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Lilia looked up at him and smiled a little. "How do I know if its suppose to snow?" She asked.

"No I meant to your place." Max said.

Lilia looked at Cal. "This is what I hear, Sorry I killed you, but I'm not too sorry because I needed you to bring winter to the world." She shook her head. "I'm done trying to make you see where I'm coming from."



"You sure? I can drive you somewhere?" Max said looking at her.

Lilia looked down. "Sorry isn't good enough." She whispered quietly. Being near the warm air was making her woozy. She wasn't sure how Cal went into the cold air and stayed warm



Max laughed a little bit. "You're funny, I can't fly and I can't turn invisible." He shook his head. "I'm truly concerned about your mental state"

"It doesn't matter, you shouldn't have said at all. I'm not crazy, you killed me. How am I supposed to be okay with that? For a moment don't try jusfiy the means." Lilia said feeling the warmth hit her face.

"Um the Clerk obviously saw me because I got my coat" He raised his eyebrows. "Are you feeling okay? Why wouldn't he see me? Unless if I'm the invisible man, then no" Max looked at her concerned

Lilia walked to Cals room and knocked on the door. "Cal look I'm sorry I shouldn't have been that harsh, but you called me crazy and that really hurt my feelings because you said as if you didn't care that I was in the room"

"Okay, sure come on in" He sat the pizza down near his winter coat. "So what do you need?"

Lilia looked down and climbed back into bed and cried softly. She wiped her tears and thought maybe she should try to find out what's bothering Cal.


Max raised his eyebrows. "Are you feeling okay?" He asked opening the pizza box and taking a slice. "Want one?" Holding up his slice as he took a bite.

Lilia didn't mean to be harsh, when he said she was crazy that really hurt her feelings. Tears ran down her face as she wiped.

"Is something wrong?" He asked handing the pizza man the change and smiled. "Keep the change"

Lilia heard what Cal had said through his mind and looked down. "Please leave my room and not bother me" She stopped the snow and cold weather. "I'm not some object and I have feelings and I will not tolerate your cold heartless persona. Maybe you should have been the new winter. Your personality sure does fit."

Max opened the door. "Evangeline hi I didn't realize you were here. I ordered a small pizza. If i would have knew you were here i would have ordered a bigger size"

Lilia nodded her head. "Exactly, how am I suppose to control it every emotion I have there's something that wants to come out. I feel a rush of power and the worse part is that there's split seconds that i like it"




Yes, but you do realize that might not work on her. Max looked down he had to think of something. He swiftly move to his room and dialed the number to the pizza place ordering a pizza if the pizza guy saw him that would convince Evangeline that she was crazy.

Lilia looked up at him. "I am calm." She insisted to him. "Do you remember know how it feels at first? "



Cal she followed me. I'm going to lose my job this time. Max shook his head he really did it this time. He looked at the winter coat in his hand. Make her angry make her cause it to get so cold that this girl won't be able to survive.

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"You wanted Winter, you have winter" Then heard him yelped in pain and backed away the blast. "I'm sorry I didn't mean to do that." Frost begin to grow on the walls of her room. "I'm sorry, I can't do this. I can't control it."

Max made himself visible again and sat in his house. Praying that Evangeline didn't come to find him.

Lilia looked down. She pushed a blast of cold air towards him without realizing it. "You want winter so much. Here it is." With a flick of her hand it started to blizzard outside. "Happy now?"

I think I might be exposed, I'm going in hiding. Just make sure she doesn't get to the new winter Max thought as he started flying off to one his safe houses.

Lilia shook her head. "I wouldn't have died, I could have survived." She darted up. "You're the one who made the ice melt. You're the reason I fell through. When you made the warmth go away the ice quickly froze over trapping me under there. You're a murder, I died because of you." She accused. "You keep saying I'm going to save the world, but you haven't told me a single thing."

"Yes, miss?" The clerked asked tilting his head. "Is something wrong? Am I being too nosy?"

"Thank you." she whispered to Dove as she waited for her. Constance followed Dove into the townhouse and tilted her head to the side. "Hogwarts?" she whispered to herself confused by the name. She wasn't quite excited about the letter, it was just a letter. "Guys its just a letter, nothing important." he said to them. She hopped on the bar stole in the kitchen. "So Everett what does it say?" Asking as she glanced at it for the first time getting an up close look.

Blake smiled as he ran into the kitchen, though careful not to run too hard, not wanting to wake up Everett's sleeping mother. "I wonder what Hogwarts. I mean it could be anything really? Maybe Hogs with warts." He laughed at his own joke. He hoped up on the bar stole as Constance did. "It looks like something official, though." He said as he was thinking out loud.

"No because you didn't give me one." Lilia wanted to snap at him, but kept it in. The weather outside was describing how she was feeling though.

"Okay, I was just curious because you were talking to yourself." The clerk said, "Its none of business though."

Lilia looked at him and frowned. "Am I suppose to make it snow?" she whispered. "I don't want this Cal."

"I have to go." He saw a clerk coming her way.

"Excuse me, Miss, can I help you with something?" The clerked asked.

"It seems like you do." She whispered softly looking down. Lilia blinked some, "I feel it rushing through me." she whispered. "Like it has to come out, I'm not sure if its because of winter season."

"Yeah, its okay though, with my job we can't get close to people. I'm always moving." Max said.

Lilia looked at him. "You're right I'm not fine, my whole life was turned upside down today. When I close my eyes I see myself sinking down in the depths of the water hearing my parents boat off to died." She snapped. "You expect me to be okay with it. I'm not okay with this. "

Max looked at her. "I love the coat, I just got word that I'm going to be leaving soon. I found what my boss is looking for." He wasn't lying about it.

Constance looked down. "I never said she was dying, I just said I would hate to have my parents be sick." she lied, she would love to have her parents sick because she never got to see her parents. She stayed behind the others as they looked curiously at the letter. It wasn't like she was curious about it, she was, but it could be something dangerous. "I wonder who it is from?"

Blake ran up beside Everett he smiled at the letter. "Open it! Open it!" he said with a smile. This was one of the most exciting things ever. "You got a mail a kid got mail!!!!" Blake couldn't believe his eyes this letter was the fanciest thing he ever saw. "Whoever sent this must be rich."