Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

Okay, so this is the way I see it:

Once we get the Dark and Light ppl down, we should create the prophecy, then maybe make an outline of what the book is gonna look like (a rough outline, just to get all our thoughts in order and make sure we're all on the same page) and then make a more detailed outline of at least the first part, and then write the intro thingy


I was imagining the intro to maybe be like a scene from either when Ciara, Tynan, and Fyn were born, and each set of immortals figuring out what to do with them (with the Star ones the only ones knowing exactly what's going on, being sort of like the puppet master behind the puppets, just less evil XD) OR the scene where the prophecy is first spoken and created.

Ɛммα A wrote: "Man. I don't even care if this thing is half-formed, I want to write so badly.

#pantserproblems"

XD ikr

Ɛммα A wrote: "Ellα wrote: "Just as a side idea I think we should have a separate thread for the writing itself and this one will just be brainstorming and planning :)"

agreed. Don't want us digging through thes..."

XD yeah

Ɛммα A wrote: "Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "And we seriously need to figure out what the heckinater to call these guys we can't keep calling them the 'Dark/Light Beings/Immortals', ya know? Here, lemme make a lis..."


Hmm *tries it out*

The Light Deus and Dark Divus...but do we want them to be different? I was kinda thinking they'd be the same (second part) just to show that they sort of go together...idk, if I'm outvoted, I'm all for it, it was just a thought

Ɛммα A wrote: "Rubyfirewoods12=^.^= wrote: "Ooh! What if we tweaked it slightly, so the prophecy states that Ciara and Tynan have the power to either unite the gods/immortals/whateverness or destroy them both. An..."


Ahh yayness!!

Hi, Conner!

1. Yes, you're doing it right
2. Wow, you sure know how to stay on task, haha, I've been writing for a while as well, and I have yet to finish anything
3. Yes, by all means you're allowed to post links
4. It sounds really cool, I'd love to take a look at it!

Ellα wrote: "Just as a side idea I think we should have a separate thread for the writing itself and this one will just be brainstorming and planning :)"

Yeah, that makes sense, I think so, too

And we seriously need to figure out what the heckinater to call these guys we can't keep calling them the 'Dark/Light Beings/Immortals', ya know? Here, lemme make a list of possibilities:


- Light Immortals & Dark Immortals
- Light Beings & Dark Beings
- Light Gods & Dark Gods
- Light Deus & Dark Deus
- Light Divae & Dark Divae
- Light Deae & Dark Deae


I tried looking up immortal/being/god in latin, and Deus/Divus is what came up

Eh, eh?

Ooh! What if we tweaked it slightly, so the prophecy states that Ciara and Tynan have the power to either unite the gods/immortals/whateverness or destroy them both. And like Ciara was born to the Dark Beings or whatever and Tynan to the Light to symbolize that they can work in harmony and together they are stronger -


Ooh! Another idea! What if originally, in the beginning, there was no Light vs Dark and two sides, there was actually just one set of immortals, the STAR IMMORTALS, a mixture of dark and light. But then something happened to make most of them turn on each other and secede from the main tribe thingy, and go their separate ways - BUT a few still remained, and lived on, ever hoping that one day, somehow, their comrades would come back and the Universe would be whole again

-There are two sets of powerful beings: Light and Dark (immortals, and in short--- gods)
- The Immortals never worked together, but kept a harmonious balance of each element. AKA keeping to themselves and isolating their talents.
- A prophecy is made that one day there will be two very powerful immortals born to the opposite elements. These beings will have the power to be able to work together or destroy one another.
- Ciara = day and Tynan = night
- Ciara and Tynan are born and the Immortals sort of have a freak out, since they have never been associated with each other's elements and have no idea how to roll with it. Since they have no real desire to co-rule in peace, (or ask for help--- pfft how EMBARRASSING!), they send the two babies down to earth where they can hopefully forget all about the prophecy, and live like normal people.
- Fyn = stars.
- Fyn belongs to this minority of powerful people, in fact they're such the minority that the Dark and Light beings literally have no idea they exist. These people (a mix of both dark and light), are not very powerful, but they too have a prophecy that there will be one that will be the one to connect (and potentially) unite the majorities. When they see that the "chosen ones" have been placed on earth, they naturally place their chosen one in with them in hopes that Fyn will be able to connect Ciara and Tynan (if anything went wrong).



Okay, so, Emma, this was your idea, and I think that was what we agreed on for the main plot, right?

Oh XD Well I sort of just mentioned it off hand, that's all

Or less?

Ohhhhhhh I see I see XD Kay o that makes sense

Do you guys like the idea of 13 people on each set/council thingy?

Wait what, now I'm confused again on what you meant with your second to last comment

Here are some more:

Dark Beings/Immortals

Black - furvus

Shadow - umbra

Light Beings/Immortals

Star - astrum (Astra? Astar? Astr?)

Light - Lux

IDEA - what if each set (dark and light) had one like main leader person, and one could be named Lux and the other Nox

It's just an idea - idk just brainstorming here, ya know...we could have like 13 ppl on each set, so one main and six on either side....

And I like that list! I had meant to hop over to Google Translate, but just as I was about to I had to go

Ohhhhh - I had meant what if we name the immortals after individual stars, not constellations XD

It's Kay, tho

Wait what? I don't understand that sentence

Ooh that would be cool