what she knew he wanted to hear. This was the only way she thought to herself. "All you have to do it is trust that what I'm doing is right." She said coldly.


"You're her sister it can't be hard to show her. Unless if you stopped caring" Sam said. He wish he could tell Dean the connection he noticed before it was too late. He quickly texted Dean explaining the connection.

Okay I'll be waiting." Lily said with a smile. She was really happy.

Jay smiled down at her. "I'm glad this will work out."

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Berwald ~Cannibal in the Making~ wrote: "Cheyenne wrote: "Berwald ~Cannibal in the Making~ wrote: "I never thought that one day I could trust someone with my secrets...

Guy A has been through a lot. He's done a lot of bad things. Already..."

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Berwald ~Cannibal in the Making~ wrote: "I never thought that one day I could trust someone with my secrets...

Guy A has been through a lot. He's done a lot of bad things. Already been through 3 id
entities, he continues to push his past ..."

If you still want someone I'm interested.

"Dean I know I'm not alone anymore, but I'm not use to it." She whispered.

"You have to show her you care." Sam said.

Naomi looked down. "You and my sister don't believe in me. You think I'm going to break. I'm stronger." She whispered. "I know this was a risky plan"

Sam sighed. "You need to believe in her."

Naomi felt Dean was disappointed in her. "Please don't be upset." She whispered. Pushing it back in. "I thought sinc I can fight it that it will work out."


"So does everyone else. Naomi is a good person." Sam said.

"My visions. I have to stop it and I can't." She whispered. "I can control it."


"Wyatt your sister is good and she can do good with her powers. Sam said.

Naomi looked at him. "I'm fine." She said. "I have it under control. It's the only way Dean trust me I can stop him." She had tears coming down her face. "I can stop Lucifer."

"I trust that she has a reason, but darkness is tempting and sometimes it seems like a good reason. We always figure it out." Sam said.

"Nothing is going on with me." Naomi said looking at him, but the darkness came out when she was trying to hide. "Just stop please trust me." The lights started to flickering. She knew she was playing with fire.

Sam smiled softly. He felt something changed in the atmosphere. "I think I know what your sister is doing. I did the same thing. I drank some Demon Blood to give me power because I thought it was the only way, but I was wrong." He hoped Dean saw the connection and stopped her.

"Not important Dean trust me. I'm not telling you about the vision I had." She snapped. "This is one of those visions you can't change." She pushed down the darkness.

"Everything will be the same soon." He said.

Naomi looked at Dean. "Nothing of importance." She said lying, but she wanted to protect him.

Sam nodded. "I know you do."

"No , want to try it." She said softly. "Can we get something." Lily asked.


Jay nodded her head.


((How about if her Uncle kidnaps her while he is in the bakery and Micheal thinks she has ran away?):

Lily smiled some. "Yeah." She said excitedly. She pulled him to the bakery she always wanted to try. "I want this place. I always pass by going to get...." Her voice trailed off.


"Why didn't you say something?" Jay asked softly.

Her eyes widened some. "Whatever." Signaling that she wasn't the same. She saw the future and she had to prevent that from happening and she thought this was the only way.

"Just relax" Sam said.

Naomi didn't speak at first. "I wanted to forget this little thing. That's a not big deal." She said. She was different more in control and she was tapping in the dark power without her father knowing.

"Yeah." He said.

"Because I wanted you to forget this incident. I wanted us to start over with this. Because you were upset." Naomi whispered.

"Soon." Sam said.