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"Ouch," she whispered. "Why don't they remember me? What did you do?" she snapped weakly.

"Maybe we could meet again?" Max asked.

"No, they have to know that I'm okay. They left the lake without me, I have to tell them I'm okay," Lilia said not sensing his annoyance. She felt her reaction was perfectly normal. She sat up again , but felt a rush of nausea flow over her.

"Nice to meet you, Evangeline," Max said simply. He was investigating the murder of Winter and something about this girl seemed off.

Lilia looked at him. "What is that suppose to mean? I want to see my family."

Max felt bad for lying to her, but he couldn't take the risk of ruining his mission.

Lilia heard a boy's voice and jolted up. "Who are you and what am I doing here? My family, I have to go find my family."

"Harrison," Max replied.

Lilia felt heat go into her body. Her eyes started to, fluttered open "You guys came back for me," she whispered she was a little out of it.

Max smiled. "I should be going, it was nice talking to you though," he said.

Lilia's body started to float up to the surface. Her face was pale and her lips were blue.

Max nodded. "Well I hope, that maybe one day you can leave and travel," he said.

Its August 7th 1888 when the famous killings of Jack the Ripper began. No one knows who he is or why he is doing it. Girl A is young and naive even when the killings start. In the Whitechapel District there is a new guy in town. No one knows anything about Guy A. Guy A is demon. Guy is also Jack the Ripper. When Girl finds Guy A can she resist him. Can she believe he has a good heart? Or will she be his next victim?

I want to be Girl A
I need someone who can play that mysterious bad boy
I want someone detail
Remember I can only be detail if the other person tries to be or I won't get my brain juice working.

((Its okay))

Lilia hit the ice as she heard the boat moving away. Her family was leaving. She was going to die. Her oxygen started to diminish she could feel her body started to sink. A blanket of darkness covered her as she took her last breath of air.

"Any thoughts of leaving?" Max asked.

((That's okay))

Lilia felt her body hit the cold lake water hard. She tried to push herself to the surface, but soon realize that she was trapped under some. Her heart thumped against her chest as she started to struggle to breathe.

"You don't sound too thrilled about that?" he said softly.

Anyone?

It was like the ice was melting from underneath her. Lilia gasped knowing she couldn't move this might truly be the end. Her parents told to her to stay there and wait. Cracking noises started to fill her ears.

A small grinned appeared on Max's face. "I'm temporarily living here. I have some business that requires my attention, " he said softly. "What brings a pretty girl like you to this town?"

((That's fine :) ))

Lilia felt their boat shift down into the water. Her eyes caught her little sister on the edge of the boat and when it shift she fell overboard. Lilia made an impulse decision to jump into the water and save her as she pushed her sister back on the boat her ankle got wedged between some ice.

Max perked his up. "Hello," he said as he was turning around to get a look at the person who spoke to him.

They were going slower than normally because of the ice. If they were to go faster there was a chance that the ice would break and that could be disastrous. Already going a snails pace they hit a bump. "Is everything okay father?" Lilia asked softly. He responded with a shrug of the shoulders.

Max caught the eye of a girl looking at him, he gave a friendly smiled and kept walking. He learned to mind his own business quickly after several failed missions that he was sent on.

Lilia looks around the surrounding icy water and smiles. The crisp cold winter breeze blew in her face, as she stands on the deck of their boat. A smile played on her face as this marks the perfect day.


Max smiled as he was walking along the sidewalk. He felt like he had to be in this particular town, but for what that was still unknown. A gut feeling told him eventually it will be revealed.

Okay

Sorry was eating dinner.

How detail shall I be?

It's fine and okay I'll start

So who shall go first?

I just saw your reply I hope my character profiles answer your question :)

Person A
Name: Lilia
Age: 17
Appearance:


Person D
Name: Max
Age: 19
Appearance: