Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

XD Why are you in all caps?

:D

(yeah, just jump in saying that you've been training with the rest of us)

I glare at Carla, and lunge again for the balance beam, but through my anger, I slip and fall, landing with a most embarrassing thunk on the padded floor below.

My face red, I stand up and, avoiding Carla's smirking gaze, get back up on the beam. I make it only about halfway, then slip again.

What was wrong with me???

By the third try, I was almost to tears, and when I clambered back up on the beam - not all to graciously - I just sat there, glaring at the beam. After a moment's thought, I breathe in very deeply, and then let it out.

I stood and grinned. Full on black panthers should be able to do this.

(Well, we went to this place with Aura, a old hotel thingie, and you, me, and Julane are sharing a room (two bunk beds) and then we all fell asleep from exhaution and then we woke up, had breakfast, and now we are training in this training room Aura showed us.

Alice is in this room where you face your fears
I am on this sort of obsticale course
Julane is training with Aura to learn to fight with being blind,
And I think that's all :) )

XD

Thank you!

I'm thinking 16, 17, or 18....

(Julane)

I wipe sweat from my eyes, breathing hard. Two hours. Two HOURS! I'd been ducking, swinging, lunging, for two whole hours.

I was on a small obstacle course, I had tried to choose the easiest thing, since I wasn't very experienced, but it anything BUT easy. After half an hour, I was forced to turn into my sort of half-panther mode. My hair black, eyes yellow, and long nails didn't do much, but my panther instincts helped a lot to dive and duck from swinging poles, or scaling a skinny beam - I nearly died trying to do the monkey bars. Well, if you could call trying to cling onto furiously shaking bars, with random objects flying at you in every direction - I even caught sight of a fully sharpened sword coming at me!

I stopped for a moment, once again wiping sweat from my eyes. Everyone else seemed to be doing okay, but it was hard to tell through all the stuffed animals that had just been thrown my way.

"Back to work." I thought, as I flipped back onto the trampoline.

I edited it :)

If so, I guess:

(view spoiler)[

The Willow

and

The Flowers We See (hide spoiler)]

Aaaaand they have to be two different ones from yours, Sora?

Okay, so I pick two?

When I woke up again, daylight was streaming in through the window, and a fresh tray of food was positioned on the shelf in between the two bunk beds. I sat up, blinking. Upon looking around, I found that Paige and Indigo had already gone, and the beds were made. I quickly jumped out of bed, made it, and ran to the bathroom connecting to this room.

Five minutes later, I was out, teeth brushed, hair brushed, face washed, and bright eyed.

I grabbed the tray and peeked out of the doorway. Chatter was streaming in from a room a bit down the hall, so I headed in that direction.

When I entered the room, there were Paige, Indigo, Doyle, Kamiko, Alex, Salifia, and that Aura girl.

I sat down at the table, squeezing myself in between Indigo and Alex.

Cool!


But I'm going to move this to your folder, K?

(Er, I'm just gonna start that I'm with you guys, is that okay?)

As I walked through the grimy doorway, I grimaced. The walls were dirty and water stained, and each doorknob I could see along the narrow hallway was rusted beyond recognizion.

"What is this place, anyway?" I asked, glancing at Indigo beside me. Paige shrugged, saying nothing. She looked worn out. Indigo was hardly awake, so Paige and I were practically carrying her between us. I could tell Paige needed a good nights sleep, so I questioned no further.

The three of us slipped into the second room, where two bunk beds were positioned.

"Er, let's all stay in here, and keep an eye on Indigo - oh, sorry, I-I didn't mean it like-" But she didn't seem to have heard me, and as Paige and I carefully laid her down on the bottom of the right bunk, she immediately fell asleep.

Paige took the top bunk, and I was left with the choice of top or bottom on the bunk across the room. I chose the bottom, and sat down, staring at my toes.

"What a day." I thought, shaking my head.

And with that, I fell back and curled up under the blankets, fast asleep.

Ooh!!! This is really good!!! :D :D :D :D



Buuuuuut a tinseey pet peeve of mine... could I make you a folder and put this in your folder? That way you have your very own folder!!!

Lizzy wrote: "Ruby, I love your poetry! You should read mine on my profile or on Write, Wrote, Written or on Quotev, fanfiction.net or missliterati.com"

Ooh! Thanks!!!!

Okay, I will!

Hey! I have an idea!

Sora, if ya want, I can withdraw my poem from the competition and judge, too!!!!!!!!


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SUNDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!