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(What is the sharp pain)

(What is happening?!)

Eee, weird...




ooh! maj, we need you over in the just keep swimming!

We PMed you, but...

I slowly slipped from under her foot, and crept silently away from her. I kept backing up, until I was maybe fifty feet away.

I tried not breathing, but I nearly fainted, so I just crouched here, breathing softly, waiting.

After a while, a while watching Indigo twirl and look around wildly, flinching at every little noise, I saw it.

I saw what I was waiting for. She relaxed, just the smallest ounce, her muscles in her shoulders stopped tensing, and that ounce was just what I needed.

Then I lunged, jumping about ten feet in the air, and landing noiselessly only forty feet from her. I ran. Ran straight for her and in a split second, I was standing over her limp body, growling at her, who was on the ground, struggling violently, panic in her eyes.

XDXDXD yes, Maj, yes.

My eyes widened with surprise, as I lay, panting on the ground.

Gosh, this girl...

I leaped up, hoping to catch her by surprise, but alas, to my dismay, she seemed to anticipate my move, and quickly ducked out of the way.

Frantic, I leaped and pounced, now every ounce of my fighting ability being put to use.

Not good enough.

Once again, I found myself on the ground, this time with Indigo's foot on my panther-y chest.

Her blank eyes stared off at a point in space in front of her, not moving, and she was just smiling, silent.

I was terrified.

Erm, sorry, me again, um, ahem, could I put this in a folder?

*standing awkwardly while the inhabitants of this page stares at me*

Ahem, er, sorry......

I was about to protest, she was, after all, blind, but she moved into position and all I could do was follow suit and decide to take it easy on her.

WRONG DECISION.

She nearly pounded me.

I look over my shoulder, and see Carla continuing with the course, and I could see her smug grin from here. Well, I WAS a panther, after all.

Indigo looks only slightly ruffled, and I back away apoligetically.

"Er, sorry, I forgot you were....ahem.....nevermind."

I bound over and nearly flip Indigo off her feet as I lunge playfully in greeting.

I look up, my yellow eyes gleaming.

"ME! ME!"

( ;) I am so gonna beat you)

I glared at Carla, but didn't waste any time.

I launched myself up and onto the top of the bars, scaled the one bar along the top connecting the other ones together, and leaped down, but not before nearly getting hit by a cannoned pumpkin.

Then, full of energy, I bound down the beam light, trundle through the pines, claw my way up the tree, and leap down just as Carla was taking off again.

Hmph.

(hmph)

:D

17! 19! 20!

It starts about comment 861

Kmaefantasy wrote: "Zaynah {♥Edward Cullen♥...♥Tobias Eaton♥...♥Harry Potterr♥...♥Magnus Bane♥} wrote: "WERE U HERE WHEN I KILLED ALICES CHACTER...BY AXIDENT!)"

(WHAT?! YOU KILLED SALIFIA?!)"

Yeah, she got confused when Alice changed her name to Ace breifly, and thought Salifia was BAD, so she killed her, along with beating up Aura, and then thought there was a separate white haired character.

Alice was not pleased. She was actually kinda hurt... I don't blame her, though, but Zaynah now understands and is sorry :)

I growled delightedly at Carla.

This time I easily made my way across the beam, and them lunged, literally brushing her left ear as I leaped past.

Enjoying myself thouroughly, I bounded across the wooden, vibrating plank, past the swinging poles, and through the metal hoops until I was back at the monkey bars.

Upon glancing behind me, I saw Carla determidely doing the course behind me.