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XD XD

I added to the above post a teensy bit, btw

I let out a yowl, and lunge for Aura, but my ropes prevent me from getting anywhere near the calmly standing Aura only feet away.

Finally, I settle with just twitching my tail angrily.

Yes, but don't worry! He'll be known by his name soon.... Once I find the right time.... They'll become friends..... :)

!!!

The next few weeks went by slowly and without any apparent haste; I convinced Dad to go without me to the laundry building as many times as I could afford, without sounding hurtful, and I only saw Nerd twice again. Once in a grocery store - where I naturally immediately backtracked into a different aisle before he noticed me - and then once a slight glimpse of him riding down the street, when I was glancing out my bedroom window.

I spent most of my days unpacking boxes and lying around my room, being bored to death but refusing Dad's offers to find myself a good camp to go to. Camps were for little kids.

June turned into late June. I stayed away for the most part from the other kids my age that I met once in a while, laughing and hanging out, enjoying their free summer. Each time I glimpsed a group of them, I bitterly turned my back and did my best to ignore them. It was hard sometimes.

Finally, on June 21st, something worth taking interest in happened.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


Poor Maj.

:D :D :D :D


Coming right up!

CHAPTER FIVE

I spat out the few onions I had mistakenly eaten, and chewed slowly, a grimace on my face. A grimace, however, that was soon replaced with a grin when Mrs. Edderson waddled back over.

"Enjoying it, dear?" she asked pleasently. When she turned around I scowled at her back.

I took another bite.

Ugh, it was too much.

I spat it all back onto my plate. I stared at it for a while, listening to Mrs. Edderson humming a small tune as she washed the dishes, and feeling around my mouth with my tongue, searching for that last bit of chip that was yucking my whole mouth up.

Finally, growing bored of staring at the small lump of brown, chewed up nacho, I turned back around to tell Mrs. Edderson how I somehow had just grown very tired and just couldn't eat the rest of her wonderful meal. She had stopped washing the dishes, and as I stood to leave, she quickly whirled around and stepped away from the cabinet which she was apparently inspecting, rubbing her hands together and laughing nervously, began washing the dishes again.

Upon hearing my excuse, she plastered quite a fake smile on her face and nodded sweetly, allowing me to leave. I hurried down the hall, even though I wasn't the least bit tired, and sat with a thump on my bedroom floor.

Stupid Mrs. Edderson. What was she doing peeking into our cupboards like that! As if she was inspecting it for rats or something.

With a sigh, I flopped onto my bed. Well, hopefully Dad'd be home soon and Mrs. Edderson could leave. Oh, I couldn't wait for tomorrow. On second thought, I couldn't wait for any of the bit of time when Mrs. Edderson was out of this apartment.

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Ooooo I love it so much!!!! This is a really good story!

Just a bit of helpful CC again! XD

'Matty lead her down to a smaller building where she opened the door.'

Instead of 'lead' 'led' is the correct spelling

aaaaaand

'...she explained how hard it is to enter into a craft you didn't inherit by birth, and told Gwendolyn about all the possibilities that lied for a wood carver...'

Instead of 'lied' 'lay' is the past tense


Other than that - MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

MORE!!!!!!

I believe she meant 'such'

YAY!!!!!

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY I'm so glad it's readable!!!

:D I'm special

:D Nice!

XD yerp