Ruby’s Comments (group member since Jul 26, 2014)

Ruby’s comments from the Write, Wrote, Written group.

*sighs*


Well, we'll wait for Zaynah, then clear this up.

OHMYGAWDALICEYOUGOTMEINSOMUCHSUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!AAAAAAAAAARRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Oh, okay then. But you didn't say that in the post so nobody knows that, either. Ah, I see now.


But we still need to figure out what happened, two of Zaynah's post contradict the other, which are we going with???

I did that one, I just looked back on it

I did do that one! I thought...

Oh wow. That's really long.

Okay, lemme get us back on track. Let's go back to the past posts:

This is from where it all started, and back to the present



Post #1914
By Ruby

I blinked my eyes.

I was in a small, stone room, with my human companions all around me. It seemed as if we were unlucky enough to be trapped.

I yawned, and stood, then stretched.

I looked lazily over to where the others stood, staring, mouths wide open. I must have missed something. Ah, well.

I settled back down for some more sleep. A panther's gotta sleep, ya know.


((((OKAY, SO HERE IS PRETTY CLEAR. I JUST WOKE UP, SAW OUR CONNUNDRUM, THEN WENT BACK TO SLEEP.)))))


Post #1915
By Alice

( :) )A:I lift up my head,my dark hair falling across my face.I smell blood,fresh,human blood.With the speed of light I race across the room and pick up the scrawny human with brown hair wearing a blue dress.I am about to suck her blood up when my creator says,"Put her down!You can do that later."I sigh inwardly and drop her,returning to my creator.


(((((HERE I BELIEVE AURA'S VAMPIRE KICKED IN, AND WENT FOR SALIFIA, WAS IT? BUT HER 'CREATOR' TOLD HER TO STOP. SHE OBEYED.))))))


Post #1916
By Zaynah

I crane my neck. The presence I vampire ha awoken te dark side of me. My black hair like a veil before to face i seek blood. I cringe under the light from the dying sun and them once the moon appears I hunt. I see aura and smile. "Good job Alleric. " he smiles. I walk to her and gives her my arm from which she drinks. "Hey aura. Your my foetus now. I control the way you drink as your first drink was of my blood " I turn and see salifia. "Join us and forever be immortal salifia." I see her face white with shock. Inside I know what I'm doing is wrong. But who cares. I did. And at the same time I didnt


(((((NOW HERE IT IS A BIT CONFUSING. APPARENTLY CARLA HAS HAD HER VAMPIRE KICKED IN, AND WENT OVER TO AURA TO HAVE AURA DRINK HER BLOOD. THEN SHE SAYS NOW THAT AURA DRANK HER BLOOD, SHE CAN CONTROL AURA. THEN SHE ASKS SALIFIA TO BECOME A BAD VAMPIRE, TOO. SUPPOSEDLY, SHE JUST DID THAT TO TRICK THE BAD VAMPIRES AND TO GAIN AURA'S SERVITUDE))))))


Post #1917
By Julane

(O.o *mindblown*)

I am angry. These idiot sparkly-Edwards think they can take my friends? I don't freaking think so.

I know what to do. I am going to try to pull off being weak and blind so that if I need to, I can take them by surprise.

"Em?" I say weakly. "I need you! I can't see."

(((((HERE IS CLEAR. INDIGO WANTS TO TRICK HER CAPTORS INTO THINKING SHE IS WEAK AND BLIND, SO THAT LATER SHE CAN USE THEIR IGNORANCE TO HER ADVANTAGE)))))


Post #1918
By Alice

S:"Hahahahahahahahaha-no."I said and backed away.

((((((HERE SALIFIA IS REFUSING CARLA'S REQUEST TO BECOME A VAMPIRE, AND BACKS AWAY))))))


Post #1919
By Alice

A:I turn to the female vampire."No,I have drank from a boy before you.Nice try though."I say coldly.I don't like her at once.She smells of humans.

((((((AURA TELLS CARLA THAT HER PLAN FAILED. SOMEBODY ELSE IS IN CONTROL OF HER, BECAUSE SHE DRANK SOMEBODY ELSE'S BLOOD BEFORE CARLA. SHE DOES NOT LIKE CARLA. )))))


Post #1922
By Ruby

I opened my sleepy eyes again. After looking around placidly, I stood and walked over to Indigo, rubbing against her leg as if to say. Totally get your plan. Nice thinking.

Of course, the human didn't seem to understand panther thoughts, and so she just patted me reassuringly and with pretend relief. Ah, well.


(((((HERE I JUST GO OVER TO INDIGO TO HELP HER PLAN))))))


Post #1923
By Mae

Freaky vampires. Freaky blood sucking vampires. Joy, it must be my lucky day! 2 of my friends standing with the enemy, and one being asked to join. I honestly don't know whether to make some vampire-sickles or try and reason. Either way, I don't want my blood or anyone else's consumed. Eww.

((((((PAIGE IS PONDERING WHAT TO DO. SHE DOES NOT WANT TO JOIN THE VAMPIRES, LIKE CARLA AND AURA AND SALIFIA WHO IS BEING ASKED TO JOIN))))))


Post #1924
By Alice

"You know it's really fine!go ahead,leave me behind!"I say."Buddies?"I back into a wall.


((((((SALIFIA REFUSES THERE AND THEN, BUT IS CORNERED)))))


Post #1928
By Ruby

I growled warningly, but the vampires paid me no mind and kept advancing on Salifia.

(((((I JUST GROWLED. YAY. THAT DIDN'T REALLY DO ANYTHING, THO)))))


Post #1929
By Alice

I reach for my sword to discover it's gone.Then I remember I can use magic.Hello?!"If you get any closer than this dude,"I point at Alleric."He is going to turn into a french toast face."

(((((SALIFIA THREATENS TO USE HER MAGIC ON ONE OF THE VAMPIRES))))))


Post #1930
By Zaynah

I lol at aura with disgust. "Your weak foetus. You have no stemware. You can still utter eh name of god. And yob can not fee without killing. Your in humane. Don't test my patience" I smirk and them stride off. I turn and see alleric pounce on a girl. I see the panther and she growls. I give the smallest minutest wink. She does what I think is a wolf smile and howls. The werewolf howl is fatal to any vampires. those who have new born ear well can live. So aura and I shall be ok. It'll take aura time to adjust although there is still a way for her to transform back.

((((((( HERE IT GETS CONFUSING AGAIN. I BELIEVE THIS IS WHAT HAPPENED: CARLA NO LONGER LIKES AURA. SHE INSULTS HER AND WALKS AWAY, THEN SEES A VAMPIRE POUNCE ON SALIFIA (OR WHOEVER IT IS IN THE GROUP HE POUNCES ON) THEN SHE WINKS AT ME, THE PANTHER, AND APPARENTLY SAYS I'M NOW A WEREWOLF AND I HOWL, KILLING ALL THE VAMPIRES EXCEPT HER AND AURA (THE WEREWOLF HOWL APPARENTLY BEING FATAL, WHICH MEANS KILLING TO ALL VAMPIRES 'CEPT HER AND AURA) ))))))


Post #1933
By Alice

A:I laugh,high and sweet."Takes one to know one."

(((((THIS POST IS JUST AURA INSULTING CARLA BACK)))))


Post #1934
By Alice

S:I gather a giant ball of fire and shoot it at the vampires's pretty face.He screams and falls.

((((( NOW SALIFIA FOR SOME REASON THROWS A FIRE BALL AT THE DEAD VAMPIRE'S FACE AND HE SCREAMS AND FALLS. I BELIEVE ALICE DID NOT FULLY UNDERSTAND ZAYNAH'S POST (EASY TO DO, TOOK SOME DIGGING FOR ME) ))))))


Post #1935
By Zaynah

I smile at salifia. "Nice one S. You've gotta teach me how to do that" my fingertips spark and I weave a web of fire and and flame and water around a group of vampires. I see the yes of a boy who was once my friend. He's longer the same Person I try to tell myself. He advances and I step back slightly disorientated. "Hey jake" "hey Carl" "sup" "oh nothing just a little blood drinking. " and he jumps in me. I scream.

((((((NOW ZAYNAH IS CONTRADICTING HER OWN POST, I BELIEVE IT WAS A WHILE SINCE SHE WROTE THE ABOVE ONE, AND IS FOLLOWING ALICE'S LEAD. NOW SHE IS GOOD AGAIN (APPARENTLY PRETENDING EARLIER) AND HELPS SALIFIA DEFEAT THE VAMPIRES, AND ONE OF HER OLD-FRIENDS POUNCED ON HER)))))


Post #1944
By Zaynah

I growl at jake. "Get off me jake" "why Carl. Come back I miss you we miss you babe" "jake it's over get on with it" " hey Carla. Please" I knee him in the stomach. H grunts. I snort and then punch him in he moth. He groans and topple over.

((((( HERE CARLA GETS HER OLD FRIEND OFF OF HER, AFTER HE TRIES TO GET HER BACK.))))))


Post #1945
By Alice

A:I clap slowly and race forward.I pull a knife and as I go by the little girl with silver hair,slice at her neck.She manages to move in time but I leave a bright red stripe across her shoulder.I'm tempted to say that the blade is poisoned but..oh well,best let her find out.I laugh hysterically and take a swipe at a girls's arm."Paige!"Someone screams but she falls,anther crimson stripe racing up her arm.


(((((( HERE AURA IS STILL EVIL AND STARTS ATTACKING OUR GROUP. PAIGE HAS FALLEN, AND SALIFIA HAS A POISONED CUT.))))



I hope that helped and cleared it all up - it took me a while to dig all that out XD


Phew.

Alice{Innocent at heart} wrote: "I already know what I'm getting you for Xmas rubes..............heheh"

O.O WHATWHATWHATWHAT

I love it! I just haz to figure out a bunch of presentss.....

(Alright sooooo what's happening in the rp???)

Oooooooooo cool!!!!!

((What exactly is going on in the rping????? Which side is Zaynah on and whatnot?????))

!!! Cool!!!

(ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay, thanks guys)

I growled warningly, but the vampires paid me no mind and kept advancing on Salifia.

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Good idea! :)



Have you gotten anything actually published before? Or are you planning on having this as your first one or something?

It's actually been my dream since I was little to have a book of my own published, printed, put on the shelves with MY name on them...... +sighs dreamily+

But, ah, well, my only problem at the moment is that I can't seem to finish any of the ideas that crop up in my head. Working on that, though! :)

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Love it even MORE!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

MAE, I HAVE TWO HOLIDAYS TO GIVE PRESENTS FOR!!!!!!!! CHRISTMAS AND AYYAM-I-HA!!! (my religion for the second one)

IT IS CARAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZYYYYYYYYYYYYY


AND MY MOM'S B DAY IS COMIN' UP, SO IS MY BROTHER'S!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sure! But aren't you also gonna continue it on here? +squints eyes+ You should. Lots of people should read it.