Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

OKAY, so, maybe while we're waiting for Ciara's History, we could brainstorm about the basic plot line? Here's what I think:

- There are 2 sets of all-powerful beings in the universe : The Light Beings and the Dark Beings
- There is this prophecy made at the beginning of time, back when the Light and Dark Beings ruled together in peace, that says something like when a child of dark is born to those of light and vice versa, they will do something to save the universe or something epically important like that
- Then, one of the Light Beings gave birth to Tynan
- And one of the Dark Beings gave birth to Ciara
- Ciara = day and Tynan = night
- Soooo they were like THESE ARE THE CHOSEN ONES and they (maybe the prophecy told them to do this) sent them off to some planet/place where they lived among the humans or something
- And then Fyn...what do we do about Fyn??


But yah, what do you guys think??

XD

Wowzers, Emma, you're good at this! XD

XD Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I have no idea...

(And then as a group we could all talk about/maybe edit a bit that chapter)

Well, I had thought we'd all come up with the basic plotline, and talk about each chapter before we wrote it, and then whoever's character's POV that chapter is for, that person writes it!

How's that?

This is kind of random, but I just had a thought I need to write down -

What if we started off the book/story with a prologue that shows the three babies being sent away, by the Dark and Light Beings?


(That was all)

Ohhh, yeah, that WOULD make more sense...

Hmmm maybe I could have Fyn be like 14 and a half, and Ciara is 16 and what if Tynan was 17? (idk)

Yeah, Tynan does seem like he'd be the oldest

LOVE Tynan, Emma! But what happened to the picture? *tear tear*

Yayness!

Huh, that does make sense, but thanks - Ella, any particular opinion?

Here, I'm just gonna go ahead and type it out, and you guys tell me what you think:

When Fyn was only __ years old, he was found by Mrs. __________, the landlady of the Browne* Boarding House, and brought in out of the cold. He was brought up by the different residents of the boarding house, or at least as best they could. They tried teaching him the basics, reading, writing, and bits of arithmetic - but, when he was eight years old, something terribly wrong happened. At a mere eight years of age, the Browne Boarding House, the only place he'd ever called home, burned to the ground. The only survivor - Fyn. Before the _________insert word for paramedics and stuffs here_________ arrived, he ran, and kept running, until he could go no farther. He was scared, cold, and wet from the newly falling rain, and had no where to go, no one to turn to. And so began his new life, a life of scavenging, stealing, and pickpocketing, a life of a mere street-boy.


That's kind of a rough draft kind of a thing, haven't read over it yet, but how does it sound?

Okie doke, yayness XD

Ellα wrote: "Ooh, I like that idea - but I thought we were going to put down the histories as the book went along, ya know?"

Oh....sorry I guess I didn't catch that >.< we can wait to do Fyn's history, if ya want, I don't mind

Ellα wrote: "Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Niiiiiiice - and that picture is like PERFECT for her


Kay, comin' right up!"

Yay, so it's how you imagined her?"

I don't really know how I imagined her, but definitely with red hair and when I was looking on google images for that gif for you, I saw all the different pictures and I was just like YASSSSSSSSSSSSSS

And how old should he be now? I was thinking maybe younger than the other two, even though living on the streets has made him act older....ya know?

(Oops accidentally pressed post)

Anyway, when would the boarding house burn down, like how old for Fyn? Because I think he should be old enough to quickly learn to fend for himself, but young enough to make him bitter... Ya know?

So, like when abouts would the boarding

Ooooh I like! Here...