Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

And for title....hmm...

Keeper of the Night
Maiden of the Day
Thief of the Stars

Hmm but I kind of like Prince of the Night, and then we could do Keepers of the _________ for the big title! (Too much like KOTLC? XD)

GASP

I just thought of something! Maybe we could name the different all powerful beings in each set after certain stars! (Or something like that)

Maybe something to do with stars, since they bring dark and light together kinda...like another word or something...

Nova
Supernova


Idk

Hmm...I think maybe it should start with 'The' and be more than one word and somehow tie in all three of the mini titles...ya know?

Woah, what??? I totally missed that!!!

Kay-o

But now we need to come up with one big title for the book

(Assuming Emma likes this idea, of course)

Hmmmm innnnterrressstinngggg

Oooooooh I like that idea, Ella!!!

Oh, idk - buuut it might be interesting to do a standalone

And then we could have the younger one, the one who doesn't seem to belong anywhere- not even in one of the two sets of immortal beings, the one who never had any family -

Be the one on the title. The Thief of the Stars.

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Idk. I really like the three titles for the three characters and books, too, though......

Hi Sara! Love your writing!! :D It's interesting that you don't use writing schemes in your poems, just wanted to say that XD

I honestly have nothing - Ella, any ideas??

Hmmmmmmm....

Yah, that makes total sense XD

Hmm yeah I see what you mean............*ponders*

I mean, YARG

I seriously think we should get serious about this book series thing (it could be the PUMPED writer inside me being WAY too excited all of a sudden) but I honestly LOVE this novel idea and REALLY wanna write it with you guys and maybe it'll even turn out GOOD and


I'm really excited right now.

+huffs+

OKAY WHEW

I was just on Shannon Messenger (author of the series I'm reading right now)'s blog for like half an hour and now I am READY TO WRITE WOO




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OH GOSH DARNIT WHY CAN'T ANYBODY BE ONLINE

Oooooooooh

Nice

A lot more original than my idea, also! (I feel like the two sides warring and the main characters having to reunite them is common ish)

OOH

maybe since the Dark and Light Beings split apart and stopped working together, something bad is happening to the universe, so it's Ciara and Tynan (and Fyn, but i still dk what to do about him)'s job to reunite the two sets of all-powerful beings and stuffs so they don't destroy like everything