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Dec 13, 2015 09:48AM

150761 "I never got any letter from her. And that's your fault." Naomi said. "You're the one who practically disowned me." Naomi whispered softly. "I don't know why I'm even talking to you." She hoped maybe that he changed, but she didn't see it.


"Yes." Sam got out of the car. There was no demons. This was a little too easily. He saw them in standing their. This was way too easy. "Let her go."

Lucifer snapped them back. "Fun is about to start. You can pass the word along to Dean about his precious Naomi." He smiled softly. "Hi Sam I think you know my prosal."

"Hand over Wyatt to Dean right now." Sam whispered.
Dec 13, 2015 09:34AM

150761 "You hurt my feelings when you said all those things. You changed my life." Naomi said. "You made my life a living hell. Wyatt wouldn't do that to me. She wouldn't toss all those letters I sent her. She wouldn't leave me hanging at the post office waiting for her letter."

Sam smiled softly. "Thank you."

"You my friend are messed up." He laughed. "Thanks for helping me even more. She's going to be a broken a pet"
Dec 13, 2015 09:26AM

150761 Naomi looked at him taking a deep breath. "It's all your fault." She said she wouldn't believe that her sister did to her. She wrote everyday that must have been at least 30 letters every month and she waited for her to reply. "You're lying Wyatt wouldn't do that. She wouldn't blame it on all me and act like I didn't care."


"Say you pronise again." Sam said.


"You know what let me show what she is saying." He snapped his fingers. "They can't see or anything, but you honestly have a sister who wouldn't you would do something like that. What made you stopped caring she obviously cared about you?"
Dec 13, 2015 09:08AM

150761 "You didn't give her my letters, you moved around every time I tried to get close to her. Every time I call you changed your number. How is that making her not despise me?" Naomi snapped. "Yeah because that helps contacting me easy." She was heartbroken.


"Ready?" He asked Dean. "Remember that promise you made please keep it. Start your life with Naomi don't spend every waking moment trying to find away." Sam said.

"Yes and she's going to come in handy. Your father and her are expressing their feelings. Is it really true that you didn't take the ways to contact her after she tried so hard to contact you. Wow." Lucifer said.
Dec 13, 2015 08:55AM

150761 Naomi flipped over sitting up. Taking a deep breath. "I would rather die then have been saved by you. You caused me so much pain. You made my sister despise me. You wouldn't let me come to my mom's funeral." She said.

"I can't get his exact loaction, but I do see a lot of reapers up here in this old house."


"I will tell you a little bit of information though. I turned that bracelet into a collar which basically means your sister is my puppet when I want her to be." Lucifer smiled.
Dec 13, 2015 08:44AM

150761 Naomi opened her eyes slowly her back hurt. She then remembered them whipping her back. She remembered that her father was alive. Well he wasn't her real father she thought. Tears ran down her face. "This is a sick joke right? Because if you think saving me when I was completely out of it will make things better then you are absolutely wrong"


"No." Sam said.

Cas looked at them. "We are getting closer."
Dec 13, 2015 03:35AM

150761 She heard her dad talking. He was missing. Her real father wouldn't be here.


Sam nodded his head.
Dec 12, 2015 11:08PM

150761 "She can go when ever you're ready to take her home." He said wand walked out.

Naomi was fast asleep wondering if this was a dream.

"We don't have the last ring. How are we going to get him in the cage" Sam asked.
Dec 12, 2015 11:01PM

150761 The doctor explained everything to him while Naomi was resting.


"Probably, but I will be in Sam." He said. "The best part about everything is that your sister thought this was going to happen in year. I tricked her so bad"
Dec 12, 2015 10:58PM

150761 Naomi closed her eyes drifting off into a sleep. They gave her some pain medication.


"So what do you think is going to happen at the final battle." He asked Wyatt.
Dec 12, 2015 10:53PM

150761 "Yes, but I don't need it anymore." Naomi said lying a little bit she hadn't really thought about it.

Lucifer was having fun.
Dec 12, 2015 10:46PM

150761 Then her eyes widened softly. "Dean says I'm addicted to darkness and there was a bracelet." She said rambling.


"It is going to be fun." He smiled softly.
Dec 12, 2015 10:37PM

150761 Naomi smiled softly if she was in her right mind she would have a break down.

"They should be here soon." Lucifer said with yawn.
Dec 12, 2015 10:33PM

150761 Naomi winced at the pain. "Daddy are you really here." She asked.

Lucifer smiled.
Dec 12, 2015 10:26PM

150761 Naomi nodded her head slowly wincing as they were stitching her back. "Where are we?"


Lucifer shook his head pathetically. "You're sad."
Dec 12, 2015 10:21PM

150761 "Where's Dean." She asked confused. Naomi felt her heart race they had her laying on her stomach.

"No you see I have to be thrown in my cage." He said.
Dec 12, 2015 10:12PM

150761 Sam sighed.

Naomi needed to start to calm down. "How do you know Dean?" She asked not knowing who she was talking to. .


"You can't you're just a hunter. I'm angel that can't be killed." He laughed in mockery.
Dec 12, 2015 10:06PM

150761 Sam nodded his head.

Naomi only saw Dean getting torture over and over again. "Please don't hurt him."

"Make me. You can't." He said.
Dec 12, 2015 09:59PM

150761 "We don't know that." Sam said.

Naomi's body was going limp. She could see they did to Dean in the pit. "No." She screamed softly.


"I'm so glad they are on their way." He said.
Dec 12, 2015 09:46PM

150761 Sam sighed.

"Daddy I'm tired." She closed her eyes not sure what was going to happen next. "No please don't hurt him." She whimpered.


Lucifer wasn't listening to her.