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Lilia quickly backed the frost away. "I'm sorry, every time I get angry or frustrated at you something happens. I don't mean for it to happen."


"There's no Max here, miss." The paramedic.

"There was a boy here , but left as soon as the ambulance arrive," an on looker said.

Lilia looked up at him frustrated and pushed him back with a frost. "You may have killed me to be a pawn in whatever scheme this is. I'll play my part, but I deserve to go where I want. Your not my parents"


Paramedic nodded. "We are going to lift you up on the gurny now"

"Why can't I leave?" Lilia asked. "Last time I checked you, you can't make me do anything that I don't want to do."


"Lay down for now." The paramedic pushed her back down gently.

Lilia opened the door and walked outside. She didn't know where she was, but it didn't matter. "I'm not staying here another minute"

"We have to take you to the hospital to double check" the paramedic replied.

Lilia sighed and walked away she was tempted to go outside and let out her frustrations.

"You fell on some ice. These past few days have been weird weather wise," the paramedic said.

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"I was trying to be sympathetic, but I guessed you don't know what that means" Lilia snapped looking at him coldly. "I can't believe I'm stuck with you." Cal confused her so much first he was serious and cold and then he was warming up and now he's acting all cold again.


The ambulance arrived and started to take a look at her.

Lilia looked at him. "Then act like you have them. I never said you didn't have them you just advoid them, by the looks of it." Lilia was making it colder outside. "For example I don't like you very much. You killed me and I may accepted your apology, but that doesn't mean I'm over it. You must be friends with the old winter? How did it feel to replace winter? Like your replacing your friend?" Lilia asked

Max swore as it was getting colder. Someone called 911 and the ambulance was on its way.

"Well, I'm sorry about the other winter" Lilia whispered, "But that doesn't say I'm going tolerate this chip on your shoulder. I'm a person with feelings and so are you."

Max heard some commotion coming outside. He grabbed his winter to jacket, to see what it was all about. When he arrived to what everyone was talking about it, it was Evangeline knocked out on some ice.

"Cal, why do you have a chip on your shoulder?" Lilia asked cautiously.

Max started to eat his pizza, which was then cold. He knew eventually she will get mad enough to confess about killing winter.

Constance looked up at Ms. Geroge and smiled. "Hi, Ms. Geroge I hope you get feeling better soon." Constance looked up at her and smiled softly. "Everett even got some mail, a letter from this place called Hogwarts. It's a fancy letter. I never saw a really fancy letter before, but this one sure is." Constance started to ramble some and Blake nudge her in a stomach and gave her a look to be quiet. She quickly shut her mouth and started to fidget in her chair.

Blake sighed and shook his head. It wasn't like they were hiding anything, but he felt that Everett should be the one to tell his mother about the letter, not Constance. He adjusted himself on the seat reaching for some cookies out of the cookie jar. Blake had a good childhood, his parents were happily married. It wasn't like Everett or Constance's situations where they either didn't see their parents or didn't know one of them. The hand pulled back out of the cookie jar and took a bite out of it.


((Sorry it took so long, also sorry that this is a short I'm currently on mobile.))

"No, I don't think it did." Lilia looked down. "I"m sorry," she whispered.

"Bye," Max whispered softly glad that she was gone. He gave a sigh of relief.

"What do you me by flow through me? Are you being quite literal?" Lilia tilted her head to the side.

Max frowned it had to be done.

"I don't know, I turned it off too quickly." She whispered. "I'm sorry did I do something wrong?"

Max nodded his head.

Lilia turned around. "I don't know, I was trying to wash my face with warm water, but it was too hot." She looked down sadly.


"I can't help you" Max said even he wanted to he couldn't because she killed Winter, but she didn't need to know that he knew.

"Nothing." Lilia said looking down and walking back to her room



"I can't. I'm sorry." Max said

Lilia felt a lot better. She walked to the bathroom and ran some hot water and splashed it on her face and frowned.


"Look, if I could do those things I would help you, but I can't," Max said beginning to think that maybe she didn't know that she killed winter or maybe this was just an act.

Lilia looked out her window seeing the frost. It started to snow.


"You're accuse me of doing things that are impossible." Max said. "Its getting late maybe you should leave"

Lilia drifted into a deep sleep awakening to an urgent feeling.


"You didn't see me fly and I can't turn invisible" Max said shaking his head. "Do you hear what you are saying?" He said looking at her. "That's just a bunch of crazy talk.

Lilia nodded her head. "Okay," She yawned some. "I think I'm going to sleep." Her body collapsed from exhaustion. She cursed at herself mentally because Cal wad right she shouldn't have gotten up too soon.

Max looked at her."Okay I'm listening."