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Name: Fyn _________ _____________
Pronunciation: Fin _________ _____________
Meaning of Name:
↳Fιrѕт: Scottish, "fair haired warrior"
↳Mιddle: Origin, "Meaning"
↳Lαѕт: Origin, "Meaning"
[ ↬ AGE ↫ ]
Cυrreɴт Aɢe:
Bιrтнdαтe:
Bιrтнѕтoɴe:
[ ↬ APPEARANCE ↫ ]
Pιcтυre:
(^Though obviously older^)
Hαιr Color: Dirty Blonde
Hαιr Leɴɢтн/Feαтυreѕ: Short and spiky in the front
Eye Color: A striking blue
Dreѕѕ Sтyle: After living on the streets for so long, Fyn soon learned that to live he needed to learn the craft of pillaging, and learn it he did. He's nicked almost everything he owns, and that's why his wardrobe consists of so many unusual items. He wears a leather jacket with a faded navy blue t-shirt underneath, old jeans he's had so long they're more than past their prime, he's usually barefoot since any shoes any shoes he's come across are either too small or too big, or are just not good for running in some other reason - when you live on the streets you need to know how to run, and need to be light on your toes. He also has a leather strap that runs from his shoulder to his hip, and on it he finds he can clip almost anything. Strapped to his ankle he keeps his secret knife he's had since his time at the boarding house, and most of even the boys of his crew don't know it exists.
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Oтнer Pнyѕιcαl Dιғғereɴceѕ (ι.e., ѕcαrѕ, тαттooѕ, вιrтнмαrĸѕ, eтc): Scar that runs from the inside tip of his forefinger down to the webbing between forefinger and thumb and up again to inside tip of thumb.
[ ↬ PERSONALITY ↫ ]
Deѕcrιpтιoɴ (Aт leαѕт 4 lιɴeѕ): Fyn's got quite the personality - he's definitely bitter, from all his time on the streets, but after a while he learned that if you let the past get to you, it clouds the thoughts of the future. So, he is sarcastic, funny, witty, smart, strong yet subtle, full of himself, selfish, one-of-a-kind, and an overall troublemaker.
[ ↬ HISTORY ↫ ]
Deѕcrιpтιoɴ (Aт leαѕт 5 lιɴeѕ): When Fyn was only __ years old, he was found by Mrs. __________, the landlady of the Browne* Boarding House, and brought in out of the cold. He was brought up by the different residents of the boarding house, or at least as best they could. They tried teaching him the basics, reading, writing, and bits of arithmetic - but, when he was eight years old, he made a decision that would change his life forever. He decided to leave the boarding house. To this day he still doesn't know exactly why he suddenly decided he wanted to run away, but he does remember
*Not necessarily the name, gonna probably change it later.
Fαтнer: Unknown
Moтнer: Unknown
Broтнerѕ: Unknown
Sιѕтerѕ: Unknown
I don't really know what to do with the History, any ideas?

(Tell me what you think)
First I felt there was a big gap on the whole 'star ppl' concept, so I decided to focus on that. So, who ARE the creatures/beings where Fyn, Tynan, and Ciara come from? Aliens? Gods? Immortal Beings from another dimension? Ooh, I seemed to like that last one, so I made an arrow, and built off of it. I came up with this: What if there were two sets of immortal....beings, that decide everything that happens in the universe- the 'Dark' Beings (don't worry, there would be a name change) are darkness, chaos, etc, and 'Light Beings' are light, life, etc.
And what if Ciara (light) was actually born to a DARK Being, and Tynan to a Light (and Fyn....idk) and since they were born to the wrong set, they were sent away or something like that.
Thoughts??

but I'll most likely be on again, if not later, then tomorrow, so BYE and talk more about the story then!
(And Ella, you better hurry up with making Ciara +squints+ I wicked excited about this story and can't wait to get started)

Okay, gotta admit, I think the name is cool
I just went to the group called 'Goodreads Feedback' or something, and there was a post about the visual changes for GR, and there were A LOT of negative feedback from members, so maybe they'll change it back, but I don't know..like, I didn't see one positive comment on it

Apprentice of Night?
I don't know... he is a Keeper of bi..."
Ah, yes...idk, what do you think, Ella?

+throws up+
WHY GOODREADS WHY
I HATE this font."
I kind of like it. I mean, Georgia might have been nice....."
Yeah...it's just the text in comments is just slightly too big for my liking


+throws up+
WHY GOODREADS WHY
I HATE this font.