Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

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Um...... well, erm, no trying to be bossy or mean or anything, but I was kinda next to do a contest.... It is in the contest suggestions page.............

Aaaaaand I was planning to do it after Sora's..... I thought that's what we were gonna do...

Buuuut if you don't want to have be do one... the one I've been waiting for for weeks, that I got ready, then, um, I guess I just won't... I guess you can just do it, if you want to cut in like that................ I just won't do mine, then.

Soooooo um... I guess I'll make a page for my contest...

I wanna do a rhymy one, now!

9. Buzzzz Buzzzz
Look! A fly!
Buzzzz Buzzzz
Grr go away, fly!
Buzzz Buzzz
Hmph.
Buzzzz Buzzzz
>:)
Buzzz Buz-
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TO BE CONTINUED!!!!

XD

I winked, and lowered my arm so I could eat my sushi.

"That's an almost - I would've been able to if we had, like, ten more minutes! I'd have beaten you to a pulp!"

But before she had a chance to answer, Paige and Aura's loud voices cut through the air.

"What do you mean, fight? Like, fight, fight? Fight for real?, I would think you knew she wasn't ready!" When I glanced over, Paige was on her feet, with Alex and Doyle on either side of her looking a bit alarmed.

"I think she's ready." Aura said calmly, sitting and eating her salad across from Paige.

"Ready? Ready? How can she be ready to go into combat! She's blind! Blind! How is she supposed to be able-" Paige was abruptly cut off when Indigo walked back in through the doorway, (she had taken a bathroom break), and said, "I know that. But I trained. I think I can take it."

Aura grinned triumphantly. "See? Even she feels she is ready!"

I scooted farther down the table, away from the two. Paige looked like she was going to explode. Her face was bright red as she opened her mouth to speak, then closed it again and sat down. She looked quite similar to a huge, red, duck.

"Paige," Indigo said softly, as she slipped down to sit next to Paige, pushing Doyle aside gently. In my opinion, she was doing quite well, she was learning to use her other senses to get around, and already it seemed she could get around the building as if she had her sight. I remembered how she fought me, and her admirable skill.

"Paige, it's okay, yeah, I don't have my eyes any more, but to tell you the truth, I have other ways. My nose, ears, and hands. Tools, Paige, tools! I can smell everything, my ears are sharper than ever, and I can feel my way around! I am beginning to forget the wonders of light, color, and shadows, but I don't mind! In fact, I think being blind is suiting me better now. Really, Paige."

Indigo had her hand on Paige's shoulder, staring straight at her. Paige started to cry, small tears leaving wet trails in their wake across her face. I uncomfortably noticed the table had gone completely silent, everyone sitting quietly, awed at Indigo's moving speech.

"Oh, Indigo." Paige gasped, and threw her arms around Indigo's neck, sobbing into her shoulder.

Indigo patted her back, smiling faintly.

Hmmmmmmm Yeah, I suppose we should give her the title, yeah.

Hmmmm lemme look -

Thank you!


And I just read it - IT IS SO GOOD!!!

Do you like writing?

Yeah, I was just gonna ask before I did it......

"Ugh, that obstacle course was horrifying! Carla was pounding me!" I said through a mouthful of sushi.

Carla smirked across from me, but then said, "Aw, but she wasn't that bad! Only about a hundred points behind me!"

I scowled. "A hundred? Yeah, I don't call that too bad, for someone who had never trained or fought in her entire life!"

Carla looked up, flabbergasted. "Y-you have never trained? But those monsters- at the castle!"

I shrugged. "Luck! I happen to be a pretty lucky gal." Then I dived into some croissant.

"Well, Em," Indigo said, "You were pretty good when you were fighting me! You beat me!"

"Aw, only 'cause I was a panther! Panthers can do that kind of stuff, it was instincts, not skill." I said, blushing. "And," I added quickly, "Carla beat me up in that fight!"

I grinned as I brandished an arm in a sling across the table at Carla.

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Marvolo! I think
*shrug*
a magic flute thing! It puts him to sleep!
*shrug*

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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I nodded over my shoulder at Indigo, and stood, my chest still heaving, in front of Carla.

what is gaje???

I glance over at Carla, who had just called me.

She beckoned me over, and I warily came.

XD


But still, Wander eye Moody?

"Enough."

I backed away as Aura walked up, and she pressed a pointy nail to Indigo's arm.

Immediately, Indigo seemed revived, and she stood up, brushing herself off.

"Er, sorry about that, Indigo.... I don't know what happened..." My head bowed, I transformed back into a human, the fur slowly creeping up my body, being replaced with clothes, until it reached my head, then it lengthened and became my hair, which slowly turned back to blonde, and when I glanced up again, my eyes were green.

"Enough training for today - it's been two and a half hours!" said Aura, with a hint of pride in her voice.

(But now i have some thinking to do XD)

(No! I will add on to it! It is a good idea!)

Maj wrote: "It's "Dwaaloog Dolleman" (Wander eye Moody)"

Wander eye Moody - XDXDXD