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Lol, I just heard this somewhere."
XD

nope, Sage actually...erm...above..commented...

Snow White's Daughter
"Raven! Raven! Get back here!"
As she ran, Raven silently cursed herself for being so stu..."
:D :D:D yayayay!!!

I'll admit, it was a bit confusing at first. I didn't know why Raven was running or to where, or originally who was the old woman. But, you solved the (why) problem in the end, and it isn't ..."
:D :D:D

XD wow, I don't even know my own story, do I?
Ya, she was the old woman in the end...


Your welcome. :) I loved how it was executed though. When you imagine Snow-White's successor you think of someone very similar to her. You portrayed a twisted princess where we expected some..."
:D :D :D thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did ya get the old woman? Who she was?

"Erin! Erin, slow down, kiddo! You're making me run! I'm not that young, ya know!" Dad chuckled as he climbed into the driver's seat. "You'd think you'd found someone from Florida in there!"
I didn't say anything, just slouched lower in my seat. Dad started the ignition, and drove out of the parking lot, carefully avoiding piles of trash strewn everywhere.